Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

What a twist. . N lol he s admiring her rage-state. . Aawww cute. . Payash. . Nk n bhangra. . N d english-vinglish helo hi bye bye. . waiting fo nxt part. .

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Have been waiting ... Just realised the updates in a new thread ... 😕

Congratulations on the new thread ... 🥳

Awsome ... Loved the whole jug of water being thrown on Payal and Mami ji coming into the room just then and catching her in Aakash's bed 😲 ... hahahaha ...

Arnav and Khushi's bashing and pushing was the pits after the passionate kiss shared the previous day ... 😆 ...

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Well that was angry and sad at thesame time with tightening 0f chest which in turn was a abs0lute necessity c0nsidering the pr0per intr0ducti0n Arnav was yet t0 get. S0 the hint was thr0wn 0ut and caught successfully.

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Great twist! Loved the update!

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Nikita

@nikita_88

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Reserved... Nearly missed this update!

*unreserved*

Awesome update!

Really well written - Man you guys are really building the pressure on all the writers to come!

OMG I loved it - OTT mami is a must 😆

Bhangra Hahahhahaha oh NK!

I loved Khushi's rage and I am glad Arnav responded as ASR and not Arnav - it was needed because I think when Khushi sees Arnav she will understand the need for ASR

Payal and Akash - the whole jug of water - what is wrong with Akash? But I am glad Payal stood up for herself to Mami, it was needed...

The ending let chaos insue and this is before Anjali is even part of the mix... 😆 If only Arnav and Khushi were caught in a compromising position 🤣

Can not wait for the next update!

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Oh good , an interesting Payal ...and our very own Khushi feisty as usual

Lovely update and thnx for the pm in advance .

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

part 7
awesome...
Payal is so dreamy...
and Maami so controlling and dramatic...
NK as always funny...
cont soon dear...

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justforuse

@justforuse

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Loved.

Every update is a surprise!

I really enjoyed akash and payal and oh so shrill voiced mamiji.

Again great synchronization. Dialogues were really well written in hindi.

It did make me smile...a wideee smile. I cant really laugh at work... :-/

Great job!!!

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Great update. Loved the scene between payash. I can't believe she fainted at the sight of him. So funny.

Arnav really was acting like a bafoon, I see the little green monster has reared it's ugly head.

So how does Khushi know NK?

Looking forward to finding out.