Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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Sunayana27

@Sunayana27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#931

When are you guys going to update...
Its been long since you updated last...
And totally messed up the schedule...
Please hurry up...
Set a new schedule..

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punyashree

@punya25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Awesome Storyline...fun read!!

waiting for the next update

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#933

Rocked this part 👏 Anji is sooo funny 😆 And the chemistry between A&K was too good ☺️ Loved the jalebi eating advice

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Loved A's reaction to everything happening in Raizada house 😆

But the best part was the Kokilaben - I hate the woman and she has been described perfectly in here 👍🏼

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Finally!!! Go PAYAL 👍🏼 I just hope Akash doesn't let the girl get away - if he does then i am gonna

Khushi 'tonsil tennis' expression had me 🤣

Waiting for more - read the note too. Hope Rafa's problems are resolved soon. There are some lost souls here waiting eagerly for ur updates.😭

Love the fact that u give us the dates on which the updates will be here. ❤️

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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#936

this is getting really interesting but I think we are missing a number of updates now!! Hope all problems that writers are having are sorted soon!!

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#937

I am a month and three days late but better late than never 😉

Chapter 7

On a serious note, I am so sorry for the horrendous delay Anissa!

Beginning with the beginning, Me loves how Arnav gets all hormonal and jealous just because Khushi knows NK from a previous connection and a very smart ploy to divert the NK-Khushi meeting to the next writer 😆 *Joking* Anyways, So he is there all masochistic and hold her arms and making them red and you make Khushi say the signature line! Took me back to good old days.

Coming to Akash and Payal encounter. Will have to say this Payal seems to be so much more more fun! She is already weaving tales of her wedding. And what does she know that she has a dinosaur for a sasuma albeit a purple-shades-wearing-pinkey Sasuma! And Manorama Only-one-son-I-havez mamiji is O-M-G hilariously weird/hilarious! And lord forbid a mother who asks her son - 'ee larki tumhar bed mein kya kar rahi hai' Oops! 😉

A scene where ASR is docile! That's hilarious in itself! Oh poor old ASR doesn't know it's wrong to remind Khushi of being a former employer and employee rather than dater and datee 😆

NK's bhangra was a real bhangra with changing positions and dialogues 😉

A wonderful chapter, Anissa!

And I am really sorry about such a late comment! 😊

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Deeksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#938

Chapter 8

'The best defence was a good offence.' In mamijee's words - truez. I love the sight of their civil bickering - Arnav and Khushi being facetiously civil to each other. HA! I agree with Khushi though that he is being a complete switch flip - one moment he is all calm and quiet - letting her accuse him of mental disorder and the next moment he is hurling orders. Talk about manipulation and word wars!

Payal is such a goner. She is talking of love thriving - let it first evolve, girl! She is fun, Gawd! Payal trying to make Akash fall in love without talking of chameli ka tel!

Gota, lota and got-a-go. NK, Uhuh! May be he should continue taking lessons from Khushi - she'll only infuriate Arnav further. Serves her purpose at least!

Khushi is hilarious. She is comparing Arnav with somebody's M-I-L. Woman! Arnav will wring her neck if he comes to know!

Anjali is such a clairvoyant! I just hope her cease-fire prediction is somewhat true. Not that I mind some dhishum-dhishum. 😉

Hayre Nandkishore! A cease-fire and a dabba of jalebi! Khushi tu toh pagalaa jayegi!

A very refreshing chapter, Shiza. I love the detailing which is so easy to associate with the characters 😃

And I'm really very sorry for such a late reply! 😳

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Deeksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#939

Chapter 9

Zehra, I have laughing and laughing and laughing - believe me, I had to literally take a deep breathe in and out - so that my dadi wouldn't wake up with all the laughing!

First thing first waise, 'Aman ka haath' I had to read it twice to understand Arnav wasn't being offered Aman's hand instead he was being offered Aman's hand! Humorous and pun and twist would be such an understatement for this chapter. They went flying from tearing each other's face to thinking about getting married! Oh, Zehra I loved this one so so so much. I can't tell you how much! 😆 🤣

Edited by -Dee- - 12 years ago