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I like these characters because they're very private characters. Yet they seem so accustomed to each other's lives. With Khushi and Arnav, you could barely see any conversation, but you could see so many emotions playing in their eyes. Words are not needed, and sometimes that's better.
Your story is so close to our actual lives- I don't see that much of a difference. We all fall for someone in one way or another, maybe just for their compassion or for that one smile... and it's impractical to be with them for that one characteristic. Yet, the heart never stops beating...
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