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Nowsheen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Beautiful story and even more beautiful ending! Thank you for sharing!

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LibranAngel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Rabba Ve Juhi!!!!

this was simply brilliant!!!! oh how i wish we had an actual pregnancy on the show rather than a kid confused about his own age!!!!

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meradil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

i read all of this is one go Juhi!!!

absolutely amazing.

love the gradual significance of the journal

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

ohh...well written dear...finally khushi is back to her self...irritating and teasing her laad governar...😆😆 the journal war was just 🤣 ...and finally they got a new member...😊😊

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

I borrowed my bro's lappy. Coz it was unbearable for me to stay away from IF.hahaha.

I finished reading the last two chapters and the epilogue.You left me spell bound. It was beautifully written such a wonderful story.

Let me start with chapter 11. I loved the concept of expressing both Arnav and Khushi's POV. Khushi had been suffered a lot after the incident. But Arnav's immense love helped her overcame her trauma.

Khushi is unique. I loved it how she proposed Arnav! Arnav wanted to propose her in a grand way, but before that Khushi proposed him in a subtle way.Khushi actually never could hate Arnav. Otherwise she wouldn't wear the mangal sutra. Finally their enormous love brought them together again.

In the first part of the epilogue you certainly wrote it enigmatically. But I already came to know your style. Though the abused woman seemed like Khushi initially, but I was pretty sure it wasn't Khushi. Coz after so much happened in Arnav and Khushi's life, it wasn't expected that Arnav would abuse Khushi.

It was so sweet how they talked by exchanging journals

Till the last section of the update you kept us in cliff hanger.But I told I already knew your way. So when I read that Khushi stood on the wet floor, I immediately thought that She was pregnant and her water broke down.I'm so happy that she gifted Arnav a hazel eye baby girl, just like her.Now their perfect family is completed.

it was a pleasure to read this amazing story.And thanks a lot to share it with me.

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nonasi

@nonasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Yeah, I'm not updating my res. 😆

Epilogue (Part 1):

😲 *gets hysterical* I actually thought it might be Payal calling about Akash...😆

Sooo...K's finally getting A into anger management??

This is clearly not what it seems...I love ExP wala pranks/schemes/plot devices. ;)

(Conclusion):

Of course. Pata tha. There was no way K was actually calling about A. (You did not just do that...You're a cheeky one, y'know that?)

ROFL! She will literally become The Indian in the Cupboard! 😆

Yeah, I don't get the Sallu fascination either...🤔

Bwahahaha, I love their 'love' notes. 😆 (YES. NK-Lavanya. 😳)

She's preggers?! Aww! (Lmfao, Khushi in a cat fight. 'Nuff said.)

Arrey yaar, I really thought she was gonna accost him for having to go through labour. In dono ka pyaar bhi na...AWWW! Baby! Daddy's little girl. 😳

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nonasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

M'okay, so I'm gonna say it's 'cause it's night-time and main neend mein hoon, iss liye my last post sounds like a crackpot wrote it...

And because the epilogue got its own thread, achcha wala post separate hai. 😊

Juhi, you know I'm not good with serious issues and IPK, but finally we all got to see a sensitive and mature portrayal of an issue that is still, depressingly, the reality of life as a woman. I had my apprehensions, but you did it justice and still got in just enough of the sapnon ki duniya...

I have always thought that Arnav and Khushi's relationship would realistically/probably be an abusive one, so I love what you did in the epilogue there. Besides, change can only come from within and to be able to do that, you need introspection, education, and a whole lotta himmat.

You did something different and I'm glad to have gotten to be a part of it as a reader (albeit a tardy one...). 😊

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

wow wt a magnificent ending 2 this wonderful brain child of urs di..! The bitterness, the resentment, the anguish of the past was so beautifully nullified by this update. Loved the journal convo btwn them soo like arnav n khushi.!!how can i miss out on arnavz recollection of the blissful 2 years of his with his khushi, khushi thinkin of puttin her taekwondo 2 use on that poor harmless pa, her questioning him abt it even when in labor n her reaction to his denial was way 2 awesome, n her demand 4 jelabies only she can think of it..!loved their convo in d labour room it was just 2 perfect.and arnavz fear about not bein able luv his baby enough n how he falls in love again is beautiful.they say the father connects with d baby only aftr its born n when he holds it in his arms n this was beautifully depictd. And i have 2 say i am patting myself 4 believing in a redeemed arnav n not jumpin into conclusions abt it though d girl's story was similar to kay. The idea of the helpline n d reason behind it was beautiful. Even now i get chills when think of her n wt she had to undergo.
Love, anjali.