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Posted: 12 years ago
NAACH B ...YOUR UPDATE REMINDED ME OF THIS SONG

DHEERE DHEERE PYAR KO BADHANA HAI HADD SE GUZAR JAANA

HAI

THIS WAS SO MATURE

THEY BOTH ACTED SO NORMAL

KHUSHI WAS INITIALLY TAKEN ABACK BY THE IDEA OF SHARING

THE APARTMENT

BUT PROFESSIONALISM BROUGHT HER TO LIVE UNDER THE

SAME ROOF WITH HIM

HE WAS RUDE WITH HER

THEY ARE SHARING A VERY DELICATE RELATIONSHIP ...

WHICH IS ON THE VERGE OF SNAPPING ANYTIME AND MIGHT

BRING THEM CLOSE

BOTH ARE PERFECT IN THEIR OWN WAY

BOTH ARE LIVING IN THEIR OWN WORLDS OF SIMPLICITY AND

COMPLEXITY

THEIR WORLDS ARE DIFFERENT YET THEY EXCEL LIVING IN

THEM

SUPER AWESOME WAY OF WRITING


THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME ALERT





KKKA


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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting always give its good benefits, the chapter you gave was excellent. Why the age difference matter, want to see whether the age is going to matter or not.
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Posted: 12 years ago
lets see what this trip does to Arnav and Khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update very interesting
continue soon please and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

N_B you hate me! Admit it!

How can you otherwise explain K being the 1st to comment always when I am not even on the 1st pg???
There are so many things I liked about the update.
The first one being the light and breezy way in which you write. I can relax myself and read, yet when it comes to Arnav and Khushi you make me anticipate so deliciously, it is not even funny...
Khushi's first peck on her lips was NOT from Arnav 😔
They are alone in the apartment can I have the first mouth kiss by him please? Yes, I am desperate! 😉
I love to travel and I am touched that Arnav saw to it that Khushi experiences London while here.
Arnav mujhe bhi holiday le chalo! Plsss! And I promise I won't even hit on you like your annoying exes 😛
It is just not about being from a small town. It is about physical comfort. And the problem is Khushi and Arnav are immensely attracted to each other. How are you supposed to control that in such close proximity?
I am loving what you are doing with ArHi here. It is so gradual.
PS: You are NOT sucking at writing at all! I know what it feels like since I am doing that to FS...



FS ke baare main kuch bura math kehna dammit. Samjhi tum!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

I think we will have the eternal London vs Paris fight as I believe London is beautiful but can't beat Paris. You described London beautifully . It is normak for a small town Girl not to be comfortable with their living arrangement. They are taking their time but slowly coming closer. Hope you update the next part soon.



I love Paris too, but since I live in London Im a little partial to it. Which city can beat a walk down one of the lanes in Paris complete with some coffee and cake from one of the local patisseries?
Edited by Naach_Basanti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
a very nice update.
its so sweet of arnav to get the taxi driver to drive past famous London sights for khushi, i can just imagine khushi's excitment for visiting one of the most popular cities in the world for the first time.
so they are starting to get attracted to each other, hope the fall in love before returning back home.
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Posted: 12 years ago
NB This chapter is awesome 👍🏼 Arshi alone 😉
Next chapter Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
Awesome
continue soon
thnx for d pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
you updated! yay am doing a jig around my room! 😆
but i am 12 pages late boohooo 😭😭😭
NB!!how are you able to write this way??
your words and the way you write makes me feel like i am floating in the air
its just such a light feeling and at the end of the update i am left with a smile that does not leave me at all!
coming back to the story...why are you hell bent on scaring me with Khushi and NK's growing closeness and her first kiss is NK??!! just how is that possible 😭
i love travelling and the parts where you described about Arnav's various adventures seem sooo ethereal and even i feel like i have not experienced much out of my life..hmm... (wow but looks like you love travelling 😉) i would rather go backpacking rather than in a tour group... :P
And oh my goodness i love the picturesque Ladakh! I really really hope one day by God's grace am able to that magnificent place...just love the scenery over there! 😳
Simply loved Arnav and Khushi's first argument...😃 but i can totally relate to Khushi's apprehensiveness in sharing a room. Why do i smell a lot of romance suddenly? 😉
My most most most favourite part is this!!! I simply am going back and reading it over and over again!!
"The two of them spent some more time looking at the River, absorbing the ambiance in amicable silence. Kushi was thinking about Arnav and was struggling to understand the depth her attraction for him.

Arnav, on the other hand was surprised with Kushi; he had been with many women before, but most of them given a choice would 'talk and talk' instead of sitting and relishing the moment like Kushi was doing now. He realised that Kushi was the kind of person who was fun to be with both while talking and in silence. He was also pleasantly surprised by how she had owned up to her mistake and apologised. She showed a great deal of maturity.

There was so much more to this girl, he realised as he looked at the serene river, the banks of which were dimly lit with lights and the cold winds that blew Kushi's long hair close to his face."

This whole part reminds me of the quote that i love alot!!

"True friendship is siting together in silence and feeling like it is the best conversation you have ever had"
😃😃😃
And your song choice! Its one of my favourite songs ever! Just brought back all my college memories that i shared with my bestie! Thanks NB!
Once again a brilliant piece of writing! Just love it and thanks alot! 🤗
Edited by Aphrodite88 - 12 years ago

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