Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Wow.

I love where the story is going!!

Awesome awesome update.

Go, Khushi. 👏

Payal actually spoke to Manorama? Huh. She has a backbone!!😃

Thanks for the PM..

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Updated on pg 13 my boss 😛

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Zarahatke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Amazing
Amazing
Amazing
Love the way khushi reacted
And my ASR is back in action

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Great update! Congrats on thread 2.

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J P

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Buddy are u serious Rom-Com not ur cup of tea?? Like dude u got to be kidding!!

I had a constant grin on my face! Except ofcourse the ArShi fight path! Ayyo two ego-headed ppl and no one will let go!

But ur switch there n here style of writing was fun exactly at the right tym u switch to the other part of the story n keep d thrill intact!!

And my god the lady spoke lots in anger n he was no less but I'm wondering how will they patch up now!

PayAsh ntn needs to be done their super Manorama lady has put 2 n 2 = 40!

Cheers

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..Anita..

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Wow she has some nerve to slap the great ASR!!!

Loved the update

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JerryTheMouse

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Brilliant update!

What a fight! Full of feelings and passion!

And Akaash and Payal meeting! 😆

To cute!

Thank you!

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: ankii543
18pages of comments without a single update...awsome...ur killing me dude...plz update sooon
...im waitin...pm me...:)

Chapter 7 has been posted on page 12.😊

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inspiringstars

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Loving this story girls, Keep it coming!

Khushi is fiesty, I love her, not so weak, and submissive! I love that!

Payal and Akash, dreamy, and romantic...LOL :P

Arnav, well, lets see, he is the same arrogant ass, hope he realizes the worth of people around soon.

NK, adorable as usual!

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Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Polkadots78
I see a res for update...can't wait...kerchief

Unes..

So the star stuck Payal has a voice in tis story..I am so glad...I could not have handled another crying blubbering Payal..that character has so much potential...but Akash is unaware of her existence..interesting

khushi slapped Arnav and he let her rave and rant and push him around😲..you go girl..physical violence is not cool in any form and I am glad you put the point across...

NK 's mystery is still open to speculation...
Nice progression of the story...well done😊

just realized that what khushi did was also physical violence😳..not cool