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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

I have always loved your style of writing but this one really blew me away.

The whole confession of a man who has inflicted so much abuse within one night, left her at the mercy of an animal, inhuman treatment one innocent soul. As much as I love Arnav this action of hisis totally unjustified but at the same time I cannot bear to see him hurt emoitonally or physcially... You did not drag the incident unnecessarily and I would have loved to see this in the show.

The family seeing this played out in front of them was excellent, no need fro secrets in the story line, NK as always a true friend in need. Now I want to see how you write Arnav's redemption, rise from disgrace and what Khushi will do and know you will not disappoint at all.

Your tribute to a lost but never forgotten soul is endearing.

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

It was really really touchy fiction...

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samirao

@samirao

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Thanks for pm , very intresting and intense update , Iam glad that Arnav comes back , plz continue

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

OMG! Juhi, the chap1 was so intense that you made my 'bolti bandh'!! Am too stunned to wite anything further.

Will come back to comment later.

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Muskaan_87

@Muskaan_87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

lovely!

congrats for new story:)

thanks alot for PM me:)

waiting for next update:)

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

amazing...
AND THANK U...because i now know where u were inspired from...thanks for writing a tribute for Amanat...

truly looking forward to reading the next parts of this heartwrenching tale...

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

OMG! Did she get raped? Or was she somehow spared? OMG! Poor Kushi. (And yes, the victim and her family. My heart goes out to them. We can only pray that God give them the strength to carry on. It sounds trite, but there is nothing we can do, except pray. Pray for the victim's soul, pray for the family. And hope that they are able to manage despite their grief and sorrow. It must be awful for the parents of the victim, to deal with this kind of death for their child, when any kind of passing away is so filled with dread.)

OMG! I sincerely hope that Kushi was spared. And Arnav? Well, he must pay for his consequences. But I wouldn't like him to pity her. This is a very heavy story. Thanks for the PM. I am waiting for the next part. I want to see what Arnav will do and how will he ask for forgiveness? I hope she doesn't forgive him too easily. And what happened to Shyam? Where is he? I hope he gets caught and dies a slow, torturous death. Waiting...