Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 2)

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@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: shaz007
It was nice to read about Khushi feelings and her POV. Things now are clear waiting for Arnav to tell her... And now with Akash In between things seem to take an interesting turn. Let's see how Arnav succeeds in keeping Khushi away fom Akash. Can't wait to read further.

Thanks for a detailed comment :)

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

good chapter. fair balance and promise for the future.

interesting that she doesn't see him "that" way. he seems clear about what he wants. the akash character is a bit strange. he should have noted asr's behaviour at the party, showing up at the boss's house to woo someone who was the boss's date 3 days ago and who lives with the boss should have triggered a thought process for him.

interesting story, keep us looking forward to the next update

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831628

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Nice storyline read it in one go...nice

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horizon123

@horizon123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

that was awsum.👏

Arnav sounds too confident about his effects on Khushi. Hope he tells her soon before it is too late. I doubt Khushi will reciprocate to Akash's feeling as she is already unknowingly smitten by Arnav😳

Thanks for this wonderful update😃

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Arnav will have to pick up pace, or this Aakash fella will swoop right in. And that would leave our darling Khushi in a very awkward position. She is yet to comprehend her feelings for Arnav, let alone understand his signals. Arnav is not going to be all that "cool" about Khushi's visit to Aakash's house, is he ? :D

Thanks for the PM !