TS FF-raksha bandhan:rishta bhai-behen ka(part 15) - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
Kyun rula rhi ho...loved d update god...taayam were really sho shweeet in their childhood...swayams love n care ...its jst awesummm
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haye jaldi se update karo and its nice but no more flashback dear
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So touching and sweet dear...!!! Made me want for a brother...!
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You know what?? i cry reading every update of this FF😭 .. even if there is nothing to cry and even if its a sweet moment bw taayam then also i cry coz i just love the bond they share .. the way you write it makes me tooo emotional...i never imagined there could be such an awesome work on taayaam.. like i have read only you know couple FFs swaroon, taarey n all but this is all different such an amazing work on a brother and sister ...
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WARNING- poora note padna isme DEMAND bhi hai😆

hey guys i am back but iss baar rulane ke liye nahi smile karwane ke liye😆 waise mujhe lagta hai aap logon ko ye ss bohot pasand hai! theek hai update ke baare me bolne ke baad ye bol dena ki is poore ss me aapka favourite line konsa tha, koi bhi chalega but its compulsory for everyone who are commenting, samajh lo meri demand hai😉 ok now enough of my bak-bak

PART-6:- I AM SORRY TAANI PLEASE MAAN JAAO NA!

all in the rehearsal hall were smiling through there tears. they were thinking how beautiful bond taayam were sharing. all the girls including sharon now wanted a caring brother like swayam(not swayam) and all the boys wanted a cute little sister like taani(not taani, rey is here na!).

swayam suddenly realized something and shouted on top of his voice- HEY KRISHNA JI !!!

the whole team was startled.

vicky- kya hua be! bhukamp aa gaya kya!

sharon- oh shut up vicky! kya hua swayam?

swayam- hey krisna ji taani theek ho!

rey(worried+concerned)-taani theek ho se kya matlab tha tera? taani kisi musibat me hai kya?

swayam- yaar rey kitni baar kahoon shubh-shubh bol na! ese dara kyun raha hai?

nil- but dude hua kya?

swayam- guys mene tum sabko abhi hamare first raksha bandhan ke baare me kaha na!

rinni- haan par usme panic karne wali kya baat hai?

swayam- are taani jab tak mujhe raaki baandh nahi leti tab tak wo paani ka ek boond nahi peeti!

sharon- oh god! iska matlab wo abhi tak bhooki-pyaasi hai!

swayam- oh god! mujhe use dhoondhna hoga isse pehle ki wo behosh ho jaye, lekin itne bade college mein me use kahan dhoondhoonga?

rey- mujhe pata hai wo abhi kahan hogi!

all looked towards rey weirdly.

rey- what guys! tum log mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

vicky- tujhe kaise pata ki taani abhi kahan hogi?

rey- wo...wo...wo meri boss hai itna to me jaanta hi hoon!

swayam- haan to jaldi bata na kahaan hai wo

rey- fire exit mein dekh wahin hogi wo

a soon as rey completed he rushed towards the fire exit. he was running like some men are behind him with knifes in their hands😆. all were staring at him like he has gone crazy.

he reached at the door of fire exit. he was about to open it but what he heard next broke his heart into hundred pieces.

taani from inside- me ek bad luck hoon, bad luck. me bhai ke liye ek bojh ban gayi hoon! agar aisa hi hai to me unki zindagi se chali jaaungi, me wapas jodhpur chali jaaungi, unki life se door, unse door taaki unko mujhe jhelna na pade( tears streaming down her delicate eyes)

first swayam was hurt and now he was angry on her

swayam in his mind- how can she even think like that? wo aisa kaise soch sakti hai ki wo mere liye bojh ban gayi hai? and usne aisa socha bhi kaise ki wo mujhe chod ke chali jaayegi?

he couldn't control anymore and pushed the doors. she saw towards the door and saw swayam staning there, she got up and wiped her tears.

taani- bhai aap chale jaayiye abse me aapko pareshaan nahin karungi, me aapko pareshaan nahi...(she was cut by swayam)

swayam- taani ye kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum? kisne kaha tumse ki tum mere liye ek bojh ho? aisa kaise soch sakti ho ke tum ek bad luch ho?(he cupped her face)

tum to mere liye sunshine ho, ray of hope ho! tum to wo phool ho mere liye jisko dekhke man khushiyon se bhar jaata hai! and bojh! seriously taani tum aisa sochti ho? are tum mere liye drugs ki tarah ho, jiski ek baar aadat pad jaaye to chah kar bhi nahi jaati.

doobara aisa kabhi mat kehna samjhi! agar kaha na to tumhare room me cockroaches chod doonga, fir idhar se udhar bhaagti rehna. fir last mein mere paas aake kahogi (mimicrying her) bhai plz mujhe bachao iss cockroach se plz plz!😆

he laughed and hugged her. she was about to hug him back but stopped. she thought of something and pushed him away. swayam was hell shocked as well as the audience outside(i know u guys too😆).

swayam- taani kya hua?

taani- bhai me aapse abhi bhi gussa hoon!😡

swayam- but taani ab kya hua

taani- kya hua? aapne kya socha me aapko itni aasani se maaf kar doongi? then u are wrong mr. swayam shekhawat urf bhai!😆 aapne socha hoga ki meri behen itni sweet hai maaf kar degi! lekin bhai aaj tak aapne sirf mera pyaar dekha hai ab aap mera gussa dekhoge

OH MY GOD! taani shekhawat gussa wo bhi apne bhai se!😲 ye to not possible, never possible, impossible hai.😆 par kya kare kisi mahaan vyakti ne kaha hai nothing is impossible in this world😆

uss mahan vyakti ki jay ho aur sabse bada example aapke saamne hai😆

swayam- what? taani plz don't do this I AM SORRY TAANI PLEASE MAAN JAAO NA! plz itni nainsaafi mat karo!

taani sternly- bye bhai! aur mujhe rokne ki koshish bhi mat karna

taani turned and said in her mind- hey krishna ji bhai pe badi daya aa rahi hai! aww my poor bhai!😆 mene to aapko maaf kar diya hai, par itni aasani se kaise jaane doon?

agar aap swayam shekhawat ho to me bhi taani shekhawat hoon, ab dekhna ye taani shekhawat aapko kaise aage-peeche ghumati hoon!😆 itna rulaya! ab to chun-chun ke badla loongi, so swayam shekhawat just wait and watch(smiled evilly)😈

taani to all the readers of this ss- guys jis bhi mahaan vyakti ne ye kaha tha ki nothing is impossible in this world, wo bevakoof, gadha, ullu ka pattha tha! kyunki taani shekhawat aur apne bhai se gussa! its impossible!😆waise aap sabke liye ye aur koi ladka padh raha hai to plz faint mat hona(she gives a flying kiss, catch it guys!)

taani opens the door and founds whole team there watching and listening all this.

gang stammering- h...hi...hii taani

taani smiles sarcastically- bye!

she goes from there and swayam comes out.

vicky- swayam mujhe na tujhpe daya aa rahi hai(all laughs)

swayam- oye has kya rahe ho haan! hasna band karo aur meri madad karo

all started thinking and suddenly...

swayam shouts- idea!

by this all look at him- kya?

they all stand in round like a group hug discussing their plan

gang- awesome idea!

swayam- so guys mission raksha bandhan

all kept their hands over swayam's hand and shouted- mission raksha bandhan!

swayam- so miss taani shekhawat here comes your bhai urf swayam shekhawat!😈

swayam to all the readers of this ss- guys aaj tak swayam shekhawat ka charm aap sabpe chala hai, so wish karo ke ye meri stubborn behen par bhi chal jaye. aur ye aap sab ke liye( he gives u all a flying kiss, catch it!) hey! sharon ko mat batana! ok😆

so guys ye part over how was that?i know mene likha hai to awesome hoga hi na😆 waise flying kiss kaisi thi?😉😆 hey demand padhi na! compulsory hai!😈 aur haan bade wale comments ok! and haan jisko bhi pm chahiye plz buddy me ok!😊

- by your cutie adi😊

Edited by adi.cutiepie - 12 years ago
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rey- mujhe pata hai wo abhi kahan hogi!

all looked towards rey weirdly.

rey- what guys! tum log mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

vicky- tujhe kaise pata ki taani abhi kahan hogi?

rey- wo...wo...wo meri boss hai itna to me jaanta hi hoon

sorry sorry i kno yeh taayam ka ss hein
but i found this part soo pyaara
k m a taarey addict...and i love this ss like hell

i really want that part to happen in the show...i mean kitni weirdly cute tha...

u r an amazing writer...pretty plz update sooonnn

jaise swayam ke liye taani ek drug ki tarah hein...likely ur ss is to me...m damn addicted to it...cuz it that fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by chaichil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnk u sooo much 4 dis happy updat
lv u and TAAYAM
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chand91

thnk u sooo much 4 dis happy updat

lv u and TAAYAM
😊

aur meri demand ka kya???😡agar kisi ek ne bhi demand poora nahi kiya to no update!😡

Edited by adi.cutiepie - 12 years ago

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