SS:ARJUN PROMISE..i m always with u riya*Completed* - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

nice update... Arjun nd his attitude uff... bechara Chotu... update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
now comissioner movrs toward riya n aks-
how r u riys
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R-i m fine uncle but en sab ki kya jarorut the
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(look in arjun direction making angry face at the same arjun also looks with cross folding his hand)
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i meen chotu to tha na muje protect karane ke liye,
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com-no riya arjun tumhari achhe se care n protection ker sakta hai,
or vase bhi meine tumhare father se promise kiya tha,
so i hop u understand ,
riya nodded in positive,
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com-ab mujhe chalana chaheye,i very well known after ur parents,
ager tumhara koe khayal rakh sakta hai,
to vo arjun hai

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(riya not understand hidden meaning of commisioner uncle,ophs riya kya app bhi to nahi samajh paye,age pado abhi samajh aa jayega)
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commitioner goes near to arjun n says very low voice,
that only arjun his hear what he said,
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Co-wel gud luck mr rawte,
i whish ke tum apna promise achhe se pura kar pao,
or haan apna or apni riya ka khayal rakhana,
anyway tum riya ko bata kyuin nahi date ki tum he usake ...
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A-abhi nahi sir but bahut jald,
jab mein us sikander ko apani riya ke life se dur ker duinga,
ager meine abhi use bata diya ke mein he uska surya huin to,
shayad mein use ache se protect na ker payon or mujhe us sikander se ,
rathor sir or roshani maa ke death ka badala bhi lena hai,
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ager mujhe kuch ho gaya to,
kam se kam riya ko es baat ka paata to nahi hoga,
or mujhe kuch ho jane per ,
use koe takleef bhi nahi hoge,
mein janata huin parents ko khona,or unake bina jina kya hota hai,kyunki mein bhi ek ananth huin,
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ager sameer sir mujhe bachpan mein apane sath nahi laye hote to...
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ophs sorry sir mein bhi apko apni baton se bor karne laga,
n dont warry mein apni riya ko ,i meen riya ko kuch nahi hone dunga.
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trio-ye acp or commissioner ke bich kon se batain chal rahi hai,
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R-hamein kya karna, chalo apne kamre me


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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
after commissioner leaving

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trio goes to riya's room

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(arjun+writer's pov-
I kno u all r confuse ,so plz dont confuse,
vo kya hai na hamara ye hitler,sadu acp
riya ko bachpan se janata hai
or riya se pyar kerta hai,or riya bhi bachpan mein usase bahut pyar karte the,per ab kerti hai ya nahi???
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or abhi vo riya se apani sachaye es liye chupa raha hai,
ager kuch ho jaye to ,
kam se kam riya ko usake jsne se koe takleef nahi hogi,
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thats the main reason of his rude behaviour)

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ajun instruct to shree chek security system,n chemra's ,
shree nodded n goes to chek,
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n arjun goes his room for freshnap
(Usane socha bhi nahi hoga ke ab usake sath kya hone vala hai)
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after taking hot bath,arjun comes out his bathroom,he wrepped only tawal arround her waist,the upper part of his body is exposed,
his wet broad chest,n six peck(loll Jo imagine ker sakte ho ker lo) ,
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he looks to hot n sexy,
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arjun goes to near the mirror n wiped his hair with other tawals ,
he took his pent n wear it ,
now he took his fav red shirt, jaise he arjun apne shirt pehane vala tha,
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someone nok in the door,he think it culd be shree,
but no ,vo shree nahi balki...
PRECAPE-CHALO ACP ARJUN KO DARANE VALA BHI PAIDA HO GAYA, NAHI SAMJHE,
TO AB SAMAJH JAO----
1RIYA BLACKMAIL ARJUN
2ARJUN HV NO OTHER OPTION,
3RIYA SAYS ARJUN ONLY ONE CONDITION I LEAV ,TUMHEN MERA BF BANANA HOGA
A-WHATT!'!!
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PLZ LEAV UR COMMENT N HIT LIKE BUTTEN IF U REALY WANA TO NEXT PART,HOPE U LIKE ,N PLZ U CAN GIV UR SUGGESTON ALSO




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Note-sorry fr for pm na kane ke liye,actualy i m not feeling well,
n sorry ager apane udate se bor kiya ho
Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
superb update :) loved it
poor chotu 😆
so arjun knows riya since childhood and he also loves her 😃 so cute
hope he kills sikander soon
eagerly waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Awww how sweet 😊 Arjun knows Riya since childhood!!! Thts soo cute!! I loved the little scene between Arjun and Chotu 😛 Tht was too cute and funny!! Poor Chotu though, what will happen to him 😉 I loved the update can't wait for the next one 😊 The precap was interesting...I wonder who was at the door 👍🏼
Edited by arnavkhushi1206 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Nyc update dear..
get well soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
awesome update.. arjun loves riya nd he is surya for hr.. hope k riya ko b bta chal jaye.. wow.. waitng for nxt part.. riya blackmailing arjun... continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Think it's riya on the door waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
nice!! so arjun knows her from childhood!!

hahhaaha.. how did she scare him?? update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: aroojarain


oh wow!! gr8 updates... poor chotu ab bicharey ka kia haal hoga...:p lovd it... continue soon :)


Thanksss for sweet n lvly comment n i will try

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