Pyar ke doh deewane(pg 24 updated!!!) - Page 3

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Part 5

anum is at home watching the replay telecast of kkavyanjali as she missed it yesterday because sahil was watching cricket again.it was a really sad part and she started crying at the same time she got a phone call,she picks it up

Anum-(cryingly) hello

Sahil-arre anum kya hua tum rorahi ho

Anum-sahil I love kavya why cant he come back

Sahil-(angry)anum whose this kavya and I thought you were in love with me to yeh stupid sa kavya kaha se agaya

Anum-sahil mer kavya ko stupid mat bulao okay,tumhe pata hai drama mein kavya anjali ko chorke chalagaya.

Sahil-what drama,thank god it's a drama I thought and anyway anum why r u watching these boring dramas.

Anum-shut up sahil aur batao kyun phone kiya,u were missing me

Sahil-ha aur kya tum ek favour karsakti ho

Anum-kya

Sahil-check the score for me

Anum-what!!isliye phone kiya,sahil I hate you arghhh

She puts the phone down and carries on watching the drama when the phone rings again.she picks it up

Anum-hello

Sahil-sorry

Anum-tum phirse

Sahil-kya anum maine kaha na im sorry

Anum-tik hai

Sahil-anum aj raat dinner pe chalogee

Anum-really

Sahil-really

Anum-ofcourse

Sahil-anum can you check the score now

Anum-fine

She tells him the score

Sahil-thanks I love you

Anum-okay bye

She is about to settle down and watch kkavyanjali then the phone rings again

Anum-hello

Sahil-unum you didn't say it back

Anum-say what

Sahil-I said I love you,you didn't say it back

Anum-sahil

Sahil-anum

Anum-okay I love u too bye

She blushes and puts the phone down,that's when the phone rings again

Anum-yeh sahil phirse,ab mein chilaoongi

She picks it up

Anum-ab kya!!

Guy-hello,anum its me laksh

Anum-omg laksh tum,omg how r u

Laksh-im fine

Anum-hows America

Laksh-it was fine

Anum-was what do you mean

Laksh-well im back in india

Anum-wow that's great

Laksh-anum can I ask you a favour

Anum-sure

Laksh-well you see I don't have anywhere to stay so can I come down your place in nainatal

Anum-no no

Laksh-but why

Anum-I mean I don't live ther anymore im in Mumbai,here write the address,she gives him the contact and puts the phone down.we now see laksh smiling to himself.

Laksh-(to himself)after 3 years ill get to meet you anum,you always said you wanted to marry a successful man and Ive become a successful man,ill finally get you.gosh I love you anum.

While that happens we go back to the academy,Kripa and angad have just entered class,everyone whistles.then we see Angads best friend standing on the table.he is a strong tall muscular handsome figure,we see his face,its josh.

Josh-okay everyone Angads got a new girlfriend and shes also new to the academy,whats ur name

Angad-her names Kripa

Josh-yes Kripa and we sh*t teacher

Everyone turns to find Mr Nasser looking angrily at josh.

Mr Nasser-josh why r u standing on the table

Josh-vo sir I was practising our song

Mr Nasser-song is that so why don't you sing 4 me

Josh-abhi

Mr Nasser-ha abhi go on

Angad-(whispers to Kripa)vo to gaya

Mr Nasser-comeon josh im waiting

Josh-Anda Anda Anda Anda Hum Sab Ne Dekha Hai Kahi Baar Dekha Par Kya Kabhi Socha Hai Is Ande Ka Funda HaiYeh Kitna Gehra Hai Is Takle Sar Ke Ander Ek Brain Sunehra HaiYeh Kuch Samjaata Hai Yeh Kuch Sikhlaata HaiZara Gaur Se Suniye Ga Hum Gaa Ke Sunata Hai Anda Anda Anda Anda Anda Anda Anda Anda Aao Sikhao Tume Ande Ka Funda Yeh Nahin Pyare Koi Maamule BandaAao Sikhao Tume Ande Ka Funda Yeh Nahin Pyare Koi Maamule Banda Josh was about to carry on when mr Nasser looked at him angrily Mr Nasser-PRINCIPALS OFFICE NOW Josh-lekin Mr Nasser-now!!!! Josh goes and mr Nasser says josh is out of the project so Kripa can take his place and be partners with angad.angad tells Kripa to meet him at the canteen at lunch.at lunch Kripa goes to the canteen and sees angad waiting for her,she goes and sits opposite him. Kripa-(smiles)hey angad Angad-(kisses her on the cheek)hey sweety Her smile turns in to a angry scowl Kripa-angad tum(points her finger) Angad holds her hand Angad-mein kya Kripa Kripa-angad mera hath chodo Angad-(whispers)people r looking Kripa Kripa-to mein kya karoon Angad-kripa u agreed to pretend Kripa-yeah I did but iska matlab yeh nahin ke tum jo chaho vo karoAngad-okay sorry pls relax Kripa-main tughe maaf nahin karoongi Angad-kyun Kripa-tumhe bhi saza milegee Angad-saza Kripa-ha saza aur tumhari saza yeh hai ke tum mughe icecream lekar ao Angad-icecream oh that's easy maine to socha Kripa-angad tum icecream latte ho ya shall I change the punishment and make you hoover the whole house when we get Home Angad-okay okay He goes and gets icecream while 2 girls come running to Kripa. Girl1-ure so lucky Girl2-I wish I was you Kripa-kyun Girl1-ure asking us hello youre going out with angad Girl2-the hottest guy alive Kripa-(fake smile)of course im very lucky The girls see angad coing back Girl1-okay well go nowGirl2-have fun They laugh and go,angad gives Kripa the icecream and sits down. Kripa-oh god Angad-kya hua Kripa Kripa-those girls done my head in Angad-kyun kya kaha tumse Kripa explains Angad-sahi to kehrahe Kripa-(sarcasm)I know im so lucky,(stomps on Angads foot)my foot im lucky Angad-oww Kripa that was my foot not yours Kripa-shut up angad,oh yeah we have to do our project Angad-we got all day,abhi tum icecream khao Kripa-great idea Starts eating icecream while angad kept staring at her Kripa-angad aisa kya dekhrahe ho Angad-u look so cute when you eat icecream Kripa-(blushes abit)thanks Angad-and you look even more cute when you blush Kripa-shutup angad Kripa finishes eating her icecreamans angad and her decide to go at the outhouse were none will disturb them so they can practise on there project.after practising they sit down. Angad-kripa im hungry Kripa-to what shall I do Angad-cook something Kripa-eh hello im not your nokar Angad-kripa I asked nicelyKripa-fine but I cant cook Angad-ill help They go in the kitchen,angad goes to the coupbord and gets the atta.he then gives it to Kripa. Angad-yeh lo Kripa-iske main kya karoon Angad-I don't know,anum bhabhi normally makes roti with it Kripa-u do it She passes it to angad,angad gives it back Angad-uThey keep passing it back and forward until the atta dropped. Angad-KRIPA!! Kripa-what its not my fault Angad-now what Kripa-angad why cant we just get a pizza Angad-I suppose They order a pizza while waiting 4 the pizza angad puts a horror movie on,Kripa gets scared when she hears the bell and clings on to angad. Angad-kripa daro mat it's the pizzaKripa-(embarrassed and lets go)I knew that Angad-sure u did Angad goes to get the pizza while Kripa changes the channel and puts it on kyph,angad comes back and sits down,he turns to the tv expecting the horror movie on but instead he sees a girl crying looking at some photo. Angad-kripa wats this Kripa-angad this is kaisa yeh pyar hai,it's a wicked drama Angfad-drama no I cant watch this emotional cr*p pls change it Kripa Kripa-lekin angad,iqbal khanis in it Angad-who is iqbal khan Kripa-omg hes gourgeous,he plays a rockstar in it and basically(she explains the whole story)I cant wait for them to reunite Angad-how can you watch this Kripa,I mean its so boring That's when Kripa screams Angad-wat wat happened Kripa-angad iqbal look Angad looks at the tv and sees iqbal khan singing fanaa Angad-he so copys my style Kripa-what did you say Angad-well look at his chains,his hair,his clothes,hes such a copycat Kripa-angad Angad-kya Kripa-shutup,iqbal is hot,I love his voice,omg his amazing eyes Angad-so im hot,I have an amazing voice and I have amazing eyes. Kripa-angad tum na bilkul paagal ho Angad-pata hai isliye tumhare saat goomra hoon Kripa-haha very funny Angad- I know They both fight abit more and then go back to the khannah mansion wher there see a guy on the sofa chatting to anum,anum notices Kripa and angad Anum-hey guys meet laksh Kripa is shocked to see him Preview-why is Kripa shocked?-laksh finds out Anums marries how will he react?

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Part 6

Kripa got worried if laksh would recognise her, laksh thought she looked familiar but couldn't remember.

Kripa-(thinks) God I hope laksh doesn't recognise me

Laksh- So Anum introduce me

Anum- This is my little sister Kripa

Laksh- Kripa sounds familiar anyways hi I am laksh

Kripa-(relieved) Hi

Anum- And this is my devar Angad

Laksh- Matlab

Anum- Yeh mera pati ka bhai hai

Laksh- Kya (shocked, tear well up in his eyes) tumne shaddi karli

Anum- Haan Sahil seh remember you introduced him to me in college well when you left I became good friends with him and gradually I realised I was in love with him so we got married.

Laksh- Anum tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahin

Anum- kaise batati, ur the one who said until you don't become successful, I cant ring or try to visit you.

Laksh- true, Anum I am pretty tired, is my room that way

Anum-yep its that way, I'll call you when dinners ready

Laksh-sure

Laksh goes in to his room and opens his suitcase he takes out a ring and some photos of him and Anum he gets out his lighter and burns all the photos.

The background song plays-

Zindagi is tarah se lagne lagiRang ud jaaye jo deewaaron seAb chhupaane ko apna kuch na rahaZakhm dikhne lage daraaron seAb talak sirf tujhko dekha thaAaj tu kya hai yeh bhi jaan liyaAaj jab gaur se tujhe dekhaHum galat the kahin yeh maan liya - 2Teri har bhool mein kahin shaayadHum bhi shaamil hain gunahgaaron seAb chhupaane ko apna kuch na rahaZakhm dikhne lage daraaron seAa mere saath milke hum phir seApne khwaabon ka ghar banaate hainJo bhi bikhra hai voh samet te hainDhoondkar phir khushi ko laate hain - 2Bojh to zindagi ka kat ta haiEk duje ke hi sahaaron se Zindagi is tarah se lagne lagiRang ud jaaye jo deewaaron seAb chhupaane ko apna kuch na rahaZakhm dikhne lage daraaron se

While that happens we see Kripa in the room looking at some college photos

K- Kyun Sameer, tum mere sab se acha dost teh to phir tumneh aisa kyun kiya.

K- Laksh yaha hain to kya iska matlab hain ki sameer bhi Mumbai mein hain, mujhe patah lagana hoga

Angad at this point comes into the room

A- Hi sweety

K- Angad tum plz yaha seh joa

A- (Puts his arm around her) Kyun mein tumhaara boyfriend hoon na

K- Angad shayad tum bol rahe, yeh sirf ek natak hain tum plz yahaan she joa

A- No Kripa u haft to come with for a drive

K- Angad I don't want to go

A-(Grabs her arm) come on Kripa u haft to

K- (she pushes his hand away) enough what do u think of urself pehela tum mera kamreh mein athe ho knock karneh keh bagair mujhe tumhare saat nahin janah agar tumhe janah hain toh akelah joa aur haan agali baar mera kamreh mein knock kar keh anah

A- Tike hain Kripa agar tumhe nahiye janah toh maat joa mein toh aise keh raha tha we are friends isliye

K- Angad mein

Before she could finish Angad had left

K- (To herself) Oh no yeh maine kya keh diya Angad seh mujhe maafi magni chahiye

Kripa goes to Angads room where shes sees Angad punching the punch bag angrily, Kripa gets a bit scared

K- Angad

A- (Looks at her angrily) Kya

K- Woh (he looks at her more angrily) kuch nahiye

She goes outside

K- (To herself) No I haft to do this come on Kripa

She goes back in but doesn't look at Angad, she looks straight down on the floor with a worried face

K- (Says it quick) Angad maine room main joh bhi kahaan usse keh liye sorry I didn't mean any of it. It's just that I was in a bad mood I am really sorry

Angad smiles at Kripa coz she looks so scared. Kripa looks up to see Angad smiling and she also smiles.

A- (Sternly) Tum kyun muskara rahiye ho, is this a joke to u

K- (Quickly gets scared and stops smiling) I am sorry mein janthi hoon keh (interrupted)

A- Ek minute Kripa yahaan aoa

Kripa walk to Angad, Angad looks at her innocent eyes. Angad smiles, Kripa doesn't know if she should smile because she wouldn't want Angad to shout at her again so she doesn't say anything.

A- Kripa u can smile

She starts smiling

A-(yells) Itnah bhi nahiye

She quickly gets back to a sad face

Angad starts laughing, he hugs her

A- Kripa u are too funny

K- Huh matlab tum mujseh naraaz nahiye ho

A- Ofcourse not

K- Thanks u

A- Well I had fun

K- Matlab

A- Matlab ki I had fun making a fool of u

K- Angad I hate u

A- I love people who hate me

K- arrghh (she goes)

A- (Shouts) Hey Kripa Sharma what about our drive?

K- Get lost

At dinner, Kripa takes the opportunity and asks Laksh

K- So tum Mumbai mein akelah aiye ho

L- Well my sister is already here she lives at the hostel in her college and my brother sameer is in America

K- Oh ok (to herself) Thanks god

Anum comes downstairs she is wearing a lovely pink sari

An- Laksh hows ur sister haven't seen her in ages

L- Simones fine

Angad hears Simones name and his face turns blank

An- Ok u guys eat

L- Kyun Anum tum nahiye koaghi

An- No I am waiting for Sahil hes taking me out for dinner

L- Ok (to himself) Jitnah khush chahein ho loh mein yeh sari khushiyaan chine loongah agar maine tumhe ause Sahil seh alag nahiye kiya toh mera naam bhi Laksh nahiye

Preview- WHOS SIMONE? WHY DID ANGADS FACE GO BLANK BY HERAING HER NAME?

WILL LAKSH BE SUCCESSFUL IN HIS PLAN?

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