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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

heartbreaking in every sense

i have goosebumps
damn scary
feel like killing that bas*ard named shyam
i hope khushi will fight n conquer
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reading this part really tore my heart...n yes indeed a tribute to the one who fought till the very end of her life...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Really emotional chapter!
Shyam is a sick bas***d!
I feel really sorry for Kushi who was punished by both Arnav and Shyam for no fault of her own.Although it was Shyam that had done more damage, it was Arnav's actions that paved the path for him.
What happened to Shyam when Arnav finally reached the poolside?Did he quickly escape?
Hope Arnav has the courage to face Kushi and pick up her broken pieces when she wakes up!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Absolutely brilliant!
When I was reading the update, a chill ran down my spine.
Let her soul rest in peace.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Juhi.. I swear my heart stopped.

Brilliant!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Firstly kudos for you to use real life inspiration in thjis update. Abuse in any form is unacceptable. There is nothing insignificant about someone getting molested or groped.

This is absolutely brilliant. I read the prologue and chapter 1 together. After reading the prologue I wasn't sure of the Diary format, but all my doubts were addressed with Chapter 1. I love the setting and tone of this FF so far and I like how you have gone to great lengths to explain Arnav's feelings, guilt, remorse.

Cant wait for read more

TFS

Res4Lyfe

(P.S- Im yet to write a comment for the last chapter of LL2W, will do at some point today, apologies)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Amazing update,Juhiji.

And to the person who was the inspiration of this update,
RIP brave girl.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Hey!
This was intense, realistic and to be honest, I had a lump in my throat whilst reading this.
What Khushi went through you described it accurately.
As for Damini, the brave young woman who should've been here ... isn't. She fought till her last breath. A fighter. Strong. Courageous. She shouldn't have had to go through such a traumatic ordeal. Being raped in the f**king first place by 6 men was horrendous and if that wasn't enough for them, they beat her as she fought back. They couldn't take her defiance. They couldn't take her no. They wanted to kill her. bas***ds!!! 😡😡😡 I'm pretty sure they have wives, mothers, sisters and daughters of their own ... so how would they feel if it were their loved ones in Damini's place. Wouldn't like it would they?!!! NO! They wouldn't.
They deserve to be hanged and justice needs to be served.
They should be beaten.
Left to bleed for a short while. Bruised.
Castrated with the most sharp object ever sooo slowly infront of the public.
And only then should they be hanged.
Even doing this is less than what they did to Damini.
Thinking about this tears me up.
India needs to seriously buckle up their ideas ASAP and especially those concerning women in the country.
Erm ... Arnav's description in the diary was emotional. He conveyed his emotions by this. He couldn't face the family and too right. He is supposed to be her husband. Her protector. Her equal. But ... it feels like he just left her to be eaten like a piece of meat to a vile specimen. Yes he did try to help. Trying to break down the door. But if was so intelligent then he could've asked her what happened on the terrace. He could've hired a private investigator with all the money and power he has in order to find out the truth. He could've thought with his heart. Just this one time. And see the consequences of his actions now ... A bloody dick I tell you!!! 😡
May Damini rest in peace. You'll always be remembered. Justice needs to be served. I don't care if the youngest man of the 6 was 16 or 17. He's old enough to know the difference between right and wrong. He's just as guilty in my eyes. My prayers are with Damini's family and friends.
Well-written. Thankyou.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
a timely tribute to a brave soul!
such an emotional update and such an apt choice of words and phrases that I couldn't tear my eyes off this page! some of the most moving lines to ever be written about the changes khushi brought about in asr's life: I fought her when she threatened my barren existence , bringing life and light into my world when I thought I didn't need them. I fought her for making me feel, when I had been perfectly happy in an emotionless vacuum.
shyam's assault is more horrendous than anything he did in the show... thank god nk had the presence of mind to tell arnav what to do or he would have been too late to 'save' khushi... must say he's already too late in every sense of the word... loved khshi's indomitable spirit that kept fighing on and never gave up nor looked to her 'husband' for help!
can understand his remorse, but too little too late! could merrily kick him where it hurts and stomp on him for good measure! deeply interested in knowing what reason he'll come up with for having forcibly married her, then abandoned her out in the cold, leaving her free to be assaulted... kudos to you for coming up with this storyline!
Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
AWESOME PLS CONT SOON 😊😊
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