ArHi FF - Glitter - LINK TO STORY PAGE 85 - Page 3

An insight to Aakash and his brain...
New FF really sounds good.

Hey!!!!!

Witness me ...one silent reader , duly chastised ,shame-faced ...suitably repentant ...

Intresting , awosome update , plz pm me next time

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic

RES.


On page 4.

Thanks :*

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This sounds amazing!

I loved how you did the characters' intro.. Arnav sounded yummy! With all that swagger and ruthlessness oozing off him.

Khushi with some major dough in the bank and an attitude to go with. Niice!

Payal the poor darling! Her outlook in life is majorly interesting! So does Akash's.

Life in the business world cannot be simple, be it small time or involving big bucks. Can't wait to see how this all unravels!

Great start V! Lovin' it already! :)

Amazing storyline, love your creativity and words:) pls share ur blog when u r ready:) thanks will wait for more!

finally!!! i am getting to read smthing from you... i had once mentioned to krani di...that i want to read smthing you have written, and before i could do that, you had already removed everything. but i guess, i was wishing really good!!!

so,another one of intense brain-racking-high on drama story, oh what a feast in this new year!!! go ahead, i am all ears!!

Originally posted by: vgedin

Oh, Vee, you are getting better and better and better-er with each update!

"Unlike her father, who would talk straight to you on the face, Khushi Gupta was a letter-bomb waiting to be opened." That has gotto be one of the best descriptions of characters that I have ever read - concise, sharp and bang-on.

Intriguing Payal, a layered Aakash - hm, when is Chapter 3 coming, darling ?

PS - I know I am late, but I unres-ed on Pg 1 :)

Originally posted by: dilectus

finally!!! i am getting to read smthing from you... i had once mentioned to krani di...that i want to read smthing you have written, and before i could do that, you had already removed everything. but i guess, i was wishing really good!!!

so,another one of intense brain-racking-high on drama story, oh what a feast in this new year!!! go ahead, i am all ears!!