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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
oh boy that was horrendous right
her trying to fight all the way through but obviously not able to overcome that beast
but of course she couldnt give up now could she
man you yourself gave him the chance to do this to her
husband i think not you are the one responsible for all this
and what ever happens now if you dont get her justice and face up to your sins then there is no point in her being here
how will he face her now
and is it possible to do so
when you are the reason she is in this state
man arnie you gotta man up to your responsibilities here
didnt think he was this mad that he would do this with all the ppl watching him but i guess we underestimated the evil in him
cheers for pm
oh yes it brought tears to think what that girl went through and now she is no more
she was brave though having being molested she didnt keep quiet and managed to report against them
even if she isnt alive am sure she shall get her justice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Juhi,

It is really hard to comment on something so heart wrenching. I am sort of glad you are writing it from Arnav's POV which is hard enough to take because the description, feelings are so vivid. I could "feel" his grief, despair, outrage, feeling of sheer helplessness and his pride in the slip of a girl who was fighting back.

Great job

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
ITs painful...heart wrenching...You made me cry...I love the way Arnav's emotions are described...Fantastic writing...With a superb start...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
wow...I dont even know what to say... god..
Hriju321 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Wonderful start.Eagerly waiting for your update.Can you please PM me?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
That bas**** Shyam..🤬 Good that Arnav has realized.. And the whole family too.. Hopefully its not too late...

I know the inspiration behind this... She left us but taught us a lesson of a lifetime with her death... May she rest in peace...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
for the life of me i cant read this story but i cant run away too...
i just cant believe the audacity of men who commit such a grave sin against women i dont understand what pleasure do they get by doing so...they are monsters...and our society too is hypo-critic at its best sometimes ...when i read the slogans by the protestors saying dont ask your daughters to dress nicely ask your sons to behave properly i got teary eyed... it is so true...
i truly appreciate you taking up this sensitive topic and doing full justice to it...i wish you the very best with everything...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Juhi, this was heartbreaking. I almost felt like I was there on the other side of the glass, looking on as helplessly as Arnav.
Arnav's helplessness, his rage and finally his guilt at putting Khushi through this devastation...you have written it beautifully.
A fitting tribute to Nirbhaya and to all the other women who fought until there was no more fight left in them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Chapter 1 was very intense. You wrote it wonderfully.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Ok that cought me by surprise...
thank you...but a bigger thanx cos you dedicated a piece where you have pushed your bounderies...
a horrendous incident in first person limits the reader from an holistic view (in my opinion) but you have done justice to ASR...'s almost bland narration...and his demons...
Juhi 🤗

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