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sakthi25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

An insight to Aakash and his brain...
New FF really sounds good.

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Archana

@Iceflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Hey!!!!!

Just found this story and its very intriguing esp the characterizations

Arnav is almost in his usual ruthless avatar looks like,but Khushi is the surprising one.But i loved the you described her and also Akash's thoughts about her.Someone who can match upto ASR and challenge him then.Felt bad for payal though,hope things get better for her.

There is a grey shade inthese characters which i liked.Would love to read more😊

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Witness me ...one silent reader , duly chastised ,shame-faced ...suitably repentant ...

Promises-to-drop-in-a-word-of-appreciation henceforth...liked where this is going and needs to keep reading ...😆

Waiting for more ...

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samirao

@samirao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Intresting , awosome update , plz pm me next time

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic
RES.

On page 4.

Thanks :*

😆

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

This sounds amazing!

I loved how you did the characters' intro.. Arnav sounded yummy! With all that swagger and ruthlessness oozing off him.

Khushi with some major dough in the bank and an attitude to go with. Niice!

Payal the poor darling! Her outlook in life is majorly interesting! So does Akash's.

Life in the business world cannot be simple, be it small time or involving big bucks. Can't wait to see how this all unravels!

Great start V! Lovin' it already! :)

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ritukgarg

@ritukgarg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Amazing storyline, love your creativity and words:) pls share ur blog when u r ready:) thanks will wait for more!

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dilectus

@dilectus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

finally!!! i am getting to read smthing from you... i had once mentioned to krani di...that i want to read smthing you have written, and before i could do that, you had already removed everything. but i guess, i was wishing really good!!!

so,another one of intense brain-racking-high on drama story, oh what a feast in this new year!!! go ahead, i am all ears!!

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: vgedin
Oh, Vee, you are getting better and better and better-er with each update!

"Unlike her father, who would talk straight to you on the face, Khushi Gupta was a letter-bomb waiting to be opened." That has gotto be one of the best descriptions of characters that I have ever read - concise, sharp and bang-on.

Intriguing Payal, a layered Aakash - hm, when is Chapter 3 coming, darling ?

PS - I know I am late, but I unres-ed on Pg 1 :)

I saw both the replies, thank you SO MUCH. Yes, the letter-bomb line and the last dialogue happen to be my absolute favourites.

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Vee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: dilectus
finally!!! i am getting to read smthing from you... i had once mentioned to krani di...that i want to read smthing you have written, and before i could do that, you had already removed everything. but i guess, i was wishing really good!!!

so,another one of intense brain-racking-high on drama story, oh what a feast in this new year!!! go ahead, i am all ears!!

Thank You so much for the comment, honey! You should have asked, I remember you from Inferno. 😃

@bold: Krani happens to be a very close friend and a stellar writer. I'm honoured to be liked by a reader of hers. :)