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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
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It was cute update ..sharon being naughty and pleased to see her comfort level with swayam
Loved the update but bahot chhotu tha . Update soon and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God...this is the cutest story ever :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
This two are so adorable and the way Sharon said sorry was so sweet !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww Very Nice update dear:-):-):-) loving it:-):-) continue soon ok:-):-)
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cute han ,nice one imagining this drooled me ,☺️
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Hey Megsy...gud to read an update from u...like sumone pointed earlier Swayam ko kaun khana nahi chahega...he is so enticing...this update went one step ahead in shedding light on the comfort level the two share now but which has been a result of a lot of tough times and tests that their luv has endured - this update is a dream
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RECAP

Sharon: Baby, let's order breakfast, your tummy is growling!

Swayam: and you are sitting on my growling tummy! Utaro ab and get my tummy some foood!

Sharon laughed harder holding her tummy. Swayam held her by her arms and threw her sideways on the bed. He hugged her tight and wiggled her.

Swayam: Oh my cute lil munchkin! Ab khana do warna main tumhein kha jaunga.

Sharon placed a peck on his cheek, freed herself from his arms and moved towards the telephone.

She picked the telephone, dialed the room service, looked towards Swayam and said,

Sharon: Eggs it is baby, alright?

Swayam: As you wish sweety.



PART SIX (b)


Sharon (on the phone): Good morning, I'd like to order breakfast. Yes, I'd like 2 masala cheese omlets with toast and some orange juice please. Also please add some cereals and milk. Thank you.

Swayam walked towards Sharon and hugged her from behind.

Swayam: thank you for the cereals, love!

Sharon smiled and placed her hands on Swayams hand which were hugging her tummy.

Sharon: love you too baby!

She turned around and placed her head on Swayams chest. Swayam placed his hand on her head and stroked her hair lightly. He had a blissful smile playing on his face. He placed his other hand on Sharons back and closed his eyes. He felt content having his love, his life in his arms. He tightened his grip on her back and pulled her closer. He pressed his palm on her back very firmly.

After a few seconds,

Sharon: Let's get ready Swayam. I'll go for a bath baby?

Swayam tightened his grip on her back.

Swayam: Stay na Sharon. Please just stay like this for a while.

Sharon pressed her head on his chest again and tightened her grip around him.

Swayam moved back slowly towards the wall making Sharon walk along with him in the same position.

He leaned on the wall for support and ran his hand slowly and continuously on Sharons head. He kept his eyes closed all this while.

Swayam mentally thanked God for showering his blessings on them.

Sharon could feel what Swayam was going through. She rubbed his back lightly. A sweet smile played on her lips continuously. She kept her eyes closed and breathed in the pace of Swayams heartbeat. Though his heart was beating loud, the beats were rhythmic. His heartbeat spoke of his contentment of having his life in his arms.

Swayam kept playing with Sharons hair softly, stroking them and rubbing her head in between. He maintained a tight press of her head on his chest. He kept taking deep breaths, breathing in her aroma.

After staying like that for about 15 minutes, Swayam moved a little and cupped Sharons face. Sharon gave him a sweet smile and asked,

Sharon: kya hua jaan?

Swayam had a glint in his eyes. The sweet smile refused to leave his face. The smile had spread till his eyes making his eyes twinkle and bright.

Swayam closed his eyes and nodded in negation telling Sharon 'kuch nahi'. He ran his fingers through her hair and combed them with his fingers. He tucked a stand of hair which fell near the corner of her eye behind her ear.

Swayam: You have beautiful hair. I love running my fingers through them.

Sharon blushed a bit.

Sharon: and I love playing with your hair!

Swayam bent his face towards her and tickled her face with his hair.

He picked her in his arms and carried her to the washroom. He placed her on the sink slab and made her sit there.

Sharon kept looking at him in awe.

Swayam took their toothbrushes and ran the toothpaste over the brushes and handed Sharon her brush. He picked her up from her waist and made her stand.

He held his toothbrush up and hit Sharons brush with his.

Swayam: Cheers baby!

Sharon laughed at his action.

Sharon: hahaha Swayam. Cheers!

Swayam patted Sharons face dry with a face towel after they brushed.

Suddenly Swayam had a glint in his eyes. He turned towards Sharon and held her by her arms.

Swayam: Have you seen those toothpaste ads?

Sharon looked at Swayam confused. She narrowed her eyebrows and gestured a 'what' to him.

Swayam: You know those toothpaste ads which brings a couple close to each other.

Without a seconds delay, he placed his lips on her and took her into a deep kiss.

He picked her up in his arms while kissing and took her to the bathing area.
He placed her down and broke the kiss. Sharon starred at him amazed.

Sharon: You naughty boy!

Swayam: Ahh! You taste so fresh!
and winked at her.

Sharon giggled and said,

Sharon: you too!

Swayam: Take a quick shower now, breakfast should be here any moment.

Swayam turned back and started to leave towards the room. Sharon caught hold of his tee shirt and pulled him back. She stood on her toe to reach upto Swayams face and made him bend a bit. She placed a small peck on his cheek.

Sharon: 10 minutes baby.

Swayam ran his hand on her head and gave her a smile.

He walked out of the bathroom and closed the bathroom door.

Sharon blushed and quickly undressed herself. She looked at herself in the mirror and ran her fingers on her cheek down to her neck to her clevage. She ran her other hand on her tummy and blushed very hard remembering last night. She saw images of last night and could still feel Swayams touch on her. She lowered her eyes and blushed harder.

She spoke to herself.

Sharon: Your touch is so pure Swayam. I am so blessed to have you in my life. I can't thank God enough for giving me you. They way you love me, you make me feel so complete. You make me feel blessed to be a woman. I never thought I'd be so comfortable with a guy, that ill feel this good to be kissed, to be touched, to be loved. You are such a sweetheart and thank you God for giving me Swayam. I really don't want anything else from you.

Just then she heard the bell ring. The sound of the bell got her out of her trance. She heard a knock on the bathroom door.

Swayam: Sharon? Baby breakfast has come. Are you alright? I dint even hear the shower. Tum theek ho na? You want anything?

Sharon quickly moved back to the bathing area.

Sharon: Haan baby, main bilkul theek hoon. Just give me 5 more minutes.

Swayam: okay!

Sharon took a quick shower and patted herself dry. She wore her bathrobe and came outside the bathroom.

Swayam was sitting on the slab near the bathroom waiting for her to come out. He got up as soon as she walked out. Her feet were still wet and part of hair near hear forehead were wet too. Water was dripping from her locks.

Swayam smiled at his blushing Sharon and grabbed the towel from her hands. He patted her hair dry and wiped the water trailing down her neck. He picked her up by her waist and placed her on the floormat to dry her feet.

He cupped her face and placed a deep peck on her forehead.

Swayam: Come, let's have breakfast.

Sharon smiled at him. He held her by her hand and took her to the sitting area where breakfast was kept.

He made Sharon sit on the sofa and sat next to her. He handed her the fork and knife and placed the plate with omelet in front of her.

Sharon kept looking at him in awe and smiled.

He poured some milk in a bowl for himself and filled it with cereals. They ate quietly and kept feeding each other in between.

Sharon rested her head on his shoulder. Swayam moved his hand behind her and placed it on her arm. He rubbed her arm slowly and finished his breakfast.

Sharon moved closer to him and started fiddling his feet with hers. Swayam kept rubbing her arm and stroking her hair in between.

After a while,

Swayam: Get dressed Sharon, thand lag jayegi. And I'll go take a shower and come. Okay?

Sharon turned her face towards Swayams.

Sharon: hmmm.

Swayam held her hand and they both got up. They moved towards the suitcase. Swayam forwarded his hands towards Sharon with his palm facing upwards.

Sharon looked at him confused.

Swayam grinned and said,

Swayam: My todays clothes sweetheart!

Sharon giggled and took out a gift wrapped parcel from her suitcase. She gave it to Swayam and ruffled his hair.

Sharon: Pagal!

Swayam came close to her, bent towards her ears and said,

Swayam: forever, tumhare liye!

Sharon giggled again and pushed him towards the bathroom.

Sharon: Come quickly baby!

Swayam: yup!


Swayam closed the bathroom door and rested his back on the door from inside.

Swayam (to himself): gosh! I still can't believe all these are for real. I love you my Sharon. You are such a cutie.

He ruffled his own hair and quickly opened his clothes. He ran his hand on the tee shirt and smiled thinking how thoughtful Sharon is.

He placed his clothes carefully on the sink slab and took a quick shower.


Sharon kept grinning and blushing. She took out her clothes from the suitcase and got dressed. She wore a white tee with blue shorts.


Swayam patted himself dry leaving his hair wet and combed back.

He carefully opened the gift wrap and found a white tee shirt and blue track pants along with an undergarment for him.

He felt a little shy and smiled. He again thought on how thoughtful Sharon is.


He quickly dressed himself and knocked at the bathroom door from inside.

Swayam (loudly): Sharonnn, Sharonnn


Sharon had slipped herself inside the bed while waiting for Swayam to come out of the bathroom. She kept thinking of all what has happened in the last two days.

Swayams call suddenly broke her trance.


Sharon: haan baby? Kuch chahiye?

Swayam: nahi kuch nahi, I was just checking if I can come out.

Sharon was amazed at how chivalrous Swayam can be.

Sharon: Ofcourse baby, come na, m missing you.


Swayam came out of the bathroom with dripping hair. He saw Sharon cuddled up inside the quilt and smiled at her.

Swayam: Awww my cutie. Thand lag rahi hai?

Sharon couldn't take her eyes off Swayam and his wet hair.

She cuddled more without blinking and nodded her head with a pout.

Sharon: Come here na, its so cold, m missing you.

Swayam quickly moved towards Sharon and sat next to her.

Sharon's hand went up to his hair in reflex.

Without realising, she uttered under her breath,

Sharon: you looking so hot Swayam.

Swayam blushed a bit and looked deep into her eyes.

He handed the towel to her and gestured her to pat his hair dry.

Sharon smiled and started drying his hair.

Swayam (while getting his hair dried) : you know sharon, I just can't dry my hair on my own. Either mom, ramu kaka or Taani dries my hair for me. Par abse yeh duty tumhari.

He looked at Sharon and grinned.

Sharon laughed and stopped drying his hair. She laughed harder and pulled Swayams cheeks.

Sharon: u are such a baccha!

Swayam looked at her and cuddled her.

Swayam: your baccha!

Sharon laughed again and started drying his hair again.

She ruffled his hair and combed them back with her fingers.

Sharon: you look awesome with your hair back combed, you know that?

Swayam smiled at her and got inside the quilt. He placed his head on Sharon's lap and covered himself with the quilt.

Swayam: you want me to keep them gelled always?

Sharon: nope! I can't let anyone else see my hot Swayam. I shall comb them when i feel like!

Swayam chuckled and hugged her by her waist.




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Sorry for the long wait.
Hope you guys enjoyed reading this part 😊

ive noticed comments are decreasing in the current updates 😭
request you all to please le me know how you felt bout the story, which part you enjoyed reading, if there is any particular thing you would like me to incorporate in the story.
your comments keep the zeal in me to write further.
also ive noticed number of likes have decreased too...
i dont wanna keep any demands as such, but expect at least 60 likes from the 75 like in the 1st update 😊

will be writing next part after reading your comments and suggestions!


love,
megha
Edited by megsy - 12 years ago
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hey cute ❤️ di

awesome update

again u left me stunned wid ur writing 😊

swayam is so sweet...he takes so much care of sharon n protects her so much 😳

d way he askd her b4 coming in d room was so sweet...n so gentleman like👏

n den sharon remembering all d romance dat hapened between dem ☺️...den both adoring each oders hair 😆

it nice to see sharon reciprocating same love for swayam 😃

swaron...swaron...swaron u make me love dem even more❤️
Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 12 years ago
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res for simI



Twinku Dii 🤗
Suppeeerrr suppeerr supeerrr Amazing update dii i just loved each and every part of this update, from the beginning to the end i was soo lost in this chappy...ggooossshhh abhi bhi i can't come out of my dreamland please mujhe iss dreamland se bahar nikalo...I m not at all surprised by this fab update cuz your all updates are fantabulous...just love this SS...This was a very sweet and utra cuttee update...😊


Sharon: Your touch is so pure Swayam. I am so blessed to have you in my life. I can't thank God enough for giving me you. They way you love me, you make me feel so complete. You make me feel blessed to be a woman. I never thought I'd be so comfortable with a guy, that ill feel this good to be kissed, to be touched, to be loved. You are such a sweetheart and thank you God for giving me Swayam. I really don't want anything else from you.

This were the best lines...would love to hear this from Sharon in the serial...gosshh m dreaming at present ...haayyee *dreamy mode*

Awwiiieee for sure Swayam looks hot with wet hair...Swayam was sooo adorable he can't dry his hair by himself...hehehe...From now It's Sharon duty...Awww

This update was soo beautifully described i had a clear image of this scenes infornt of me...Loved this chappy dii...Ab jaldi se update next chappy...m always soo curious to read your SS updates...😃

Luv Simi ❤️
Edited by megsy - 12 years ago

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