Swaron FF:U & Me..Back to Us.#3...Note -pg 47

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

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I looove you *_*

Mai bahut hee kam logon ki tareef krti hoon - ab neeche read kro!!

I love it. I love it. I love it!!!!

Aapki writingMakes it all so believable!!

Aap apni kisi story mai yeh bi likh do na ke koi 13th floor se jump krke bhagne laga, mai maan jaungi, without a doubt!!

N de way you portray the feelings of your characters, aapki wajah se I strt thinking ke meri situations ko aap kinn words mai describe kroge!!

N then, Crazy I go!!! :p

I mean Sharon's n Swayam's characters are sooo realistic even with those filmy n cheesy lines!!!

N Tanya is sooo adorable!!!

N yeh FF slow h na ?? Acha h!! :D

Yeh slow hee acha lag rha h cause kisi ki yaaddasht BHAM!!! kr ke ni aati😆

Continue soon!! I wont be late ab!! *Fingers crossed* 🤔😆

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

finaaly caught up with the story it has been a very tough journey for both sharon and swayam so far but happiness is coming back to them in the form of their love.😃😃😃😃😃
ahh i really love ur writing deepu dii u say its degrading if thats how u write when u feel ur writing skills are degrading then i want my writing to be like that too😉😉😉 man u are phenomenal dii..👏👏
How do you manage to make swaron more beautiful and magical with each update😕😕
loved it loved it loved it😊😊😃😃
do pm me when u update and update soon cant wait for sharon to have her memories back..
YOU ARE TRULY A STAR DII⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

when are u going to update this

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swapna

@shan16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

kis janam me update karne wali ho...deep

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

isi janam me karungi update😆

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

GUMNAAM HAI KOI
PARESHAN HAI KOI..:(:(

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Uuufff di finally i finished reading all d 20th chapters 😊 😊
Hmmm kahan se start karu 20 chapters ek sath pada hai so i ll give 1 comment only for all chapters 😉
First of all congratulations for completing 2 threads n starting d third one 😊

Ok so to start with d way u started d ff it was too gud it made me think ke who is it suspense tha thoda n it was well thought n very well executed 👏
D story line of dis ff is awesome a totally different one a fresh ff to read 👏
Best best part of dis one was cute little tanya i just loved her everything about her was so cute so perfect 😊
I loved d way u wrote her character amazing one 👏
For me she is show stealer she is super cute have fallen in love with her innocence 😊 😊

I loved jaise in every chapter u showed both swayam n sharon Wat dey were going through while staying away from each other.. D pain was clearly seen.. I also loved d way in which middle middle mein u showed der past moments which dey spent together it was beautiful 👏

Enjoyed reading each n every chapter of it.. D father daughter bond was amazing loved swayam as a father 😊 😊
Dis is awesome imagination di.. Kahan se aati hai aise imaginations of writing somethin like dis..
I ve got attached to der story.. I could feel each n every emotion dey were going through..
Dis one was romantic tragic n emotional.. A feel Gud story 👏
Ur fab writer d way u pen down ur thoughts d words u use to describe enhances its beauty on its own 😊
Awesome ff 👏 👏 👏
Update next part soon di can't wait to read Wat happens further...

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

hey deepika..
i finally finished reading this...
swayam and sharon - 2 characters straight from a fairytail... yet real... with a cheesy clinche touch to it... it certainly feels swaronish...
and tanya... she is really something... so cute...
and seriously i dont know how but your every work appears better than the previous one...
no doubt you are one of the most talented writers here...
and i would like to specially mention the moon comparison... though its too cheesy and clinche but the way you had described it ... i could feel the scene infront of my eyes...
and lastly i noticed you updated this one sometime back in april...
you know you should definitely continue this one...
and also the others.. i know you are one busy girl but please do update... though not hampering the work..
but do update

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Hey deep please update your ff

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

i just finish ur read this work finally... i really like ur story and
dare u stop write all ur works... pl continue write ur story ...
i will sure this time comment all on ur works...
continue soon and pm me...

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