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@-happilyunknown

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

I just realised that "Glitter " is a lot more than just a rvenge story with fiery passion between the leads.There is def more to it than that..a story which neither you nor i can wait to unfold! ;D

I love it man! Once again..i dont think i was ever such a "deep" writer :D

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@Sanaya.Barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Wow.. Awesome story. You write really well... I love Khushi's character! Please try to update soon ! And PM me too 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

i have only ever just read/heard about your stories never gotten a chance to read it. i look forward to this! interesting start so far. from everyone that has been introduced. i am definitely liking akash's character and his relationship with mr gupa. continue soon!

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Stalking helps.

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I loved the chapter V. The metaphor used to describe the night as a seductive woman, the comparison with Khushi's beauty; beautifully penned. What makes one stunning is the realisation of one's beauty and a demeanour that screams of confidence, charisma and that is exactly what Khushi portrayed. Lambhorgini!! I want it now.

Loved Aakash's muddled sentiments where he had to exercise his self control at her ravishing appearance apart from the prevalent dislike towards her making him compare her with a witch.

Arnav Khushi face off added charm; the blunt yet cleverly designed comebacks; they sure are fire and fire.

Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago

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@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Here is a girl who knows she's sexy and projects it perfectly. The perfect attitude...and it suits her and the money that she flaunts.

I love the way you describe the surroundings V. You manage to connect the mood of the characters to the environment around them...something that made me take a liking to 'Inferno' immediately and now...its one of the reasons I'm loving 'Glitter' too. I still remember the way you had described mid summer storms. :)

Akash's reactions to seeing Khushi was just 😆.

He's attracted to her, but finds her attitude difficult to digest at the same time. Poor guy.

Arnav and Khushi are a forces to reckon with. Both sexy and ruthless at the same time. This is just the beginning and I'm so damn excited!!!

The other thing I love are the various layers to your characters. There's so much about Khushi, Arnav and Akash that we still don't know. And I can't wait for more!!

And the ToBe sequel is here! I'm off to read what my psycho Khushi is upto! :)

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

great concept loved it..,
with kushi n arnav together sparks r sure to fly

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arshisarunfan11

@arshisarunfan11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Very very intriguing. Payal seems to be nice and what a twist in character for Khushi. Would love to read more.

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

You have just described a high class business parties in few lines and that too so accurately and to the T . So looks like Akash has a crush on certain Ms. Gupta . Wow the meeting between Arnav and Khushi was electrifying . The sparks just flew 😊 . Great update and their meeting was just amazing .

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

I am a little confused with khushi's personality here..don't get me wrong ..I love this spitfire...and completely in control...then why did she come across as a desperate bimbo in the introduction ...in control but despo...

May be I am jumping the gun, sorry..

Btw khushi has got my full attention, Arnav is only somewhere in the periphery, as of now...

Edited by Polkadots78 - 12 years ago