LAST CHAP SS:The Dreamland Developed,But...He!!

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

oh they got defeated...so sad...but u hv discribed it very well...their emotions n chandu's guilt...everything...
update soon... :-)

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Susmita

@surprising

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ridzzi
oh they got defeated...so sad...but u hv discribed it very well...their emotions n chandu's guilt...everything...
update soon... :-)

yeah...they'd to embrace defeat fr several times as per history...& thanq u sooo much fr liking it.😊

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Anuja

@anu93

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Beautifully described rumpu👏👏...Awesome👏

Update soon😳

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

wow...I didn't think my so so simple short story will become such popular..⭐️...THANKS 2D CORE MY READERS...now I can consider myself as a writer.

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

i just can't understand why the broken arm is emphasized so much is it carrying any significance in future life of chandragupta..ur update is very short but very interesting..update soon..i am really eager to know what happens next

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

rumpu :

commenting on the two updates in one go, this SS seems quite different from the rest, but i'm not getting anything ..when chandu thought about the wound first i thought it was something poisonous , maybe he was hit with a poisonous arrow but didnt know it, but then it's a broken arm only..but why did acharya call himself the main culprit 😕? update soon.

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Kadamvari
i just can't understand why the broken arm is emphasized so much is it carrying any significance in future life of chandragupta..ur update is very short but very interesting..update soon..i am really eager to know what happens next

nxt part will be the last...& it's ss so short upd😆...nt turning ff like cocoahut😊...& broken hand is an imaginary coz...😛

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: polly_03
rumpu :

commenting on the two updates in one go, this SS seems quite different from the rest, but i'm not getting anything ..when chandu thought about the wound first i thought it was something poisonous , maybe he was hit with a poisonous arrow but didnt know it, but then it's a broken arm only..but why did acharya call himself the main culprit 😕? update soon.

wah...it seemed to u different.!!!!...I thought it's a child-story😆...& yeah...Acharya was the main villain😲...bt in simple meaning😊...samjhe???😉

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Ria

@chand1234

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Vry nice part! Beautifully written <3

I liked this part a lot: :D

Chandragupt remained silent for a while...after a moment or 2 he stated slowly-"Actually Acharya,I-I thought I can manage that pain without much trouble...but I can't...I can't."

"It's natural. You've a broken bone in ur arm. I noticed that when you're facing trouble to carry a few weapons.You can't avoid me Chandragupt...you're not so adult yet...isn't??"-Chankya flushed with a ray of his rarest smile.

He stated again-"I'm the main villain."

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coolpavni

@coolpavni

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

[B][/B]Hmm interestingg...but a short one usage of words is really nice...
But, did not understand why was acharya being d villain & why such a small arm injury is bothering d great yodha...?? ;)

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