I'm all yours RTMC FF part 6 on pg 21 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

sry sry dear actually there is some problem with my account...now everything is fine...so will update today ya tomorrow...sry for being late


its okai but now i just dont have any patience left i m so excited to meet pakhi-ryan now...its lyk i havent heard dem frm centuries 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 6


nexr morning

he tried to tied his tie when his gaze fell on her...she was standing on doors with a cup of tea...she smile lovingly-''gdmg mr ryaan...''

ryan ignored her n tried to tied his tie...shecame nearer n put the cup on table...he looked at her from the corner of his eyes n smiled...she too sensed his smile n came nearer...

she curled her arms around his neck-jo kaam aata nhi h wo kyu kar rhe ho''ryaan pulled her arms down-''mujhe tie bandni aati h ab tum jao or apna kaam karo''

she grinned-''wahi to karne aayi hun yahan...''he looked at her questionably

she freed the knot of tie n put it again in his neck without breaking her gaze...he ignored her gaze first but at last he defeated and looked at her eyes...she pulled him nearer which made him surprise-''what are u doing''

she made her lips curled in disappointment -''wahi jo tum kabhi nhi karte ho''n came more nearer

he pulled his head back n sensed her warm breath on his neck...which was uncontrolled for him...he closed his eyes for a moment n lost in her but then suddenly he shout-''im getting late''pakhi jumped in shock n backed off from him

ryan looked at her innocent face n said-''sorry wo mujhe late ho rha h''pakhi growled at him-''tumhari tea table par jaate time pee lena''n walked outside angrily...

ryan staring at doors n felt guilty...

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ansh sat on chair with both legs on table when a girl in short skirt with white shirt entered in the cabin-''gdmg sir...''

ansh smirked n stared at her from top to bottom...she felt awkward n started to move when he called her-''kya meine tumhe jaane ke liye bola h?''she turned nervously-''no sir...wha...what can i do for u''

he smirked wickedly-''just sit in front of me''she looked at him-''what??''

ansh stood up from the chair-''don't worry ab yeh office ryan ka nhi h mera to jo mein kehta hun wo karo''

he came nearer which made her more nervous..she quickly sat on chair n waited for his next order...he leaned on chair-''thats gud...now we have to leave for mumbai after one hour...so quickly pack ur stuff...u r coming with me''she stick to chair backward-''ok sir''n ansh smiled -'u r such a gud girl''

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ryan was busy in work when tanisha entered in his cabin-''hello ryan''

ryan turned to saw her n smile-''hi...''tansiha looked at his cabin-''ryan u r a very hard worker n talented too to tumhari jagah yaha nhi h...tumhari jagah wahan h''pointing her finger to other cabin...he looked at her-''manager''

tanisha nodded at him-''yeah now u r chief manager of our company so tum aaj se us cabin me bathoge''

ryan smiled-''thank u but abhi mujhe kuch 2 din hi hue h yaha aye hue or itni jaldi promotion??''

tanisha grinned-''come on ryan...lekin 2 din me tumne sab kuch sambhal liye...dad bhi bhot khush h isliye hum dono ne milkar yeh decide kiya h i hope ab tumhare question katam ho gye h ''

ryan nodded n smiled...

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pakhi scowling at her friend n shreya was puzzled-''what??''

pakhi-''tum jab se aayi ho ryan ke baare me kyu puch rhi ho kyu he is mine''

shreya widened her eyes-''oh common pakhi mein usse tumse chiin ne nhi ayi hun...me toh aise hi puch rhi thi''

pakhi walked towards couch-''mujhe acche se pata h kyu puch rhi ho tum n pls ryan ke baare me sochna bhi mat''n made her face...shreya frowned at her-''pakhi tum pagal ho gyi ho...tumhe lagta h ki ryan tumse pyaar karega are u really mad...''

pakhi looked at her with confusion-''what do u mean kyu nhi karega...''

shreya came nearer to her-''kyunki usse pata h ki tum already kisi or ke saath relationship me thi wo bhi 2 saal se...to wo aise ladki ke saath apne reltion kyu banayega jo 2 saal kisi or ke saath spend kar chuki h''

pakhi -''shreya..lekin in 2 saalo me kabhi kuch nhi hmare beech''

shreya-''pakhi i know...me jaanti hun but i don't think ki ryaan ye samjhega wo to yahi sochega na ki tum or''pakhi stood up from the couch-''lekin me ryaan se bhot pyaar karti hun ''

shreya too stood up n looked at her-''lekin ryan nhi karta...''she stopped n then said-''accha mein chalti hun...me sirf itna kehna chahti hun ki apne do saal tum waste kar chuki ho kisi ke liye ab fir se wo mat karo apne liye kuch karo...mein tumhari frnd hun isliye bol rhi hun''pakhi stared at shreya-''thank u''n shreya smiled


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at night

ryan opened the doors n saw her placing the plated on dining table...ryan saw her sad face-''abhi tak naaraz h''he said under his breath

he went in room for change...

after sometime

both were sitting on opposite side of table n had their dinner...ryaan looked at her n tried to break the silence between them-''pakhi aaj mujhe promotion mila...tumhe pata h ab mein chief manager ban gya hun''pakhi turned her gaze from plate to him n smiled-''congrates''

ryan too smile-''subah ke liye sorry''she again smiled-''its ok''n took her plate-''gdnt''

ryan surprised at her behavior

when he entered in room she was sleeping on couch...ryaan looked at bed n then her-''pakhi''

she opened her eyes-''hmmm''ryan-''are u ok tum bed par nhi soyogi''

pakhi-''im fine here tum bed par so jao''n covered her face with blanket...ryan laid on bed with sad face n turned to saw her...but she was already slept...ryan switched off the lights n closed his eyes


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ansh smiled to saw his four men coming towards him...he strolled down the mirror of car-''kaha dekha tumne usse''

one man said quickly-''sir humne usse ek company me dekha tha wo waha kaam karta h or wo ek flat me rent par rehta h kisi ladki ke saath''the girl sitting next to ansh widened her eyes while ansh grinned-''ryan or ladki ke saath...ab tum jao yaha se...and us flat ka address kya h?''the man quickly gave him a paper piece ''

after looking at paper-''aakhir tumhe dhund hi liya meine ryaan...ab kaun bachayega tumhe mujhse''the girls snatched the paper n before he read the address she tore it into many peices n threw it outside the window...ansh quickly came out from the care n gathered the pieces but it was impossible to read the address from tore paper in night ...he opened the door n pulled her outside...she looked at her nervously when he slapped her hard on her face...her mouth start bleeding...he held her tight through her arms-''ab tum dekhna tumhare hi saamne tumhare ryan ka kya haal karta hun mein''

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he was reading newspaper when she came out from the bathroom...ryan looked at her n about to speak but she made her way into the room...he went into the room -''pakhi''...

she turned -''han''

ryan went towards her-''tum thik ho...she nodded-''han mujhe kya hua h''

ryan grinned-''tumhe yaad h ki humne ek bet lagayi thi''

pakhi smiled-''han or usme tum jeet gye''

ryan's smile faded-''matlab ?'

pakhi-''matlab ki mene haar maan li...or tumne hi kaha tha na ki agar mein haar gyi to hum is baare me kabhi baat nhi karenge''she looked at him lovingly bt then turned her gaze-''mein tumare liye breakfast bana deti hun''

she walked outside bt he grabbed her hand-''kya baat h tum kal se mujhse baat kyu nhi kar rhi ho...''pakhi turned towards him-''ryan u love me??''n this time she had moist eyes

ryan looked at her eyes...there was long silence no one said anything to each other just gazing at each other silently

she snatched her hand away from his grip n started to walk but then his voice halted her feets

-''yes i love u''she smiled n turned to saw him but he stood there expressionless...she hastened at him but again halted...

he looked at floor-''im married''she was numb and her face turned white with shock...she pulled back her steps

ryan looked at her with tears-''sorry...''


precap-''i just hate u ryan''she cried in room while he tried to open the doors-''just listen to me pakhi me tumhe sab batana chahta hun''she shouts-''chale jao yaha se...tumne bhi mujhe varun ki tarah hurt kiya...just leave me alone...just go''
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx for the pm...😊
OMG ryan is married...
Well done dear...👍🏼
very well written...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...I feel like crying after reading the last part for pakhi...but does rayn really love pakhi...and that girl with ansh who tore the address of rakhi's (rayn-pakhi) flat..is she rayn's wife...omg...u brought the shock with this update but I loved it to the core...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
attt laastt update ho hi gaya...
nice update dear...
but..yeh kya...ryan is married
ab kya hoga pakhi ka???😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome story riya...luved it to the core...thanx a ton for the pm
firstly, i luved their names ryan and pakhi...ryan is a perfect combination of sweetness,attractive features. i luved him. but pakhis charater is also very interesting...i m in luv with her charater, she is so bubbly and bold at the same time
their first meeting was superb...jwm ki yaad aa gayi and jis tarah wo ryan se baat manva leti hai and rayan apne paise uspe kharch karta hai...i can clearly imagine rtmc doing that...luved all their scenes
secondly my hate list include varun n tanisha n ansh...tanisha to full on line mar rahi hai ryan pe...ek bar agar pakhi uske samne aayegi to usse pata chalega...
. and the last part was completely shocking,...i m happy beacuse ryan confessed his feelings for pakhi...and shocked beacause he is married...feeling very bad for pakhi... beautifully written...
plz do pm me whenever u'll ud nxt...luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shadi?? Kab kaha kissi nd most important kaise without our pakhi hmmm waitng 4 more nd thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
SHAAADI??????????... :-O
are you serious???????, i mean kab yaar??????, main sach main tujhe marungi agar ye shaadi ryaan ki marzi se hui hogi toh... :-@
n i guess wo ladki jo ansh k saath thi wo hi ryaan ki wife h...couz ansh ne bola ki ab dekho main tumhare ryaan k saath kya karta hu, so zayda doubt usi pe jata h
but yaar ryaan ne bola toh I LOVE U but... :-(
n ye tanisha, 2 din main hi ryaan ka promotion kar dia...pakka iski nazar ryaan pe h... O_o
update soon...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.poor pakki is so sad.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ye kyaa gandaa twist – itna bada 2000v ka jhatka laga mere sir ko ki khopaddi se saari baal hi jal gaye!!...

Shaddisudda??..married?? -married to gal who has come wid ansh???- o noo!!!... married to whom??... and why has he left his wife all alone in his house??- he don't love her (his wife) right??

Patni yaa pakhi???- kyaa dharma sankatt h ye tho!!..- ryaan tho sachi mei phass gyaa h!...

But pakhi ka dil tutt gyaa h- :'( n mera bhi!!..

First scn was so nice-romantic sa!- cutie cutie saa!- haaayyeee!!.. nazar naa lage- but the way he shouted "muje jana h"-acha nahi lga muje!.

And shreya bhi mohabbat ka intehaan le rhi h!- not right- be a real friend yaar- encourage her lov! :P

Dis tanisha- muje Tanya ki yaad dilate h- she is my tintokali number 2 >_<

Muje aisi loose charater ladkiyaan bilkul psnd nahi!!.. :/

Promotion dila kerr she wanna win ryaan…

Ryaan ki sister ka role muje bhot pehle kuch jyada hi remarkable lga tha!!!..jab aapne ek scn diya tha siter wid ansh kaa??- where is she now- giv us more hint abt her n ryaan relation naa di- mei yahan thoda sister-brotherhood bhi enjoy kerna chathi hu!... J

Nice scns- ek k baad ek!!-

But ab ye ansh Mumbai mei aaya hi h tho pakka kuch dhamaka bhi kerega!- address vapas pta lag gya ansh ko tho- pakhi wil b alone in house..!!kaise manage keregi vo?? :'(

Ab tho em damn enjoying reading dis heartbreak sequel of pakhi n ryaan!-itna emotional ho gyaa h sab kuch- so so romantic-… di plzz write more on this same – stretch it plzz- I wanna read more…bhot he emotional n passionate sa banaa- ashiqui 2 ki tarah- remember- hero n heroine on either side of doors- crying for each other….aisa door romance I wanna see b/w murat- here on dis ff!.

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