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Geeta

@Geeta.R

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

A great update dear, please continue soon x

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fasiha

@fasiha_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow it was amazing

bechari riya dar gayi shree ko aur arjun ko dekar ke

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: srividhya68
Riya darr gayiii...
Update soon dear...

Thanks for commenting

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: fatima15
the update was hilarious😆loved it
arjun scared her😆poor girl
can't wait to read more
thanks for the PM
update soon

Thanksss dr for such a sweet n lvly comment ,n i will try to update soon,hop u like next to

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: arnavkhushi1206
ROFL!!!!! This update was damn funny yaar! I couldn't stop laughing!!! I love how Riya thought Arjun was a bhoot and he drank blood!!!! 😛Lol!! Too good yaar!! 😛 I can't wait for the next update and see how Chotu's reaction to this will be lyk!!!! 😆 I'm sure it's gonna be hilarious!!! Can't wait till you update again 😊

Hhhaaahhhaaa thanksss yr fo such a sweet n lvly comment, n thank for liking ,es part ko update karane se pehale maine many times socha,pata nahi kise ko pasand ayega ki nahi,
n hop chotu seq vala part be pasand aye,anyway i m tring my best,ONCE again thankkk

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: fasiha_rocks
wow it was amazing
bechari riya dar gayi shree ko aur arjun ko dekar ke

Thankkk dr for commenting
n
acp arjun ko darana etna asan nahiii

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Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

I read them all in one go... Amazing dear.
Continue soon and thanks for the PM.

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

**CHAPTER-3**
"OOF YE ARJUN N USAKI CLASS"

SCENCE-Chotu talking about arjun ,but arjun standing his behind n hear everything,
.
R-kuch bolane se pehale yeh to dekhlo chotu tumhare ass pass kon khada hai,
.
Ch-what ri tum kahana kya chahati ho,
.
Yahi chotu ke Acp arjun shuryakant rawte ko darana or daraker bagana etna asan nahi,
.
Ch-whattt acp arjun...
(think in mind )ab ye kahan se aa gaye
.
Sh-yes acp arjun,n kya huya ,yeh muh kyuin khul gaya,
arjun sir ka nam sunate hi hava nikal gaye tumhari,
.
Chotu was in shok n sivering
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A-Tumhen kya laga tum ye bekar sa gosht ka drama karoge ,
or mein dar jayonga,
or ye kya huliya bana rakha hai tumhen dekhker to kor bacha bhi nahi darega,
.
Achhe achhe ki hava nikal jati hai mera nam sunte he,tum kya chij ho,or ye kya footbal etani jayada pasand hai,
ke apana pat bhi football bana liya,tumhari to achhe se class leni padege ,
.
Bus do din ,sirf or sirf do din,jitana fat bhara hai na sab ka sab nikal dunga.
.
All riya, mahak, chuto n stood like satue n listening all Ward what arjun has said
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Tum teeno ko kya laga ke tumhare es dramein se mein dar jaonga
,ajj tak ehsa koe nahi bana jisane mujhe daraya ho
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,or na he kabhi hoga...ab samjhe ya samjhayon
.
R-in low voice-haan tumhen kon dara sakta hai ,
jo khud etna sadu lagata hai,
.
ache khase bhut es se dar ker bhag jayenge...
.
Arjun turn toward riya-
.
A-riya tumne kuch kaha
R-vo ooo meine no no kuch bhi to nahi
.

sh-wishper-ye arjun sir bhi na ketani beautiful n sexy bhoot ko dant rahe hai...
.
ager enke samne real ke bhut bhi aa jaye ye to unako bhi nahi chudenge,
uf bechari riya ,
bhala etani beautiful girl se koe es tarah baat kerta hai
.
but it hear by arjun,
.
A-shreee kya kaha tumne,
.
sir mein to bus yahi ki...
A-sutup shree,or apani bakbas band

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

arjun again turn to riya
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A-riya mein kuch puch raha huin ,
but she is lost in somwhere,
riyaaa...
she open her eyes n looked down n making sad face n says,
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meine bataya na ke hum to bus khel rahi they,ab apko mere khelane mein bhi pro...
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arjun cut her mid n says...
not again mis riya ...
phir se jhut tumhen kya lagata hai ke mein etana bebkuf huin,
.
Ch-(wishper in mahak ears)
Ab es mein samajhane bali kon se bat hai...
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but again hear by arjun...
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now its chuto turns-
arjun turned toward chotu-
lagata hai tumhari kuch jayada he achhe se class leni padegi
but dont warry jaldy he sab shik jaoge,
.
chuto in mind-mein to gaya yr ,pata nahi es acp ne kaise sun liya..
achhe se training leker aya hai ke man ke bat kaise sun sakten hai...
A-chuto tum ye kya badbada rahe ho..
Chotu lost in his thought n not realise what he doing n says,
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vo ye sir apane kahan se training le hai,
kya training mein man ke baat padana bhi sikhaya jata hai n unknowingly rested his hand on arjun shoulder,
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Mahak n riya-ye chotu kya ker raha hai,esane to us hitlar ke kandhe per hath rakh diya,
ab ese koe nahi bacha sakta,
.
Ch-continue-jarur koe special training hogi,
jo meine mis ker de,verna
mein dikha deta us acp ko...
.
arjun control his anger n ask-verna kya dekha deate us acp ko chotu...
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vo kuch nahi sir ,vo sorry sir n imedeatly back his hand from his shoulder,
.
i m sorry sir..
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arjun-ager ye sab dubara kiya to phir dekhana.
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KYA DEKHANE KE BAT KER RAHE HO RAWTE-
A loud voice coming from behind,
it was commissioner sir,arjun goes there,
A-hellow sir
Co-hellow mr acp rawte,
i hope tumhen yahana ane mein koe problem nahi huiye hoge,
or ab jaldy se apane kam per lag jao.
A-mein bahi ker raha huin sir (looking in trio direction)
.
now comi moves toward riya n ask-kaise ho riya
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