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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: chand1234
Vry nice part! Beautifully written <3
I liked this part a lot: :D

Chandragupt remained silent for a while...after a moment or 2 he stated slowly-"Actually Acharya,I-I thought I can manage that pain without much trouble...but I can't...I can't."

"It's natural. You've a broken bone in ur arm. I noticed that when you're facing trouble to carry a few weapons.You can't avoid me Chandragupt...you're not so adult yet...isn't??"-Chankya flushed with a ray of his rarest smile.

He stated again-"I'm the main villain."

wah...lagta hay ye part tune such-much padi hay...😆...tera wo gr8 upd, interesting upd,nice upd ke chakkar se to bahaar aayi🤣...thanq sooo much😊

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: coolpavni
[B][/B]Hmm interestingg...but a short one usage of words is really nice...
But, did not understand why was acharya being d villain & why such a small arm injury is bothering d great yodha...?? ;)

are...m overwhelmed to see ur eagerness fr the story😃...I really thought it's a child-story...never thought I'll post it 1 day in IF & get beautiful comments fr it.
& utilization of words??...good???...m alaz lacking vocaz😒...yes, Acharya is villain but no hidden meaning😉

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

LAST PART

Ohh...Why Am I The Emperor of Undivided India??...Why???

Chanakya stated-" I'm the main villain." All the surprise of the world appeared in Chandragupt's face.

"Yes...I'd a completely wrong strategy.While hiding in a village,today I heard a mother scolding her child.He put his hand in the middle of the food stuff & burnt it during the lunch...I've understood my mistake.We should start conquering from the distant places & gradually increase power.While powerful enough to fight with the mighty-we should attack the capital."

AFTER 2 YEARS

Chandragupt is sitting lonely in his room.ohh...now he's not Chandragupt-he's VEER SAMRAT CHANDRAGUPT MOURYA!!...But hasn't he a great remorse in his eyes??...why??

The alone emperor in thinking in his mind that he's not a bit happy at all..."Acharya,I'm not able to bear these huge load of disgusting royal works...I'm a very ordinary person...I can't take a breathe within this congested atmosphere of royal palace...I want to be independent...I'm paining Acharya...I'm bleeding...I can't live with the tension of developing my place by conquering countries 1 by 1."...sighes emperor..."I've to love the smell of blood...I've to be glad to witness the heap of dead-bodies...I've to blow win-horn with an ear to heart-breaking moans of wounded warriors...cry of their relatives...now what's the difference between Dhanand & me???"
...but now I can't air my pain to u Acharya...I can't...because...because...now I'm not just ur follower or disciple Acharya...I'm not only a king but also the EMPEROR OF UNDIVIDED INDIA. I've to bear with the pain Acharya...I've to bear with...the pain wins the battle again & I'm defeated...coz I'm CHANDRAGUPT MOURYA....1st emperor of unified India....

When one becomes STAR
GALAXY is his only friend.
Companion-less STAR...searching for human being...
...worth his belief...
Emeralds of throne are wanted to be abhorred...
...but they're too heavy to take off...
Behind the stones...there's a throne of affection.

Perhaps this is the words of inner heart of all kings...GOD may rain them his incredible light of affection, love & care.

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

awesome feelings dear i even can feel cgm's pain in my heart...very nice story dear

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Cuty16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Hey thanx for d pm dear i will put my rply once i will read all parts.

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hii rumpu wow upd. ta daroon laaglo.

simply superb loved it.

tfd pm dear.🤗

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Aru & Sona:
my sweetu Bengali readers⭐️⭐️...thanq sooo much...actually I've finished this story a bit early so that I can start a new one & pester u once again.😆

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Cuty16
Hey thanx for d pm dear i will put my rply once i will read all parts.

okk Rupam...take ur time😊

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Paramita Ray

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

👏
Apurva ...Asadharan... Samrater modhyer ek sadharan kintu koshtojorjorito manusher sathe amar porichay koriye dewar jonyo dhanyobaad. Sundar kontu Vishadgrostho ekjon jini nijer Kartavya ebom Dayitvor jonyo nijer samasta chawa-pawa ke tyag korechilen.😭
When one becomes STAR
GALAXY is his only friend.
Companion-less STAR...searching for human being...
...worth his belief...
Emeralds of throne are wanted to be abhorred...
...but they're too heavy to take off...
Behind the stones...there's a throne of affection.

Perhaps this is the words of inner heart of all kings...GOD may rain them his incredible light of affection, love & care.

Above part is just fantastic...seemed it comes from direct Emperor's heart. And from mine too.

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago