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Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

I just came across this story & must say it captured my interest strongly.

Love both ASR & Khushi here.

Pls update soon!

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AnuMouli91

@AnuMouli91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

I just found your story and I already love it. The Arnav and Khusi in your story have strong personalities and I am sure their interactions are going to be filled with a whole lot of sparks & fireworks. I especially loved Sashi Gupta's response to Akash:

"All that glitters is gold. You just need to find out which one is the real thing, and which one is just gold plated"

It gives an entirely new perspective to the age old proverb 😊

Edited by AnuMouli91 - 12 years ago

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Hi just finished both chapters and its amazing.
Arnav is ruthless business man, but what about his personal life? And khushi seems t o be confused somehow to me. Arnav want khushi for business, and khushi just for she need a man?

Have to wait to know more about akash. Cant wait to read more. Thank you for the mail

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Wow, i just came across this story.

I could never imagine Khushi like this but the way you write i must say she looks real.

And Arnav seems to be on revenge mode.

Really interesting concept ...love to read more.

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

So Arnav is a player and Khushi is the same

Arnav is a business shark while Khushi is a spoiled socialite am I reading this
right?

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

I am in love with this story. It promises to be a very mature story and i am not talking about sex...however i can sense that will be great too. i am referring to adult emotions. As a voracious reader of any ff I can find on Arshi ...I am pretty jaded by now and thought i was beyond gushing...but i am because and you have captured my interest.

The characters are well sketched.and complex...Arnav and Khushi are both sharp and sophisticated business jungle animals with an instinct to win. Love the Beer and music loving Khushi!!!!

Akash and Payal are both nice people but completely different backgrounds. How will they play against each other...sparks are sure to fly.

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Vrushali Naik

@barunlove

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Absolutely wonderful...welll arnav's tryin to revenge Gupta n aakash seeks him as a mentor...wud wanna knw what relation do aakash n arnav share...n yes...payal seems hard wrkn n sumone to be playin an imp role in dis one...way to go sweets...keep flowing!!!!!

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ammia

@ammia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Stumbled upon yr blog and link to a wonderful story...thank you!

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Ayaat

@Ayaat1216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Sounds really interesting! It's a nice change to see khushi act as the badass for once 😆
And Arnav wanting to use khushi for business purposes? Tut tut
Lol poor akash he has to deal with khushi and he's not happy 😆
Payal seems nice in this ff 😊
Update soon 😃

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Vee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: AnuMouli91
I just found your story and I already love it. The Arnav and Khusi in your story have strong personalities and I am sure their interactions are going to be filled with a whole lot of sparks & fireworks. I especially loved Sashi Gupta's response to Akash:

"All that glitters is gold. You just need to find out which one is the real thing, and which one is just gold plated"
It gives an entirely new perspective to the age old proverb 😊

I was waiting for somebody to spot that line, I literally toiled in sweat and blood for it. 😆

Thank You for your comment.

-Vee