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Posted: 12 years ago

It was an amazing update & thanks for the PM 😊

  • Arnav chiding himself for missing the chance of seeing Khushi in red was sweet

  • Khushi assuring herself that maybe it was normal to behave like that in parties to Arnav's gestures of holding her seemed very cute & pointed out her matured thought of reasoning out a situation before creating a scene, especially in a social gathering which would ultimately result in tarnishing Arnav's name & image in the society was admirable

  • Arnav planning to leave the party abruptly, the moment she took Akash's name, sending Aman to interrupt the friends & holding Khushi possessively more closer than before and not letting her go from him points out his fear of losing her and his unwillingness to even risk the meagre chance of any such thing happening

  • Arnav at first accidentally rising his hand on her back from where it was previously placed & deciding to withdraw it but changing his mind the next instance on witnessing Akash glancing at his Khushi was beautifully portrayed

  • Arnav's thought of not professing things without being certain of Khushi's feelings depicts how much he respects her feelings

Quoted the lines that I loved the most :

  • ...he could not take his eyes off of her. She was a vision, and she was his. A renewed wave of possessiveness swept over him.
  • 'If she looks so delectable in white, how would have she looked in red?' he deliberated. He had no one but himself to blame for missing that vision, he rued.
  • How to tell a girl who is looking absolutely ravishing and sexy, that she is looking more than okay, WAY MORE, without sounding cheesy? he pondered.
  • 'Why? I mean are you getting bored? Do you wanna go back? We can leave' suddenly all his attention was on her.
  • If Arnav was half interested in the party earlier, his full interest now went down the drain at seeing his white angle gliding towards that idiotly grinning Akash Roy.
  • And after 20 minutes whatever little patience he had, snapped.
  • As soon as Khushi reached Arnav, he latched his left hand at the small of her back, on the pretext of introducing her to someone, and then innocently forgot to take his hand back, for the rest of the party.
  • 'Its normal. Don't overreact. Everyone is standing like this only' she kept chanting in her mind, all the while giving side glances to an ignorant-to-her-plight Arnavji. Only that, he was very much aware of his hand, her reaction and her plight.
  • Just then Arnav turned to his side, his other side, and simultaneously his hand on Khushi's back rode up a little, KNOCKING THE BREATH OUT OF THEIR LUNGS.
  • Should I move? Will that look rude? Does Arnavji even realize where his hand is?' her confused mind went into over drive now.
  • And his first instinct was to pull his hand back. But something stopped him. ...And it felt heavenly. He did not want to take his hand back, but he knew things will get very awkward between them if he did not. And he had all the intentions to draw his hand back at that moment, had he not seen Akash looking lost into Khushi from a distance.
  • 'Well, we have to take a step ahead from somewhere. Why not here? She has to be taken out of her friendship zone. I am doing nothing wrong, Khushi is mine' his mind took a U-turn.
  • Her cluelessness was very cute, but he does not have time to humor it, specially with her random 'friends' turning up on his door step. But however certain he was about his feelings, it did not mean he'll profess them without being sure of hers.❤️

Waiting to read more

Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
anonymous BiBi update kardein pliss!! *clasps hands*😵
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fleurs

It was an amazing update & thanks for the PM 😊

  • Arnav chiding himself for missing the chance of seeing Khushi in red was sweet

  • Khushi assuring herself that maybe it was normal to behave like that in parties to Arnav's gestures of holding her seemed very cute & pointed out her matured thought of reasoning out a situation before creating a scene, especially in a social gathering which would ultimately result in tarnishing Arnav's name & image in the society was admirable

  • Arnav planning to leave the party abruptly, the moment she took Akash's name, sending Aman to interrupt the friends & holding Khushi possessively more closer than before and not letting her go from him points out his fear of losing her and his unwillingness to even risk the meagre chance of any such thing happening

  • Arnav at first accidentally rising his hand on her back from where it was previously placed & deciding to withdraw it but changing his mind the next instance on witnessing Akash glancing at his Khushi was beautifully portrayed

  • Arnav's thought of not professing things without being certain of Khushi's feelings depicts how much he respects her feelings

Quoted the lines that I loved the most :

  • ...he could not take his eyes off ...
  • ... he'll profess them without being sure of hers.❤️

Waiting to read more



Thanks Fleurs for such an insightful comment :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
great work, read in one go
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it! Personally, this was the best chapter till now. I enjoyed it! With Khushi's breathlessness, even I was..lol..But the emotions were written beautifully. I loved Khushi's confusing thoughts and Arnav's possessiveness and jealousy...Thank u for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read it all.its super interesting..and the characters are so entertaining..+arnavs line of thoughts are a treat to read.. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have one more suggestion too -

At the end of every chapter do mention the next chapter's link so that the reader does not have to constantly go to the Index. This way it will give a book effect.
The ongoing readers will go by the title but the ones who have just come along might face a little difficulty in doing the same.

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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Very interesting completely Jealous Arnav with clear feelings & A confused Khushi about Arnav.

Edited by Arhi-Did-IT - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb
Hope arnav tells her that he love her soon.

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