Chasing Dreams Thd2- CHP18 PG129 Thd 3 link pg 148

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

You made me fall in love with London again.

Now this was one of my favorite chapters. Where Khushi was handling everything 'new', Arnav was also struggling with those deep, 'strange' feelings. They both, for so many reasons, are on the same boat.
And I absolutely adored the ending line. The peace was so palpable.
Can't wait for next one!

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

N_B you hate me! Admit it!

How can you otherwise explain K being the 1st to comment always when I am not even on the 1st pg???

There are so many things I liked about the update.

The first one being the light and breezy way in which you write. I can relax myself and read, yet when it comes to Arnav and Khushi you make me anticipate so deliciously, it is not even funny...

Khushi's first peck on her lips was NOT from Arnav 😔

They are alone in the apartment can I have the first mouth kiss by him please? Yes, I am desperate! 😉

I love to travel and I am touched that Arnav saw to it that Khushi experiences London while here.

Arnav mujhe bhi holiday le chalo! Plsss! And I promise I won't even hit on you like your annoying exes 😛

It is just not about being from a small town. It is about physical comfort. And the problem is Khushi and Arnav are immensely attracted to each other. How are you supposed to control that in such close proximity?

I am loving what you are doing with ArHi here. It is so gradual.

PS: You are NOT sucking at writing at all! I know what it feels like since I am doing that to FS...

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nightfury

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

u took us to a free trip to london 😆
awesome update

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Manisha.

@Manisha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Yeah, I caught the update before the PM...and I had been waiting for so long...

It was a great start to their trip...right from the snuggle in the flight till the chat post dinner...

Seems like NK is a good guy..but I don't like them getting close...blame it on resistance to change...

I want Arnav to be extremely proud of Khushi's work...

And last but definitely not the least, i am so excited that the are sharing the room...

5 more days to go...excited to know what's in store...

Please update sooner...

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Beautiful!!!

Khushi's excitement about her first business trip was so palpable...NKay-Khushi relationship is progressing and I am glad that she is comfy around him, now...

The misconstrued fact of sharing the apartment ..Arnav's annoyance and, Khushi apologising, aptly penned...am glad, they reacted the way, I would have anticipated... very much in their character...

I agree London is captivating during autumn...the tourists spots and the minutiae... Fabulous...applause !!

Am loving the way you are bringing out .the little nuances of A &K, and, how the close proximity is affecting them, gradually...

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shivanisaur

@shivanisaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

I loved this chapter! The small developments in the dynamics of Arnav's and Khushi's relationship was pleasant to read..
The story is now well on its way and is a riveting read!
Thank you for the pm!

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

I think we will have the eternal London vs Paris fight as I believe London is beautiful but can't beat Paris. You described London beautifully . It is normak for a small town Girl not to be comfortable with their living arrangement. They are taking their time but slowly coming closer. Hope you update the next part soon.