I'm all yours RTMC FF part 6 on pg 21

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hey everyone im riya here again with another story on our beloved couple rajat mugdha..this is my third story on rajat mugdha as im deeply in love with this couple or u can say that im mad for them...so thought to write a story on them pls bear me n my writing...do comment good or bad all are warmly welcome...im not a writer but still i'll try my best to make this ff nice..so her it goes😊


I'M All YOURS


character sketch

rajat as ryan-''handsome hunk with attractive features very sexy,hot n cute that can any girl fall for him after seeing him once...many girls are behind him but barely looked at them...he loves his family which have his sis..mom n dad..but destiny played game with him n shattered his life in pieces

mugs as pakhi-''very beautiful with perfect figure,creamy complexion...she's very cute n bubbly by nature which attracts the people towards her...she loved his father very much but her ill tempered step mom keep him away from her daughter..she had just completed her college ..many boys were behind her when she was in college but she hardly pay attention to any one of them...she loves someone else that is varun her classmate...n can do anything for his sake

so this is the cs hope u guys like it


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index

part 1--page 1
part 2--page 6
part 3--page 10
part 4--page 14
part 5--page 18
part 6--age 21
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part 1


peoples were rush here n there on platform with their heavy luggage as train whistled on platform...crowd waiting for train to stop n they hurriedly climbed in it..but he was still sitting on bench keeping his eyes on ground he heard peoples blabbering,screaming on one another but he didn't respond n still sitting on same bench from last 2 hours...his face seemed pale n weary his eyes swelled up due to less sleep or may be by continuous crying...his shirt hanging on one side of jeans with tie ..his hairs all messed but sill he didn't raised his eyes from ground

with another whistle train started again n moved slowly slowly from plat form when a girl with heavy luggage n a hand bag screaming n rushed towards the train-''arey roko''but as she reached the platform...she gasped n made her face-''yeh train drivers bhi na i tell u kitne kamine hote h''she sat next to him n kept her luggage on bench between them

he jolted because of her continuous shifting of luggage...he budged little without looking at her..she put her hand bag on that place which irritate him n he got up from the bench..she looked at him surprisingly-''arey why are u standing sit here''n made space for him...

he looked at track without looking at her she made her face-''mujhe kya??''

another train arrived after 1 hour n she hurriedly picked up her luggage when she saw him still standing on same place-''arey train aa gyi h chalo yahi rehna h kya''he raised his gaze towards her n for moment he forgot to blink..she was in her white sleeveless top n knee length skirt

with the whistle of train he regain his sense n moved towards the train doors...after set herself on seat she looked at him n smiled-''where are u going..''he avoid her n looked outside the window

she curved her lips-''arey mene pucha kaha ja rhe ho''almost shouting on him while another passenger staring at her...she grinned at them-'sorry''

he looked at her-''why are u shouting''she stared him wide opened eyes-''mujhe laga ki tumhe sunta nhi h isliye''n grinned at herself-''kaha ja rhe ho''

he turned his gaze again-''pata nhi''

''what''again in loud voice...

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after sometime

she was munching apple n offered him but he refused n sat silently...while eating-''lagta h tumhari gf chodkar bhaag gyi tumhe h na''while pointing out her finger

he gave her a stern look n she gulped nervously

he closed his eyes n rest his head on back for support...she again inspected him from top to bottom-''rich family se lagta h fir train me kya kar rha h''

she finished her apple n put the packet of chips..she tore the packet n offered him again-''chips khayoge tum meri fav h''

he looked at tiredly -''will u pls keep quiet for sometime''

she pulled her hand back-''mat khao mujhe kya baad me mat kehna pucha nhi waise tumhe pata h mein kaha ja rhi hun''

he dashed his head on window softly-''oh god''

she smiled-''mein na apne bf se milne ja rhi hun mumbai or wahan hum dono shaadi karne wale h maza ayega''with very broad smile

he looked at her furiously-''to mein kya karun''

she ate whole packet-''kuch nhi mein to bas aise hi bata rhi thi''

''did asked u''while got furious

she nods in negative

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at 9pm

train halted n both of them jolted from their sleep...she looked at outside n smiled to saw mumbai board hanging outside..she pulled her bag outside n breath heavily-''yes yes''

he came out n looked here n there..it was the last station so all the passengers left the train n he sat on the bench outside ...she looked at him-''arey yeh last station h tumhe jana kaha h''

he looked at her-''i know n thank u very much so now u can leave pls''

she annoyed at him n left with her bag

she reached the building where her boyfriend lived...she open the doors silently n saw him watching tv

varun stood up immediately-''pakhi/?/''

she rushed towards him n hugged him-''howz my surprise baby??''varun smiled heavily -''very nice baby but why u are here??''

she pulled herself back-''for our wedding baby...look sab saman lekar aayi hun us bitch ki saari jewellary bhi''n winked at him

he smiled wickedly to looked at her bag-''oh wow thats good pakhi tum thoda rest karo mein coffee lata hun tumhare liye''

she set herself on couch with her legs on table lying front of her...varun kept all her jwellary in his cupboard when mahi came towards her-''when will get married baby''

varun pulled her towards him n about to kiss when she pulled him back-''pehle shaadi hone do phir yeh sab''n rush outside with a cute smile

varun gritted his teeth-''stupid girl''...

it was almost 11 pm when they watched tv pakhi put her head on his chest-''varun hum shaadi kab karenge??''he pulled her face upward-''swthrt jaldi karenge don't worry''

she pulled her self back-''yeh to tum 1 saal se keh rhe ho mein or wait nhi kar sakti wo bitch or uski chudail beti meri shaadi kahin or karana chahte h(her mother maneka n her daughter misha)

varun switched off the tv-''common pakhi we are in relationship thats enough for me yeh shaadi waadi karne ki kya jarurat h''

pakhi got up from the couch-''what do u mean bina shaadi kiye aise hi rahenge hum nhiii...varun pls lets get married na ''

varun-''shut up pakhi dimaag kharab ho gya mera tumhari bakwas sunte sunte ...are u mad tumse shaadi karunga mein apni shakal dekhi h kabhi pagal lagti ho bilkul i don't even like u we are together just for ur property n i got it now get lost bewakoof''

tears rolled out from her eyes-''what do u mean we are together for just my property''n snatched his collar-''i kill u mujhe mera saman wapas chahiye abhi ''he pushed her back n slapped her-'' seriously u r a big fool tumhe aisa lagta h ki mein tumhe tumahra saaman wapas dunga wo to gya bab in my account go away else i throw u out''she put her palm on her cheek while sobbing n moved towards the doors

suddenly she stopped n walked towards him...she hit her foot between his legs-''bloody ba****d''n rush outside..he fell on floor with both hands on😉

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she cried loudly while walking towards the platform...she sat on bench n buried her face between the knees...i hate u varun bloody rascal''

she was cried a lot n her tears even dry when she raised her had n shocked to saw that same boy sitting on same bench where he was siting before..she wiped her tears n walked towards him-''hey ''he turned n looked at her...she looked different as her face became pale n eyes swelled up

-''what are u doing here''he asked in husky voice

''agar yahi mein tumse puchu toh tum yahan kyun baithe ho'she sat beside him...they were all alone on that platform

''first i ask u so reply''he said by raising his brow...she lowered her face-''mera bf h na usne mujhe cheat kiya jo bhi mere pass tha sab le liya''

he looked at her face silently n smirked-''pata nhi log pyaar hi kyun karte h''she stared at him-''tumhare saath bhi aisa hi hua kya''

he nod in negative-''nhi ''he looked at silent path n moved towards it when she followed him..he looked at her surprisingly-''what""why are u following me''she was silent for a moment n then said-''to kaha jayungi mein itni raat ko mere pass paise bhi nhi h''

he put out his wallet n gave her some rupees-''go back to ur home''she refused-''ghar jayungi to zinda nhi bachungi wo bitch mujhe zinda kha jayegi''

''what?''who bitc' u don't have manners''he said irritately

''wo meri maa''silently n he gave again a stern look to her-''apni maa ko aise bolta h koi''

she smiled n followed him again when he stop again-''whats ur problem kyun follow kar rhi ho mujhe''

she made her face-''itni raat ko mein kaha jayungi tum jaha jaoge me bhi wahi ruk jayungi subah pakka mein chali jayungi''

he put his hand on forehead-''even i don't know ki mein kaha ja rha hun''she shocked-''what??''

he nods-''yeah ab jao yahan se''n walked towards the road...she stood for a moment there then again followed him..he acknowledged her presence behind him again n looked at her-''dekho''but before him she speak-''mein subah pakka chali jayungi i swear''

then they continue their walk again

''tumhara naam kya h''she said ..ryaan''he speak silently

''wow beautiful name or mujhe sab pakhi kehte h but tumne to mera naam pucha hi nhi''

he rolled his eyes-''what ur name pakhi??''

n they disappeared in the darkness of night


so guys here is the first part if u like it then pls do comment..so i continue it further😃


Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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res...awww it was so cute i like pakhi...and ryaan too <3
Edited by Asyalover - 12 years ago
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Res

Soon I'll update my comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new FF...

nice start...
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So Now We Have 52 RTMC FF... Great, Aab tho RTMC ko Wapas ana hi Padega!

Ryan n Pakhi... Waao Nice Names, n The Title too ' I Am All Yours ' Sounds Romantic :-) well It has to be Romantic afterall RTMC FF ha,

Their 1st Encounter was just Owesome, n Differnt

Do Continue Soon,

n On a Serious Note : HumTum End karne ka kheyal bhi apne dimag mein mat lana, ishe ek Reader ki Request samjho ya ek Friend Order, but Plz HumTum end nehi karna, plz

LOVE U
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start of RTMC ff.do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part di and good start. thank u and luv u.
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tumhara naam kya h riya????????????... ;-)
part was to good...pakhi was a chatter box,ryan was total lost n varun was b&@%y*#...
update soon...
luv u... :-)

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