Swaron SS:Missing Life...[Chap 11 Pg 70]

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DreamCatcher..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Amazing n super ss👏..

Swaron in simla..imagining is only awesome..

Humesha swayam sharon ko surprise karthe hai..but this sharon surprised swayam which surprised us too😉..

Waiting for ur update..

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Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

loved reading it.. whole chapter was beautifully penned down👏
never expected sharon would suprise swayam like dis.. its like dream cum true for swayam
SwaRon in Shimla...waitng eagerly for nxt part...
thankz simren n Aruba for d pm..🤗

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Kesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

OH MY GOODNESS!

You write really fabulously!

Thanx Shrutz for the scrap!

Will be waiting for next part 😉

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swaron_tanha4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Awsum part...*brilliantly*penned dow. ⭐️
Enjoyed reading reading it...thrghout... 😛
especially sharon's instruction... 😆
updTe soon 😊

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Ria

@Ria_SwaRon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awesome concept dii...!!!

liked it to the core..!!

Sharon and Swayam on a picnic... that too to Shimla... yaayy..!!!!:) :)

and idea bhi Sharon ka tha... ek aur yayyy..!! yippee...!! :P :)

and are u sure u writing for the first time...????

I don't think so...!!!!!

I hope u update next part soon..!!!

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

omg..!! was dis ur 1st one dear?

it was soo damn beautiful yaar..!!

palki should visit the forum yaar to get ideas frm so talented writers here..!!

i juzz loved it to infinity ...plz do write more n cont soon..!!

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sweetmel

@sweetmel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Wow Awesome Chapter😊

loved the part .Swaron in shimla for vacation.😊

Loved the way how sharon give him instruction & he followed it.😊

Please cont😊.

Thanks for PM😊

PM me next time you update your chapter😊

😊Melvi😊

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

This was awesome. I liked how you kept Swayam and Sharon's chore personality most strikingly similar to the Swaron we all have seen. Sharon may not express or know what Swayam means to her life but the lil ways that expresses the same for her was nicely done. Do PM me when you continue.