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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: --Archana--
Hey!!!!!
Just found this story and its very intriguing esp the characterizations
Arnav is almost in his usual ruthless avatar looks like,but Khushi is the surprising one.But i loved the you described her and also Akash's thoughts about her.Someone who can match upto ASR and challenge him then.Felt bad for payal though,hope things get better for her.
There is a grey shade inthese characters which i liked.Would love to read more😊

Heyy!

I'm glad you like the story. I hope you'll stick around, there is so much more. Thank You for your comment! :D

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

I liked the contrast you brought between Aakash and Payal; one having it all, rich parents, Harvard degree, lovely job but feeling the presence of a void or an uneasy feeling of not being contended. Payal having too little to even pay her debts and yet happy with life.

Lovely portrayal of relation that Shashi and Aakash share. Shashi has earned the name and respect with his effort that makes him wise where he did rather use an on the face approach, neat characterisation. Khushi's depiction looks promising too; vain, sharp when it comes to business, ruthless while bagging deals; Asr will surely find his match.

Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

khushi a girl born with a bottle of b**r in her hand is a wonderful line v
thanks for sending me the pm

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anannya

@aneelovesarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Well introduction to other characters.Got an insight how Khushi is.

Very intersted to catch more of glitter.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Khushi has layers I guess! Payal's circumstances and situations were beautifully described! Akash- shashi bonding was nice- wise company

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124555

@124555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

hi...

i just came by your story...

it was a great start...i loved your khushi...

she seems to be strong and a match for asr...

waiting to read more of your work...

o and by the time i started reading glass you had already removed it to your blog... and i regret not reading it... sorry

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Yayyy m here!! 😃 so payal owns a cafe n Akash works under Guptas!??!! Hhmm its getting better ...
Khusi born with bottle if beer ... Hahahahaha... Oh my she looks like tough cookie how AsR gonna tame this wild cat!!
Great chapter... Cant wait to read more... 😃

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annab

@annab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Loved the concept..2 strong characters from same background ready to collide each other...loved the way u portrayed each and every character...looking forward to read more...