Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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Afshan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Res!

unres

Anu first of all a big THANKYOU for updating tis u knw how much i m waiting for tis!
Nw update OMG it its a dhansu update manvi's plan backfired! Lol!
I just loved the beginning part where she was flirting wid amit n virat was getting furious n on top of that her teasing whch left hm numb was superb!
I liked how virat counter attack her in hs cabin by gving her own piece of pill! Eeeks that was seriously hot! Romantic virat cn make u feel weak on ur knees n tis was xact happening to hs wife/intern!
Ok nw the serious part aweee virat is so so so dam awesme husband he wants manvi to go wid hm n for that he request the management to make her his intern <cute husband>
Urgh...why tis maya madam cme back in virman life? Psh nw she wil create problem for them bt i knw virman will go thru them happily n together

Once again thank u for the update n bearing my constantly update tlf backwas <well ab ma ho tou bardasht karo meri mange> :-P

Waiting for mre hot encounters of them in hospital so UPDATE JALDI!

P.s i love that make out scene in Dr.Virats cabin :-P hehehe

Lov,
Ur bacha.

Edited by mamaian-Afshan - 12 years ago

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Sumana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

Ahem Ahem...Ahemm...A brilliant ...treatment given by Maanvi to ...Viraat ...Couldnt stop sympathizing over his condition ...EMBARRASSMENT😆...and brlliant Pay Back by Viraat even ..so I guess Maanvi and Viraat will leave together for his fellowship and Maya ji back again

Great Update

Love

Sumana ..

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Avika

@Avika318

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Wow!!! Amazing update!!
Love the virman *ahem ahem* romance!! It was soo hot!!
It seems like u updated after ages but the chapter was amazing!!
Thanks for the pm!!
x Avika x

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

anu that was amazinggg

well i didnt expected an update today but your soo good at surprises i must say lol i was just writing my update and i saw it..threw whatever i was writing and came running to read it rofl 🤣

seriously i enjoy reading it slowly i mean like i love to enjoy every moment u pen down here...manvi's torture was awsomeee lol poor virat...how the hell on this earth he was controlling himself hahaha

virat made manvi intern her and he's trying to take manvi with him thats just too adorable and sincere...he's trying to fulfill all his duties at a time be it a husband a doctor or an incharge thts pretty amazing and i love this quality of his...the office scene was hot but i liked the way u wrote it that they were having a strong feeling and that why couldnt control instead of being in a hospital and maya is back in this update sooo eager to know what is she planning to do next but i think maybe all these responsibilities maybe by any chance make virat feel that manvi is a burden..u know it happens in life when ur under a lot of things at the same time u just need someone to put all your anxiety on that person hope things go well with then specially this fellowship and manvi's pregnancy...