Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

interesting update..😊

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arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Fantastic update.

Payal was so after Khushi to come to Shantivan so dat she can see Aakash...n what does she do when she sees him...she faints 😆.N Aakash empties d whole pitcher of water on her 😆.Loved their scene n loved d way Payal answered back Manorama with full confidence.

Also loved Mamiji's hinglish n NK's bhangra.

D slap was surely out of d blue but maybe required to reiterate d fact dat Khushi is not run of d mill type girls who will accept anything.Her last line to Arnav was awesome.

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fareeha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Simply amazing! Gosh i laughed soo much at mami's english, and ofcourse NK's bhangra! Lord that was epic.
So the mystery continues, how does khushi know NK?

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Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

I Swear to god you guys need to update the index!

It took me a while to find this chapter!

Anyways Amzing worki loved how you balanced arShi and Payah! :D

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ASRphanki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Wow..so typically arshi...i can imagine scenes running in my head...nk s bhangra was awesum...;-)

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tashi26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Loved the update...arnav and khushi's Bhangra, and mami's dialog, akash throwing jug full of water on Payal...every scene was brilliantly written

Edited by tashi26 - 12 years ago

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

hmmm...great part...wow...such a daring statement by kushi...looking forward to the next part

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

congrats to all the writers of this collaboration on the new thread!

arnav's shock and irritation at being ignored and khushi slappin him then shoving him into the pillar were epic... she ticking him off right and left and he being mesmerised by her fury were just amazing! good to see her keeping her chin up and not letting arnav see how much he has hurt her

the payal-akash 'relationship' is a tad confusing: she had only dreamt of him and this was her first meeting... had she seen his photos in a magazine and been woolgathering about him... then she faints in his arms like a damsel in distress... thank god he was bowled over by her, though he nearly drowned her while trying to revive her... what a beautiful way to start a relationship 😃! then mamiji had to screech into their budding romance... what I couldn't fathom, though, was why would payal be wandering around a stranger's house especially when she is a gatecrasher almost?!