Taarey os on bb match track...check pg no 6 last commen

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys a new os on taarey...its taarey confession...Its continution of last epi...so read and tell me hows this??



Rey-mere paas in faltu baato ke liye time nahi hai...and he turn to go...

Ta-ye sab faltu baate hai...

Rey-ha...

Ta-(hurt)me faltu hu...

Rey-ha...

But as rey is going ...taani comes in front of him...

Ta-me faltu hu...thik hai...faltu logo se to koi baat nahi karta...koi bhi problem ho to aap aashi ko bol dena...vo mujhe bol degi...aap ko mujh jesi faltu ladki se baat hi nahi karni padegi...and taani goes from there in teary eyes...

Here rey feeling hurt...he thinks(taani tumne to bahot aasani keh diya tha ki mene tumhara use kiya...kya tumne socha ki mujhe kitna hurt hua hoga...his eyes are also teary...but he wipped it...and he also goes but as he go he see taani and veer are talking...he goes near and stand there...taani and veer cant see him...

Ta-aap yaha kya kar rahe hai...???

V-me tumhe hi dhundh raha tha...mujhe ek extra blanket chahiye...

Taani try hard to hide her tears but he seeit...

V-ye kya...gs ro rahi hai...(evil smile)

Ta-nahi me ro nahi rahi hu...

V-acchha to aap ki aankho me,se ye aansu...

he come two step closer and try to touch her to wipe her tear when some one hold his hand...

Yes its rey...who hold his hand...

Rey-hey dude...u go...blanket tumhe mil jayega...

V-dude...wht r u doing here??

Rey-well...i m AGS and GS ke sath rehna its my duty...

V-whtever...

Rey-so u go blanket tumhe mil jayega...

V-ok...

He goes from there...

Here taani give an angry look to rey and goes in the room ...

Rey go after her...

Rey-taani...

Ta-kya hai rey...me to faltu hu na ...

Rey-(angrily)taani listen to me...he hold her hand and stop her...

Ta-rey mujhe koi baat nahi sun ni hai...

Rey-u have to listen taani...tumne pu6a tha na ki me tumhare sath alag behave kyu karta hu to jawab nahi sunogi??

Taani -forcefully take her hand back and said angrily-ha boliye...sun rahi hu me...

Rey-agar koi ladki mujhe directly ye keh de ki mene usse use kiya hai to tum bolo me uske sath kaise behave karu??

Ta-(teary eyes)ha to aap ne ye jan ne ki koshish nahi ki k mene esa kyu kaha??

Rey-is me jan na kya hai...tum to mujhe hamesha hi galat samjati ho...ye sochti ho ki mene tumhara use kiya...

Ta-(angrily)to me aur kya samju rey?ye samju ki aap ne mere sath ye sab kiya kyu ki aap bhi mere liye kuch feel karte ho??mene to do pal ke liye ye soch bhi liya tha ki aap bhi shayad mujhse pyar karne lage lekin me ti hu hi bewkuf ladki...hamesha ye soch leti hu ki shayad aap bhi mujhse kabhi pyar karenge lekin me galat thi...me to ye bhul hi gayi thi ki me to sirf swayam ki behen hu aap ke liye aur kuch bhi nahi rey...us rat bhi jo kuch hua me janti hu aap ne mera use nahi kiya bas ho gaya wo sab...aur ab plz sab bhul jaiye...vese bhi me janti hu ki aap kabhi mujhse pyar nahi karenge...me hi pagal hu jo ye soch rahi thi shayad koi esa din bhi aayega jab aap mujhse ye kahenge ki taani me bhi tumse pyar karta hu ...aur

But suddenly light goes and taani scared...there is no light but both can see each other...

Rey saw taani's scare face...she sit down...rey also sit down and ask-dar lag raha hai?

Ta-aap se dar lag raha hai...

Rey-mujhse?par kyu?

Ta-dar lag raha hai ki kahi aap phir se mujhse gussa na ho jaye...kyuki aaj phir maine apne dil ki baat kahi...mujhe yad hai us din bhi aap mujhse gussa ho gaye the jab me uski dress pehen ke aayi thi...m sorry phir se aap ka dil dukhane ke liye...

And she stand up to go...as she walk two steps she feel someone grab her hand...rey hold her hand and pull her back...he pin her to the wall...he hold her both hands with his hands and put her hands behind her...he hold her hands very tightly...

Rey_aur kya...tumne pehle vali baat compelete nahi ki taani...

Taani see in his eyes...she can see anger in his eyes...

Ta-aur...me bhul gayi thi ki aap kabhi mujhse pyar nahi karenge...ek bar ye soch ke galti kardi lekin dusri bar...

But taani cant complete her sentense bcoz her lips sealed by his...he kiss her roughly...taani is shocked...she try hard to free her hands and from the kiss...but as taani try to free her hands rey depend the kiss more and more...taani try to free more forcefully and rey depend the kiss more and more...but as rey feel that taani feel short of breath he broke the kiss...

Taani is breathing hardly...cant say anything...after some seconds ...

Ta-rey ye sab...but again rey put his lips on her...her hands are still in his hands...taani try to free his hand and he kiss her more and more...

And taani stop to free her hand...

She stop moving her hand ...

Rey also think that taani will kiss him back...as she stop moving her hands he free her hands and hold her face...but as rey free her hand taani push him...and said-rey ye kya kar rahe ho aap ...

But rey is rey...he hold her waist and pull her closer and start to kissing her neck...he kiss her madly...every touch of his lip...taani shiver...she feeling like heaven...she enjoying every moment...then he come to her shoulder and giving her wet kisses...he just cant stop himself...taani sits down...he also sits down but doesnt stop to kiss her...taani clutch his shirt with both her handz and try to stop him but all goes waste...he is kissing her madly...

Now taani put her head on his shoulder and as rey feel her head on his shoulder he stop...

Both sit in the same position for some seconds...taani's hand still on his chest...clutching his shirt...her eyes are close...rey's face is on near her neck...his lips touching her neck...his eyes are also close...

After few seconds rey feel his shirt is wet where taani put her head...he look at her and he understand that she is crying...she is crying silently...tears are continuously flowing from her eyes...

Rey-taani...

Taani listen and she clutch his shirt more...

Rey-taani...and he put his hand on her shoulder...taani shiever with his touch...but doesnt take her head from his shoulder...

Now rey hold her face and made her to look at him...but her eyes are still close...rey come closer...she cant see him but feel his breath ...she close her eyes tightly as she feel his breath...

Rey come closer and kiss her on forehead...then on her cheek...then near her ears...and then he said ...

Rey-taani...open your eyes ...tumne hamesha us din ka intezar kiya hai ki kab me tumhe ye bolu ki me tumse pyar karta hu ...aaj wo din hai taani ...i love u taani...i love u...me kitne din se chupa raha tha ye feelings par nahi chupa paya...mujhe tumse pyar ho hi gaya...

Taani slowly open her eyes...she see that rey is also crying...she wipe his tears with her hand...he take her hand in his hand and kiss her hand...then he cup her face and kiss her tears ...

As rey kiss her tears taani hug him tightly...rey also hug her tight...just dont want to leave her...both hug eachother...after 10 min they broke the hug...and stand up...

As they stand up he again pin her to the wall and going to kiss her but taani put her hand on his chest and stop him but rey said...plz taani...dont stop me today...us din mene itni koshish ki apneaap ko rokne ki but nahi rok paya tha khud ko...tumse pyar jo ho gaya tha...lekin tumne mujhe roka tha kyuki tab tum nahi janti thi ki me bhi tumse pyar karta hu...par ab to janti ho na...plz dont stop me today...

Hearing this taani close her eyes...he take her hands and put them around his neck and put his hands around her waist...and kiss her gently...but as taani respond back he hold her waist more tight and pull her more closer and depend in the kiss more...they broke the kiss when they feel short of breath...taani couldnt see in his eyes and hug him...rey also hug her back ...

Then taani broke the hug and said-ab chaliye yaha se...raat bahot ho gayi hai...aap ko subah practice bhi to karni hai...

Rey-ha...chalo...

He hold her hand and intertwin his fingers with hers and go hand in hand happily...


The end

So tell me guys hows it??plz like and comment ...


Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... That was beautiful
It felt like I got Rasiya all over again
That was amazing
I wish ki kash kuch to esa ho
Kiss to nahi hi milega par at least hug ya hath to pakde dono aaj
That was amazing
Love u for giving me this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS dipu 😊 you used the present track of D3 and I hope D3 main bhi Rey Veer ko bhaga de 😆 .. Wow TaaRey's kiss was so hot ☺️ you refreshed Rasiya seq once again

loved your OS completely
Edited by RitzyOnly4Amar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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damn it was hot!!

wen it was ovr i was lyk yeh khatam kyu hogaya 😭

dipu mind blowin...

i doubt taarey tumhe xams pe concentrate karne denge 😆

awesum!!

n thnx 4 d pm...waise pm se pehle hi padh liya

😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dips great job!! AWESOME!! we can ony wish for such aconfession in the show that too so soon!! but i really liked it😃👏
Edited by Sara_Taarey22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GOSH!!! kaash current d3 track main bhi Taani ek chance de Rey ko apni true feelings bataane ke liye!!! 😭😭But as for ur OS, MIND-BLOWING!!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW...loved it
so so so romantic
thanx 4 d pm😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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how was it?? it was mindbllowing awsum☺️ no words to tell im on cloud 9 TaaRey land the confession n thier feelings aww,..dips 🤗🤗 it was awsum yaar!❤️read it two tyms :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great..nice way of portrayin the whole scene..

smthin I like..

do write more😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOWWW!!!!!!!supersome update!!! 👏it was beautiful n hot...kash aj ke episode mai bhi aese ho...🤗n CVS ko tumse lesson lena cahiye!!! then taarey fans will be on cloud no 9?? naaa v ll be on cloud no 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999...😳
Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago

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