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Woot! Read through the entire FF and I must say that you have woven a very different story unlike any other on the forum. Unique in its own way. And I refuse to believe that this is your first attempt at writing. Hmm.. But if that is true then its commendable!!
Khushi being Shyam's adopted sister and gradually falls in love with Arnav (hopefully?) A very engaging story line. Well Done!
I wish I had come across this FF earlier. Sigh. But late is better than never or something like that right?
It must be so hard to take care of your brother's kids at such a young, ripe age. And added to that losing Nani- the solitary guide. If this was the case with Khushi I cant wonder how Arnav must have felt. Coming the recent update, the entire jealous and flirty side of him makes such a good combination. I can already feel the sparks from Arnav side. Maybe Khushi will get burnt in it too.. very soon ;)
And your style of writing is different. I am so used to dialogue centric stories that it becomes a little bit hard to follow but I am enjoying it :)
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