IPKKND SS:Sins * Thread 1*

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

You write very well... Describing the events and Arnavs anguish in vivid detail... Brilliant story and concept... Well done... Eager, very eager to read more...:)

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Brilliant ! Your writing always leaves me wanting for more!

It was just brilliant, loved how you portrayed the entire incident and the various stages and how so many emotions were shown and how they felt...it was just superb !

Cannot wait to read more...th and for the pm!

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

I kept praying that let that emptiness in her eyes be for killing shyam with one of arnav's gardening tools lying around...i kept praying ever since arnav saw shyam behind the glass door that let the sin be murder and nothing else...i guess death would have been better

Kudos to you for writing something so painful without making it gross...how with one diary entry everyone's thoughts and anguish could be felt...and yeah...how ARE you going to face her now arnav? I have never hated Arnav Singh Raizada more than the night he threw her out to the pool😡

Brilliantly written

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VasantiLad

@VasantiLad

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Wow that was truely amazing- moved me beyond reason - very poignant- I love the prose that you use- very talented you are!!

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Omg great update
the bit by the door when she said his name and raised her hand to touch him through the glass had me in tears
shyam is sick hate him
please update soon

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Aisha

@asha...

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

RES

I wrote a comment...but my laptop died on me ;(

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Iamyself

@Iamyself

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

I cried while reading this.

Beautifully written. (Y)

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Nikita

@nikita_88

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Interesting idea...

The first part has be speechless... Really well written...

Cont soon

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Shazeia

@shaz007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

An intense heart touching story. I have sent you a buddy request plz do pm when you update.

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

i loved the way you explained her eyes..
this was one hell of an update...it was gut wrenchingly sad in a minute and nighmarishly eerie in the next...
i know your inspiration to pen this down..
but i wish khushi's body surrenders to her fight to survive unlike daminis..the strongest woman to walk the earth !!!

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