Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

loved this update
finally he realized the feelings
uff I am relieved and when at last Maya said that she should just seduced him ha ha That Ankush was dumbstruck ha ha loved
actually you must gave that chance to her, who knows we could got to see a amush angrier Virat... I think he would be loyal to Manvi in these also...
loved their phone conversation
dil mil gaye yaad aa gayein
doctor with golden hand and hearts wow I think Manvi also be a doctor with golden hand and hearts I am sure
that aanchal was so cute though she direc tly not showed in this... but loved her so much
loved Virat's desire to go back to Manvi and keep head in her lap... that would be the heaven for him after so many hectic schedules and rude world's torture

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Amazing update Anu.. absolutely brilliant ⭐️.. Loved it to the core.. Finally Virat realised his feelings for Manvi.. Im so happy😃.. Loved the way you have described the whole scenario in that medical camp 👏.. especially Virat's lack of confidence in himself.. I just hate that Maya 😡😡.. She is so mean.. She was trying to manipulate him.. But Im glad her plan back fired.. Manvi is really a magician.. Loved Virman phone conversation very much.. Manvi is so understanding and mature also.. Loved the way she handled the whole situation and made him feel confident about himself.. Im happy that Virat got that fellowship and now he is one step closer to fulfilling his dream of becoming world's best surgeon.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you for this long update and for the pm also.. Take care 😊

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deepika03

@deepika03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

nice...bt please cut short da medical details...n focus more on virman love and relationship

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Wow yaar awesome...

Pleasee continue finally virat is going back ( the 2 weeks are over)

Now we finally get VIRMAN scene...

Cant wait for your next PM...

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ashni0905

@ashni0905

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

beautiful!!! you write very well

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ramanirani

@ramanirani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

it was amazing yar...
the way you handle it was superb,,,,,,,,,,,,,
continue soon ...
cant wait for the next update...

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Wow... Fab update.. At last Virat accepted dat he loves Manvi.. The way he said Iloveyou in a flow was natural... And d way Manvi was making him feel better... loved it.. ❤️

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ash97

@ash97

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Fantastic 👍🏼 I liked the way u expressed Virat's confidence after talking to Maanvi, the dialog they shared really touching I liked it. Finally Virat understands true meaning of love❤️ not just a commitment to someone.Eager to see him bak wiz Manvi.Continue soon thx 4 PM me😊

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Nisha

@nisha33

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

hun

so i started reading this and fell in love with it...

i follow like 4-5 FFs in IF.. i'm pretty inconsistent with comments and all...

i have to admit that after the first part itself your FF got me hooked and i'm definitely going to follow it...

i read the latest update too... goshhh i was awwing the entire time!!

please update soon!!

btw i read your FF sachha pyaar too.. i haven't finished reading it... i have like the last few updates remaining and i intend to finish reading it tonight... you are a great writer and pretty creative too!!!! keep up the good work dear...