Swaron SS:Missing Life...[Chap 11 Pg 70] - Page 22

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Hey Meghs... I am so sorry you were expecting a reply from me in the 4th part but you know how much kind of jerk I am so I really forgot that I had to make a comment on 4th part and when I realized that or rather you realized me that and i came here that's when I found out that already part - 5 is also posted so I read part - 5 first and now replying for both...

You know when you ended the third part i had only one thing to say then that was I am really looking forward to be in love and feel all this. well you really geared up me for something that i never expected my self to think about... so all thumbs up to you for making me feel like this... Now your fourth part was superbly defined what love is and how you can realize you are in love... Sharon's journey and the how the lady helped her to realize what she feels... the connection to shim-la was also nicely developed a life time memory of Sharon was attached with that place and man how beautifully you showed that... from the first thing Sharon got that diary in which phone numbers of that lady were placed to the conversation between Sharon and the lady where the lady showed her how it feels with when you have somebody who means a lot to you around yourself even though when that person is not near you still you can feel the presence of that person around you... that was really beautiful and the way Sharon explained everything to Swayam and the way he felt hearing all that... I could really sense that he got idea about what she felt for him which she realized because of the conversation she had with that lady... everything in that part touched my heart... a perfectly crafted story and part... the way you showed how love can bring two different souls into one was just remarkably beautiful for me... I am saying this because I don't know why but I never feel this love in myself and I am not aware of the reason why it is so but reading this story of yours makes me feel something odd and i don't really know why i start thinking that being in love is the best thing in the world...

Now the part -5 was just beautiful i am speechless about this part and the reason why i am speechless is that i never felt love in first place so being close to a special person and the feeling you have at that time is just amazing and something i cannot describe in words now... but i hope whatever you have described here i can feel sometime in my life for real... you know this story is for SwaRon and we all reading just because its of SwaRon but i don't know why i start making feel that something like this should happen to me... and i start feeling myself there... you know my best friend says that when you start imaging yourself in something that means actually you never have that thing so you imagine how it would be if you have that thing... so i don't exactly say that i can feel to deep in this story but the reason i am feeling this way is because i never had such love in my life or i have never realized how it feels when you are in love so this is actually first time i am being made realize what it is to be loved by someone and i am really missing someone whom i lost because my confused mind state never allowed me to feel love and i lost that person... now if i find that person any day i am due for an apology to her because she had to leave me because of my behavior which i am realizing now reading all this... This has made me realize why she had to leave me... and thanks for writing such beautifully that it made me realize something which I would never have realized in my life... Now I promise to my self that when ever I meet that person I will beg an apology from her and wish her a wonderful life ahead...

Thanks for PM... You write very beautifully...

Pratik...

Originally posted by: shan16

Res..

Fireee...too hottt Unres... ii just loved this part...the intimacy they share...it was not at all vulgur..it was not lust...it was just their pure love...their intense passion for each other ..the way of telling how much they miss each other ..how much they love each other... ...the most beautiful expereince of life ...making love with each other...well written... i like swayam care n concern..whther sharon hurted or she felt uncomfortable by his action..swayam is so understanding...thinking of sharon comfort each n everry time...

luved how sharon made swayam feel special by this shimla outting...gifts ..small small things she did...so sweet of her...well...our lover boy deserves dis ...every bit of it...swaron is just made for each other..n dis u have conveyed very well from this part...

"
Swayam: but we can take this slowly'

Sharon puts her palm on his cheek.

Sharon: Swayam, if you are uncomfortable, it's okay. But I really want to feel close
to you. I want to pour out all my love. I want to feel your warmth. I want you to feel
loved. I want to feel being loved. And what difference does it make before and after
marriage. Marriage is nothing but a commitment na, and we are already committed
to each other. And we love each other madly. I know you will never hurt me. I trust
you Swayam and I love you.
"

''

Swayam (whisper): we fit so perfectly into each other.

Sharon blushed and hid herself in his arms again.

She murmured against his chest,

Sharon (murmur): yes, we do. After all we are just meant to be together.

''

truely said...m loving it plz update next part sooon...