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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#811

Finally caught up with the chapters I missed out on. So here are my comments..divided into 2 posts 😃:

Chapter 3:

Arnav Singh Raizada should have been more discreet about the "meeting at the hotel room"!

And poor Khushi..she's now labelled as a prostitute..just so so sad! For a girl who has strong values, and didn't think of doing such even in her dreams, did it for her father..but bam! the matter becomes the worst ever!

Loving Payal's role..bold! And Akash, as always, is the calm, caring & composed guy :)

So I'm assuming Arnav's family knows about it?! How did they get to know?

Chapter 4:

Ok, I have come to a conclusion now..Arnav is a big jerk! Yes he is!

"Paise le kar bhag gayi hogi" Just felt like virtually punching him!!

So Akash decided on a press conference..I wonder what it was all about..I have a small intuition that they declared ArHi as married..

And the last part has left me more curious!! Who was that who was in the same situation as Khushi was..who else wanted to commit suicide because of him?!

Chapter 5:

My guess was right! Loved the way Akash and Shyam answered the questions shot at them..

But poor Lavanya..this will be a big shock for her!

Loving the Akash-Payal arguments and taunts..and whoa! Akash shouted at Payal! Well, uhrm, I found it funny 😆

Chapter 6:

Loved this chapter..dedicated fully to Arnav and the reason behind him hating Khushi so much..

And why he did all that he did to her..just for a 'Sorry'..So cheap of him!

Just loved it..beautifully written :)

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#812

Part 2 of my comment: 😃

Chapter 7:

You made Sheetal the house help?! 🤣

I knew Khushi wasn't going to jump off the cliff..she had the sudden urge to do it but didn't coz she collapsed on the ground 😃

Poor Lavanya was shattered on hearing Khushi's voice..

And the Guptas agreed for the marriage..and I wonder if the high opinion they have of the Raizadas will tarnish once they see the ASR! Aaand, I feel nothing happened inside that hotel room.. 😊

Chapter 8:

Oh great! So nothing happened!! He just wanted her to say sorry :/

Phewww! That's a relief! But him calling her a wh**e is now a huge scar! It was needless, but he's ASR afterall!

He now fears that his one decision has harmed her, after seeing those marks :/

Chapter 9:

The Payal here is fiery!!! I love her! Wish they had shown Payal a tad bit like this in the show! She only shouted once at ASR..! 🤢

This SS doesn't look dark anymore, like Destroyed was..Arnav seems really willing to marry her !

I was surprised to see him acting so civil infront of her family..and even in the previous chapter..he was so calm when Akash told him he had no other choice than to announce they were to get married! I'm reaaally glad! 😊

Chapter 10:

So the wedding day has arrived!! :)

And I'm totally loving this Payal and Akash!!

Loved the Anjali-Khushi conversation! Much much needed! But made a little sad..so much pain..the 2 siblings went through so much at a tender age! Poor poor Arnav! Being blamed for his mother's death..just sad! So this is what he remembered when Khushi wanted to fall off the cliff!! 😒

Thankfully, Khushi has already begun to see the child in Arnav..so for now she'll try her best to be nice to Arnav, but the latter will not break down the walls around him so soon..maybe..I dunno! 😆

Loved the update!

Please pleeease pleeease update sooon!! I beg thee! 😳

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romaria

@romaria

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#813

wow awesome story ! u really have a way with words ! n Congrats on winning d ff in d spotlight :) i found this story from there :D

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#814

It was a very sad update...Arnav and Anjali have gone through so much in their childhood and it was heart breaking to read that..

I feel bad for Arnav...he blames himself for his mother's death

And now they are married..I am waiting to read how their life will change after this

update soon :)

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Zarahatke

@Zarahatke

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#815

Ok zehra i m speechless no words
Heart wrenching update but love the way u wrote amazing
Plz update sooon

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#816

Oh, I love Khushi's new outlook towards Arnav!
And this explains why Arnav had felt so bad on seeing those marks on Khushi, that day!
God! That must have been such a shock for him!! 😲

And now I want to see how Khushi is going to "spill" her love on him..
Of course, I don't expect her to forgive him, just like that!! 😳

Also, I still dunno if Arnav actually did anything to Khushi that night or not! Did I miss something? Or have you not revealed it on purpose?!
If its the former, you get to smack my head and remind me! If latter's the case, then... Well, I shall wait! 😛

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#817

fabulous!

loved the last line...

arnav is a troubled soul and only khushi can give him the closure that he so desperately requires :)))

akash and payal are super cute... can u please write something dhamakedar for them too???

i cant wait for the next update and see what arnav does now... ive loved his character so far! he did seem like a stubborn child to me before but now a hurt stubborn child is a challenge to khushi!!! his haughtiness makes him amazingly hot too LOL

congrats on making it to the spotlight zehra!!!

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#818

awsum

dat was a dreadfull past

i was cryng😭

nw khushi has d biggest challenge at her hands ARNAV

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allegro

@allegro

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#819

Glad that I went to stalk the fan fictions forum otherwise I wouldn't have found this awesome SS. Congratulations. Your FF is chosen as the "Fan Fiction In The Spotlight"

Poor little Arnav and Anjali suffered too much during their young age. their father was no better than a beast who destroyed the dreams of a perfect family for growing children. My heart tears for their mother as well.

PS: Congratulations. You have successfully gained another stalker.

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Risha J

@-Risha-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#820

They are finally married! Woohooo!

The story was so beautifully explained! Everything made perfect sense (unlike the show :/). Poor Arnav has suffered so much. Eager to see what Khushi does now.

Now let the Suhaag Raat drama begin!