TS FF-raksha bandhan:rishta bhai-behen ka(part 15)

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TAAYAM FF- RAKSHA BANDHAN: RISHTA BHAI BEHEN KA


hi guys,well aap sabko title padhke pata chal hi gaya hoga ki this is a taayam os. well its for u nuckts jisne mujhe iss cute se bro-sis jodi par ek os likhne ke liye idea diya😊. so here u go-

okay the dance ban was over, sharon was back. there was a competition for the team and they were participating as louisians. aashi joined team weaklings and was taking vishakha's place

it was raksha bandhan. taani woke up at 6 am. she sat on the bed

taani(to herslf)-hey krishnaji aaj raksha bandhan hai me aaj bahut khush hoon.

plz krishnaji aise hi bhai ki khushiyan kayam rakhiyega ab sab kuch theek hai sharon bhabhi jo wapas aa gayi hai.

chalo me jaake thaal saja deti hoon unhe raakhi jo baandhni hai

she took bath and prepared thaal for the rituals.

she went to his room she didn't found him there.

she searched the whole house but didn't find him and at last she came to the hall,

on the table she found a note it was written-

taani sorry me bina bataye jaa raha hoon par aaj 5 baje ke rehearsals the aur tum so rahi thi so tumhe disturb karna nahi chahta tha . tum naashta zarur kar lena aur ham college mai hi milenge, bye.

taani to herself- kya? bhai chale gaye! are mujhe mera gift dekhna tha!(she pouted) har saal bhai mujhe sabse accha gift dete hai aakhir kar wo iss duniya ke sabse acche bhai hai

theek hai rakhi saath le jaati hoon wahin baandh doongi par me naashta nahin kar sakti, sorry bhai.

it was 8 am

here swayam and the team was rehearsing.

swayam-ok guys abhi ke liye itna hi baaki shaam ko karlenge chalo sab naashta kar lete hai wese bhi college aadhe ghante mai start hone wala hai

everyone agreed and marched towards the canteen and all sat down to eat. all were eating but swayam was not.

all noticed this they loked at each other then again at swayam.

vicky- are swayam tu kha kyun nahin raha hai?

swayam- are nahin guys me nahi khaaunga wo mujhe pata nahin bada ajeeb sa lag raha hai koi strong feeling aa rahi hai so u guys continue

rey- strong feeling are par hua kya hai?

swayam- meri 6th sense keh rahi hai something is wrong so u guys eat

swayam in his mind- kya hua? mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki mujhe nahin khana chahiye?

aisa feel ho raha hai jaise agar maine abhi ye kha liya to kisiko bahut chot pahunchegi?

thik hai me khana nahin khaaunga jab tak mujhe pata nahin chal jata ke ye kyun hua hai!

INDEX-

part 1-pg 1

promo-pg 2

note-pg 6

part 2

part 3

part 4

part 5

part 6

part 7

part 8

part 9

part 10

part 11

part 12

part 13

fun update

part 14

part 15

ok guys this was the first part iska part 2 bhi hai so how was it?aur haan mujhe dher saare comments aur likes chahiye tabhi mai update karungi😉😆 page 4 se pehle to update hi nahi karungi😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyyi am first!

i love taayam...dey r a vry cute bro-sis jodi...n u did gr8 job...awww swayam he loves his sis so much...plz update soon

u knw wat..d onli thing i dnt lyk abt ss os n ff on dis forum is...ki muje updates k liye w8 karna padta hai..i knw m being selfish...bt mera bas chale toh puraa din...sabke updates hi padti jau... 😆

anyways dear update soon n plz pm me :)

i read it b4 d pm... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow i sooo lovd it...plz update soon...actually i love taayam alot...taani n swayum looks vry cute n adorable together...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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di it was oswome
i love bro-sis bonding
plz update soon dear
n thanx 4 d pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love taayam...plz cont fast...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!
first of all a big HUG from my side!🤗
thank you so much dear for creating this os😃
i am really excited to read the other part as well!
it was awesome the way swayam's 6th sense worked and off course taani getting up and seeing the note
swayam is really the world's best brother!
love you,love nuckts!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so cute! Swayam wasn't eating kyunki use lag raha tha something is wrong.. Of course Taani wasn't eating.. He forgot Raksha Bandhan.. Aur phir gift ka kya hoga?! Update soon yaar.. N pm me! This is going to be so amazing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love Taayam so i love this os thanks for making os on Taayam and update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so cute... loved it... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update.
I always like Taayam's bond.
swayam is so sweet bro.
Taani is carrying sis.
happy to hear that someone is writing on that.
and pls. pls. continue soon and do pm me.


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