Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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Prapty/Maisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#941

LOL...the way you discribed kokila ben and ahem's ji mom was hilarious...but why aren't you guys updating

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Arshi_fanad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#942

Hey, why is there no update.??

I've sent a buddy request. Plz pm me

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Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#943

Payal's actions did not quite match up with her character and personality as described in previous chapters. The continuity is probably very hard to do but otherwise, it was a nice chapter.

Can't wait for the next installment!

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Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I like this collaboration idea and now if only we could get further installments *nudge**nudge**wink*wink* 😉

Btw, is there a way to receive updates? If there is, please PM me!

Edited by Sisbamboo1 - 12 years ago

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Jenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#945

OMG I loved loved loved this!!!!
Once I started reading this I just could not stop.
Expel and Lazyleaves have always been my two absolute fave writers but the rest of the writers are just AMAZING too! I just could not stop reading this. And it had me laughing out loud in some of the parts.
I have spent nearly two hours reading this and neglecting uni work but it was so worth it!
I am so glad I found this! Is chapter 12 the last chapter to have been updated?
Which account do I have to add to be PMed for this AWESOME FF?
God bless all of you AMAZING writers,
Jenna

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Divya Bharathi S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#946

Not a pbm. .Waiting. .

Sabar ka phal meeta hota hei

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undercoverhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#947

ok i wasnt suppose to read this FF but i hv 😡 u guys r 👏 now when is the next update

"Step back, Arnavji. Chulbul Pandey ki kasam, I'll handle this!"🤣😆

"No Khushi, wait I can handle th-" he began to say. But he was cut short when he saw her taking off her earrings.

"Hold my jhumkas Arnavji, I can tell this is going to be tough business". 🤣🤣

So Arnav Singh Raizada stood there holding a pair of earrings, and instead of telling her to back away, he stood there watching like a complete idiot.🤣

He felt'un-manly. 🤣Yes, that was the word. This girl was going to drive him crazy, and he could already tell.👏

"Rocky, instead of going to her, the live item number came to us!" the man exclaimed and they boomed with laughter.😆

"Namaste, I'm Khushi" she said. The two men suddenly stopped laughing and exchanged confused glances at one another. She had a calm stance, but Khushi Kumari Gupta was secretly scheming in her mind.

This was her time to shine, and she was ready to make her Salman Khan ji proud.🤣

"Ladkiyon ko pareshan karne ke alava koi kam nahi hai kya?" she said with hands on her hips.👏

"Kya?" Rocky asked.

She tried speaking in a lower voice, maybe then they would understand that she was representing Chulbul Pandey. 🤣

"Aapke ghar mein ma behen nahi hai kya?" she demanded.👏

"I have a sister'" Rocky said. "Yeah and I live with my mom!" the other man said.🤪

"So how would you feel if some men were teasing them on the streets?" she asked.👏

"Erm'I would feel bad I guess" the man said. "Yeah, me too" Rocky said.

"Look, it's not good to call someone a live item. You guys are like brothers to me, right?" she asked smiling at them.

"Brothers? We're not your brothers!" 🤣😆

"Yes you are Rocky bhaiyaji! Here I'll prove it" she reached into her bag and grabbed two rakhis she had made with her beautiful gotas placed atop. She carried them around in her purse because she liked to befriend people.

She held the rakhis out for them to see. "Can I put these on you two?" she asked sweetly.🤣

The men were undoubtedly bewildered, but they figured that this could probably work out in their favor.

"Now look, these are very important to me. I made them myself and they have...they have..." Khushi started to tear up. "They have gotas on them. It's very special to me, okay?"🤪

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 12 years ago

#948

Loving the story very nice

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varshamaharaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Shalu-

Hey Emma, this chapter was very sweet and lovely. I was indeed smiling throughout and was going "aww" at some parts. Chulbul Pandey-ji would be very proud of her. Oh & I loved the following lines.

"Hold my jhumkas Arnavji, I can tell this is going to be tough business". 🤣

He felt' un-manly. Yes, that was the word.

She tried speaking in a lower voice, maybe then they would understand that she was representing Chulbul Pandey.😆

She carried them around in her purse because she liked to befriend people.😆

I'm not sure why you have not written comedybefore because romantic comedy seems to be totally your thing. You did a great job with this chapter & if you do decide to start a SS/FF with a similar genre, I would definitely love to read! :)

i definitely agree..it was totally hilarious lol...i was laughing so much lol...a brilliant piece of comedy...n yes i would for sure that new ff as well hehe