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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

A standing ovation for the ending!!!!!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!

Well done!!!

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

I knew it cant be Khushi as victim! Arnav has got his love after much hardships so he will never let it go! Loved their sweet little letter fights!

Waiting for you to write a new FF!

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Read it this morning b4 getting the kids to school and rushing to work so I could not comment. I must say I was one of those who jumped to the wrong conclusion after the previous update and I was so happy you proved me wrong. Great way to show the new beginning with a baby girl . . . I am going t o miss your early morning updates and lovely writing. This was one of the most beautiful story with raw emotions about a man who went to hell after what he did to the most precious person in his life and a touchy subject. I am glad you showed us the hell that both the victim and her loved one goes though after a brutal attack. But I am especially ecstatic that you showed victims can overcome these awful situations and reclaim their happiness. Love conquers all. Until your next story which I will be stalking like a hawk, take a bow! You were awesome!

Edited by Raila1014 - 12 years ago

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

very nice n moving story...

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annys

@annys

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

I just love the way you give the Epilouge.. Nice story i love it.

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

*Phew* Mystery solved, I had a feeling that Khushi must have been the operator after I read the 1^st part of the epilogue. The 2nd epilogue was simply a beautiful end to an emotional tale. I just want to give you a virtual hug for writing such a sensitive story so gracefully.🤗

I look forward to more wonderful stories from you. I have just started on your other FF, will certainly leave my thoughts there once I'm done reading all the chapters. Once again, thank you for writing this. :)

Edited by -Shalu- - 12 years ago

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

i am so happy with the epilogue :)
the discussion they were having in his journal depicted what a long way their relationship had come to and in this process got only more beautiful and strong.
good work :) i throughly enjoyed it.

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cupcake1234

@cupcake1234

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Read both part one and two of the epilogue in one go.

So glad I didn't have to wait after the cliffhanger in part one.

When I read part one I wasn't sure what to make of it 'cause Kushi could really be any one of the two women mentioned, either the woman ringing the help line or the one answering the phone of the help line and was happy the latter was the case.

Part two of the epilogue was a light hearted, feel good chapter.It was very thoughtful of Kushi to open a centre for victims of assault and abuse. She seems to be fully back to her bubbly self now! The journal entries were fun to read this time around.It was funny when she was asking about Anjali's P.A when she was in a much serious situation.

The ending was just perfect with the token of both Arnav and Kushi's love!

All in all what started as a serious,dark and a painful story ended with a beautiful happy ending it so deserved!Hope you write more stories in the future:)

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

And i have fallen in love again too...along with arnav...with this story!!! ❤️ thanx for the wonderful journey u took me on...

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Its the perfect epilouge ever..arshi n the essence of their characters were awesome ... funny sweet n cute...please continue bewitching us...with ur writing...