Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Great update payal really was determined to meet akash. Pleased Khushi had a go back at Arnav hope he realises not to speak to her like that

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urm21

@urm21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

lovely update - great to see ASR back in form, and go K

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Awesome update! I loved it!

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Hey!

Well written chapter! 😊

Really enjoyed reading it. Lots!!! 😃😃

I thought it was pretty good how the scenes alternated between Payal-Aakash and Arnav-Khushi. Adorable stuff written for the former. As for the latter, well fiesty and full of confidence from Khushi's POV. Arnav - well shocked perhaps, or was he harsher than usual too ... This guy seriously needs to reign in that nasty temper of his. ASR in all his f**king glory ey ... whilst Arnav takes a backseat.

Looking forward to the next part!!!!!!!

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Awesome update

loved it

Khushi was a lioness

Poor Arnav

Akash aur Payal ...inka to pyaar shuru ho gaya

What I liked most about the work is Payal and khushi are women of today.They call spade a spade

Edited by bhadraprasad - 12 years ago

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Wow I'm really loving how each one of u r takiing this story forward in each update...What a meeting of our Aakashji & Payal...they met, she fainted & he woke her up emtying a jug of water on her face & not to forget enters our The gr8 Manorama Maami with details of prospective brides for her son...loved every bit of it especially enjoyed Maami's english & NK's hindi...oh how much I miss it...And there begins the clash of the titans...really that's how Arnav & Khushi are...one moment there's love & the next instant they r pulling & pushing the other...waiting for next update

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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

The story has been moving great and an amazing update !!

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mssj

@mssj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

nice update.

cant wit for more.

i lreally loved howw paya-akhash and khushi-arnav story were taking turns :D

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

I was actually hoping for more of a funny update between Arnav and Khushi but what the hell? Why she broke up? No!!!1 :'(

NK was hilarious. I just loved how NK said 'bhangra' and 'Mufti'. LMAO first when I read Mufti I was like what and than I realized that he meant 'murti' but I hope the next update is the patch up of Arnav and Khushi.

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Poor Kushi. Arnav hurt her again by insulting her! Pointing out her "class" - as if that is an indication of humanity! Arnav really needs to pull his socks up if he wants her. I hope it is not too late! Thanks. Waiting for the next part to see what will happen now.

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