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MinYoung

@MinYoung

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Amazing! Your two chapiter are just amazing! I can't wait to read the others one!

Continue soon :)

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Love the concept!!

Arnav: ruthless, handsome and now satisfied he's getting one over the twins that have dared to outsmart him. Khushi: a party girl come ruthless business woman looking for a challenge...

Payal a poor, happy small business owner...Akash and discontented (temporarily?) businessman who is looking for something...? But at the moment has to deal with the notorious KKG!

Brilliant plot so far and can't wait to see where you take this :)

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

It's only the second chapter, and you already have a fan in me. Wonderful writing, V, but then you're the person who wrote Glass. This had to be another masterpiece in making. I really like how different they are, except Arnav, obviously. Payal is the hardworking one who had to get a job after school? And it's so nice to see her positive attitude. And Akaash has gone to Harvard, works for Shashi uncle( I love that man), Shashi uncle is the darling he always was in the show, Khushi is a curious mix of man-eater/party girl/ corporate shark. Very intriguing. If you do intend to move this to a blog, please send me a link. Thank you :)

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Very well written... All the best 😊

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hashey

@hashey

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Interesting story. So Payal and Akash are not siblings to Khushi and Arnav for a change and Khushi is as ruthless as ASR.

Loved it so far, have to see how the story unfolds.

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Oh wow a new story from you . It is so intriguing . It is so diverse from the show and love your characters . Looks like Arnav has a competition in the department of Ruthlessness 😉 our own KKG :) .Now that would be "The Clash Of The Titans " literally when they come face to face be it business or personal encounters . Looking forward for next chapters !!!!!!!

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

hey - nice concept.. do continue!! am waiting for the fireworks lol!!

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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

wow!interesting n intriguing!

sorry 4 being a lil late,was busy wid d new sem beginning in uni!

so we have 4 extremely dynamic characters with a mysterious aura around them!

arnav n khushi r sure to create some fireworks...i can already anticipate the impending sexual tension/attraction n they havent properly met yet!

do continue soon!

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

You are on a roll, aren't yoi?...ruthless ASR and decadent Khsushi? i am signing up without a question...What I want to know desperately is does your Khushi have a sharp brain too or is she a.bimbo?