I'm all yours RTMC FF part 6 on pg 21 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover


haHA LOL but daravni picture ke saath saath ek sweet si smile bhi to hai dekho dekho...😃😊😃

han thats beautiful yr
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 5


ryan entered in his new cabin n starts working when three words rang in his ears-''i love u''he shockingly looked here n there but found nothing he pat his forehead-''oh god''

''hi ''a female voice struck into his ears n he looked at her surprisingly...a girl in a short skirt with blue top smiled at him sweetly-''i said hi''she said again raising her brows slightly...ryan smiled at her-'hi''

tanisha accepted his wish by her sweet smile-''so u r new here am i right or i am right''ryan smiled too n nods-''yeah im new here...''

tanisha forward her hand towards him-''hi im tanisha ''ryan shaked hand with her when naveen came towards him-''she is my daughter ryaan...wo tumhe sab bta degi ''ryan nods -''im ryan''tanisha looked at him n for a moment forgot anything around them

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''aakhir apne aap ko samjhta kya h wo''she bumped all the utensils in the sink together furiously-''aane do baat hi nhi karungi mein agar i love u bol deta to kya chala jaata uska ...huh! baat hi nhi karungi mein''

she looked at clock n then doors curiously-''abhi tak aya kyu nhi h''when suddenly door bell rang...she threw the dish washer in sink n rush towards the doors...she opened it quickly-''itni der kyu kar di...aaj jyada kaam tha kya...''ryaan grinned at her-''bus ko pata nhi tha ki mujhe ghar jaldi aana hota h nhi to wo time par aati''n chuckled again to saw her pouted face...she growled at him-'bhot hasi aa rhi h na tumhe...haso mein aaj tumse baat nhi karne wali''

he giggled-''kitni der 2 minutes ya 5 minutes??''she gritted her teeth-''kabhi baat nhi karungi ''n went in kitchen angrily...he bite his tongue n shouted behind her-''sorry''

after sometime

she served him curry n chapatis when he smiled softly-''5 minute khatam ho gye h pakhi...ab tum bol sakti ho''she growled at him-''mujhe tumse baat nhi karni''

he smiled -''aaj dinner accha banaya h tumne''she looked at him-''juthi tarif mat karo mujhe bilkul pasand nhi h''

ryan-''or tum jutha gussa mat karo mujhe bilkul pasand nhi''

pakhi put her plate n went in kitchen

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she adjust herself on a couch n searching something in newspaper...he stared at her-''what are u doing??''

''nothing ''she said straightly without looking at him...he snatched newspaper from her hands furiously-''now tell me what are u doing in news paper...''

''apne liye job dhund rhi hun...mujhe bhi to apne liye kuch karna hoga na...kis ka ehsaan nhi chahiye mujhe''she said looking away from him...ryan tore the paper-''problem kya h tumhari...tum kyun job karogi??or mein tum par koi ehsaan nhi kar rha hun''

pakhi frowned at him-''jab hum dono ke bich koi relation hi nhi h to mein tumhare paise ya tumhari koi cheez use nhi kar sakti...job milte hi mein half rent tumhe de dungi..or aaj se hum same bed par bhi nhi soyenge...tum yaha couch par sona or mein ander bed par soyungi thats it''

ryan-''so thats the problem...''she nodded-''yes thats the problem''

ryan -''tumhe pata h ki tum kitni badi cartoon ho''he said coldly...she turned towards him-''han toh''

ryan chuckled-''tumhari family kaise jhelti thi tumhe...abhi mujhe tumhari step mom par taras aa rha h''n went towards the room...when she frowned n blocked his way-''mein tumhe bhi pareshaan kar dungi agar tumne han nhi bola to''

ryan grinned at her statement-''challenge??''hmmm''she looked at him elegantly-''yes challenge agar meine tumse han nhi bulwaya to mera naam pakhi nhi accepted or not''

ryan bend towards her-''accepted or agar tum haar gyi to''she smiled naughtily-''sawal hi nhi uthta...tum khud mujhe purpose karoge''

he laughed-''are u mad...fir bhi agar tum haar gyi to tum yeh baat dobara repeat nhi karogi''

she gasped-''or agar mein jeet gyi to ???ryan thought something n said-''toh mein tumhe ek accha sa ladka gift karunga done''n laughed loudly on her pout

she threw the flower vase on him n fortunately he missed it...

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next morning

he tied his tie when she entered with his tea-''ur tea is ready''he turned n said thanks n again busy with his tie...she came towards him n gazing at him lovingly...suddenly his gaze fell on her -''what??''she moved closer to him n curled her arms around his neck...startled ryaan stared at her-''what are u doing''she removed the knot of his tie-'wahi jo tum nhi karte''n went more nearer to his face...he looked here n there but towards her-''pakhi...''n she touched his face with her fingers...he froze at that moment n lost in her eyes completely
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Posted: 12 years ago
res thank u so much for the update and i was just watching PRC from the first epi with full episodes...if want to watch tell me i will give u the link
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww it was so cutee...<3 but i guess this new entry of Tanisha is going to be obstacle for pakhi as i am getting the hint of tanisha liking towards ryan...god pakhi is sooo straight forward...firstly she said forget to ryan that she had said ILU to him or phir uske nakhre shuru hogaye kyunki ryan ne han nahi kaha ...ROLF m so excited for their challenge...cont soon...and a BIG THANK YOU.
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovly and superb part di..😊
thanks for sweet sweet part
sorry di for short comment😒
but update is realy amazing👏
luv u di...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all HAPPY HOLI to u n every muratian...
part was amazing one...
pakhi pakhi pakhi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,meri language main mast bandi h bye god...
ha i wish ki wo ryan ko at last convince kar le propose karne k liye...
update soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry for late commenting here...

very nice updates Riya 👏 👏 👏

loved Pakhi n Rian ...
n pakhi's attitude is awesome
n the challenge she gave to Rian ...😉
hmm n I know vo hi jitegi...vo Rian se haan bulvakar rahegi ...
n shuruvat bhi ho gayi...tie se .Rian ...lost in her eyes...very well done Pakhi.keep it with that 😉
n Riya tumne rok kyu diya...😕 kitna accha mahaul bana tha
ok thik hai
please continue karo..jaldiii...
waiting ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update with cute fight of ryan and paki
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part
luved i t <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
liked this update!
loved pakhi! so she is angry with ryaan
and new girl entered woh bhi boss ki beti
but pakhi toh use kachha kha jayegi agar use pata chala
hehehe n ryan very smart dono situation he will win only
areh first love karo, marriage karo den achha sa ladka gift

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