Swaron FF:U & Me..Back to Us.#3...Note -pg 47 - Page 26

Superb ff! I read all of the chapters so far in a matter of two nights. I love ur descriptions about the nature, the dreams, swaron's heartbeats, the heartfelt memories, etc. I can connect to the story so well. It always leaves a smile on my after by the end of the chapter. I love how u presented swayam's family and baba/mama/panchi, they are so supportive and love swayam ans sharon dearly. Swayam's character is so intense. I felt so bad for him in the initial chapters. But now im happy because he is happy. Lastly, i just love tanya. She is so adorable and her bond with swayam is out of this world. I just love reading their father-daughter scenes...they are so realistic and heartwarming.

It is such a beautiful FF 😊
You have described swayam and sharon's love and pain of seperation so beautifully 😊
I just love it 😊

Update soon...

please update karo waiting ...

chaprer 1:

Okai this is like a larger the life kinda big and deep strt...has to be deep ryt deep 😉
So this is my the answer to ma question.about romance...i love how at strtd..wiv such romantic opening..rain, moonsoon, a young beautiful gal, wot an fab description of nature...i cud easily visualise it coz it was so mesmerising...wenever commenting on ur world i seem to get short of words...but i loved it and nw off to read chp 2 coz need to knw who these ppl ...

Chapter 2:

Oh so confussion is over rather mystry revealed, its swayam shikhawat, who else chd it be so protective so caring so pisseasive swayam only of course, fantasticly written, awww swayam as Daddy so cute that too a single.parent...amazing set off to the story, its fun reading two seprate pplz story the way u structured both stories one in india and one in new york i think its fab...wen i.m reading i find new meaning to the words i read coz i heard those word bt the way u use thm is just become so special...okai now going to read chp 3, need to.knw wots wrong wiv sharon...well i think its sharon.

Chapter 3:

Oh so in.part one wen someone enters swayam and tanya room and make swayam go to sleep was actually sharon but in swayamz dream okai tjis nyc, story is slowly slowly unfolding... Awww i loved it wen swayam.was crying for sharon, and how he dream about her...deep seriously this is some grt stuff, it so hard to tell which is beat of.ur work coz each knebis equally phinominal...it feels like am reading a novel and cnt wait to see how the these two come together again...i thought i will read each chapter every.night but cnt stop.maself...am keep saying to.maself okai this is last chap am really i will go to sleep after this but the end.of each chapter is leaving me so eagrr for next chapter that i cny wait till tomorrow

Chaptee: 4

OMG!!! U got gang there as well and the best part is thy all are married to thir galz...awww kriyansh has a son thats so cute...and its amaizing to know they all are still as close and in touch even after strting profession lives. I got so happy to read about gang man...and finally tanya and swayam comming to india...and swayam parents are so sweet , his mum cried awww she loves sharon like a daughter...deep wot an amazing story it is, going forward so nyc and smoothly...love u so much for such an amazing FF *hugs*

Chapter: 5A

Wow that memo flash back was so beautifully decribed i fell in love it...and then it was so flowlessly turned in to a romantic love making moment...it was decribed so decently...main aur kya kaho deep u just nailed it...and thats ur first FF...perfectly done...excited to read wots gna hapen in shimla...the thought behind the name pari seems quite intresting..

Chapter: 5B

Awww shoron lost her memo, now this highly intresting, at begining the way u symbolised sun rise wiv a new behining was awesome...and sharon feing diffr tht day was so romantic...i live it een each time she sits snd get inspire by nature...which decribed so well...u knw wot think,the way i decribing nature its like am.imagening u sitting vry relaxed in a field where u cnt only see green plants and blue sky snd u r there wiv note pad and pen im ur mouth and looking up in.the sky and thinking...this picture comes to.my mind een i imagine u writing.

Chapter: 6

Awww tanya is so adorable...and how sharon felt some thing strong towards tanya was so sweet also kinda emotion mother daughter moment...DEEP how i mean how u get such beautiful thoughts...u r truely ma fav writer...how beaugifully u describe each and evrry relationship be it frndship parentle love or ishq wala searon wala love..u just take iy a whole new level...

Chapter: 7

Those painfull moment was so brllieny penned down...rayam moment was so heart wrinching to read, as the story is proggressing towards the end i.m becomming more and more speechless. Coz with evrry part u are litrally blowing ma mind...u just so good...

Chapter: .8
Yaeee swaron are sooon to meet each other, and tanya is so cute just like her dad...Hats off you deep...u really are awesome and filled wiv so much deep thoughtsBR]

Chapter: 9

Omg omg finally swaron met, i actually feel like it was long sad three yrs, thy had come back together coz thy r made for each other... Okai u.must hve noticed ma comments getting shotter thts coz am running otta words as well as am in hurry to read next chapter 😉

Chapter: 10

Wow sharon in swayams arms...now ther actu romance begins...deep deep deep wot do i say to u yaar ...okai as we action speeks louder thn words and am ready out of words so here u go world tightest hug to u 🤗 and kisses..
And its one o'clock so i shud sleep, i forced ma eyes open coz wanted finish first thread.

Chapter: 11

Deep am back again, normally i read at night time only, but i cudnt wait to.read this one...comming to this chapter i just loved how u showd swayam admiring sharonz beauti in at late night in the moonlight wen shez alseep, sor some strange reason i just everything to do wiv moonlight i guess coz the thought of it sound ao romantic and pure...so thnx for that...dude ur flash backs are killing me thy breath taking to read trust me. So much in.love swaRon that i get goozbumps literally. The present moments were quite emotional wen awayam finds out the truth and how helplessly and silently he cries that i strtd weeping myself. Must be so hard to knw that the person u love like anything and share such beautiful moments wiv dnt knw you any more, just made me thinking about the ppl who go through this coz if only while reading i cnt stop ma tears thn wud thy feel ciz it happens wiv thm...kya yaar deep aap.mjy bohot rulti ho [:'(]

Chapter: 12

Tanya is such cutie and understanding lil angel... Well its not surpring for me coz she is the result.of two pure loving and passionate ppl love... 😳 ...loved the bit wen swayam watch over sharon and tanya wen they both mother and daughter are too bzy loving each other which they missed out on for three long yrs...i love it wen u philosiphically decribe the two heart feeling diffr things.

Chapter: 13


Finally swaron bet to touch each other feel each other cry together...all those special lines they were just fab...how much they care about each other its awesome...missed tanya though...that hug was so romantically written..."i will make u fall in love with me again" it was beautiful

Chapter: 14

Wow finally a perfect family...now i lets get set to experiance swayam and sharon falling in love all over again...this is going to be hell lot of fun to read...this time thy will have cute lil tanya with them as well...

Chapter: 15

And finally sharon went back to the people the house the friends and family she belonged to...awww chachjiwas so sweet am gna miss him if hez not in the story anymore after this..."chachajiaapne muje meri zindagi wapas ki hai main iski apni jaan se b zyada hifazat karoonga" wah wah wah kya line thi...sharon entering mumbai home was the most beautiful moment and specially kriya comming from no where and hugging her was so adorable am waiting for ray and sharon how thy gna meet..

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 🤗 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ this for being an amazing person a romantic writer and deep deepika that you are...i just find myself more in love with you after every chapter i read

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 🤗 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ this for being an amazing person a romantic writer and deep deepika that you are...i just find myself more in love with you after every chapter i read

awww...that was one of the sweetest compliment ever 🤗

Chapter: 16

Awww sharon brokdown infront of swayam fir nt being wiv his all these years for nt exoeriancing tanyaz beautiful childhood... 😳 and finally thy kissed i got m passionate swaron back...intesity is their identity.

Chapter: 17

Hahaha kriya is so mischievious...but very sweet...i love tanya shez removing all the spaces btween swaron...such a cutie she is...deep i love how u described the hearts towards the end

Chapter: 18

Poor sharon been through alot coz swayam still haf family and sign.of their love but she had no one other thn strange ppl, empty past, loveless life, blank.present and loneliness
Swaron spending time at night in balcony wiv each other was quite romantic...romance main tp aap se koi compete nahibkar sakta deep...aham aham i.mean romantic writting...i wonder k.aap real life main bhi.itni romantic ho or this romance is only limited to ur deep thoughts 😉

Chaprer: 19

Chotu but beautiful chapter...

Chapter: 20

Mumma awww that was so cute and emotional, both father and daughter so demanding poor sharon hve to deal wiv two kid kids now
😭 😭 😭. 😭
I heard u update very late
😭 😭 so i m also one of these guyz whoz gna beg u for updates

update ..its been ages u updated

Originally posted by: swaron_pk

update ..its been ages u updated

😲 WHAT????
This FF is nt finished
😭 I.m thinking wow i gt to read it all at once
U knw mere se tu bilkul wait nahi hota
I will just finsh reading nw
Phir kya karungi main