Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii - Page 67

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update especially as Maanvi was teasing Virat... then started to flirt with him... love it.
Can not wait to read more! AWESOME!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
loved virman romance
witing to read more
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb updt...manvis seducing tricks n virat pay back...both were wonderfull...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
an awesome update again!!

well i was really eager as everyone else to know the reason for manvi's 'inward evil laugh',, u really really gave a treat for the waiting session..

well the silly girl's mission was to annoy her husband & try to show him her importance alone,, the accidental brushing vt her hubby dat made her to think of an 'evil plan' (not evil for her, as her intention was different but ofcoz its super duper evil for us :p) and the way u described it, '' She was just going to flirt a little with Amit to make Virat act possessive but here she thought she just walked into a gold mine'' was EPIC!!! loved it..
she tortured him just ten minutes, but he couldnt stop falling for her & soon got it that she's doing it intentionally,, den ofcoz i know, 'she's so gonna repent for this!' but u know wat, the moment u gave the conversation between virat & Dr.Mehra, i thought dat i was wrong.. but my dii has dis 'giving expected thing at unexpected situation' thingy,, hence u really gave a heavenly moment.. virat not able to stand her antics & feeling like loosing him into her den & dere just revealed how much he needs her & how much she means to him.. and tactfully he making manvi to undergo the same feeling, same situation & driving her the same emotions was PERFECT!!!
i must say dat virat is really tactful.. he tactfully dealt with her the last time aswel, now again here.. but i really enjoyed '' Virat was looking at her stifling his amusement, glad to see her drowning in the same state he was in, a few minutes ago'' he's so teasing her isnt he??

now now,, though romance was the first thing dat'll be described about this update, i wont forget the reason for virat's strict professional encounter with manvi being delivered by u in this update in a very adorable manner.. manvi, listening to the Dr.'s conversation & realising her childishness & also realising the reason for virat's concern on manvi's discipline & studies was mind blowing! must say dat virat is highly organised, plans for the future & doesnt forget his life, his love, manvi too.. cant judge him dat easily,, interesting character!! manvi on the otherhand, innocent, carefree, blessed vt natural talent and virat, her life.. a stunning couple together dey are, so i dont have this worries as its clear dat deir relationship cannot get spoiled by any evil eyes out there in the world..

pulling maya back into the story = introduction of trouble,, dis is d usual formula,, but wat are u planning?? is she just a role or a gray shade who's gonna create trouble but vl end up in failure & strenghthen virman's bond??
and ''Interesting! As far as I know, Virat does not like to mix professional and personal lives. What is happening here?'' dis just brought back all past memories,, how virat WAS & now how virat is... the contrast in past & present virat, it brought back the memories of changing virat,, the way he saw his love & life in manvi, the way he treated his patient 'not professionally' but with 'humanity',, the way he accompanied his mom & her to the wedding only on manvi's request, the way he genuinely told manvi dat he cant deny her & he doesnt know y... AND the very point dat striked me as soon as i read maya's thoughts was,, ''All her doubts began to vanish. She wasn't changing him, she was just making him change his priorities.''.. well, i think dis is the answer for maya's doubt, MAY BE this is something again to get added up in the list of the memories of changing virat and his perspective.. may be,, it was intentionally put by u to prove again dat its all becoz of manvi his point of view of things and d world has completely changed.. its just a MAY BE,, um really waiting to know d real reason...

so plsss update as quick as possible... leaving my hugs, kisses & love & love only,, hoping to get them back from u with the same or more depth.. love u loadsss di,, hats off for the magical writer u are!!! ❤️

PS: banner is 👍🏼
Edited by virmanhus - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update👏
Both r trying 2 seduce each other😳
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this one was really awesome one hilarious one poor virat 😆
manvi really seducing and arising the jealous virat so badly poor thing is trying to act normal with manvi taking all those efforts to gain his attention and she acting so innocent the nautanki manvi ...
well manvi really succeeded in gaining his attention and also took the revenge for the previous act of his well he almost screaming at her was the proof 😆😆😆
virman romancing in virat's cabin thats all manvi's efforts ka results...😉😉
soo all this was done by virat he made her join his group so tht he cud train her well for further and he was praising soo much wah husband hoto aisa 😉😉
and this maya again poking her nose in others life chudail kabhi nai sudhregi dunno what is she upto now ...😡😡
update next part soon 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry 4 late comment n thnks 4 d pm😊😊😊😊😊
Part 18 (i) : Awsun update i enjoyed while reading it 😊😊😊😊😊 luved both sides of virat "s caring , luving n possessive in home but in hospital totally opposite person strict , disciplined , mantual very much professional , liked d ultrasound part where she was talking 2 her baby complaining about his father behaviour 2wards her dat was so adorable 😃😃😃😃 , rahul n priya convo was nice 2 n d last part was really nice where she told him 2 stay away 4rm her otherwise she will complain dat he was flirting with her dat was halairious sumtyms she really behaves childish n whats cooking in her evil mind ❓
Part 18 (ii) : Brilliant update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ actually i was surprised dat maanvi was really taking virat seriously in hospital she will behave n obey him but wht she did 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲 me she was making virat jealous 4rm amit by asking him stupid questions whn she knows d answers n making virat 2 lost his control by purposely touching him but poor grl forgot dat virat is her husband n wht he does was tit4tat n virat was really nice hubi so much caring he always wants 2 b with her n hope maya is a positive character in dis


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Posted: 12 years ago
Anu congratulations for completing 100 pages!! 😃 🥳 Update is fantastic! 👍🏼 Manvi's revenge was awesome! Evil plan 😉.. She was flirting with Amit and then teasing Virat with her innocent but effective touch.. Poor Virat 😆.. Virat's pay back was also too good 😛.. Loved their little make out session in his cabin.. Pretty hot ☺️.. Maya is back again! I guess she won't sit quiet now.. Looking forward to the next part.. Loved it ❤️.. Banner is really very nice 😊.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care Anu 😊
Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow beautifully written...Poor Maanvi had a taste of her own medicine...lovely...Anu
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mind Blowing..! Maanvi getting back on Virat for not paying attention...loved her way..he lost focus...but its sweet that he wants her with him in student xchange program..but if he trains her like this...I doubt focus...:) but like Virat's payback...Argghh! Maya back..she wouldn't affect but the plan that Virat has made for Maanvi that's professional..which she could attack..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM Anu..!

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