you updated! yay am doing a jig around my room! 😆
but i am 12 pages late boohooo 😭😭😭
NB!!how are you able to write this way??
your words and the way you write makes me feel like i am floating in the air
its just such a light feeling and at the end of the update i am left with a smile that does not leave me at all!
coming back to the story...why are you hell bent on scaring me with Khushi and NK's growing closeness and her first kiss is NK??!! just how is that possible 😭
i love travelling and the parts where you described about Arnav's various adventures seem sooo ethereal and even i feel like i have not experienced much out of my life..hmm... (wow but looks like you love travelling 😉) i would rather go backpacking rather than in a tour group... :P
And oh my goodness i love the picturesque Ladakh! I really really hope one day by God's grace am able to that magnificent place...just love the scenery over there! 😳
Simply loved Arnav and Khushi's first argument...😃 but i can totally relate to Khushi's apprehensiveness in sharing a room. Why do i smell a lot of romance suddenly? 😉
My most most most favourite part is this!!! I simply am going back and reading it over and over again!!
"The two of them spent some more time looking at the River, absorbing the ambiance in amicable silence. Kushi was thinking about Arnav and was struggling to understand the depth her attraction for him.
Arnav, on the other hand was surprised with Kushi; he had been with many women before, but most of them given a choice would 'talk and talk' instead of sitting and relishing the moment like Kushi was doing now. He realised that Kushi was the kind of person who was fun to be with both while talking and in silence. He was also pleasantly surprised by how she had owned up to her mistake and apologised. She showed a great deal of maturity.
There was so much more to this girl, he realised as he looked at the serene river, the banks of which were dimly lit with lights and the cold winds that blew Kushi's long hair close to his face."
This whole part reminds me of the quote that i love alot!!
"True friendship is siting together in silence and feeling like it is the best conversation you have ever had"
😃😃😃
And your song choice! Its one of my favourite songs ever! Just brought back all my college memories that i shared with my bestie! Thanks NB!
Once again a brilliant piece of writing! Just love it and thanks alot! 🤗
Edited by Aphrodite88 - 12 years ago
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
Veer Hanuman
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