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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jorja
Please update soon i cant wait

Sara likh rahi hoon lolll...
wait to kerna padega...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Hii back with next part or may be last hop u like...
PART=14
"Tum bhi vahi mehsoos kerti hoo , jo main phir kyun ye doori..."

SCENCE:-
IN HOSPITAL:-
arjun is inside OT
Operation is going on..
all sit outside ot..riya was in big shock ,she sits on a bench..as no sign of life left in her body..
tears makes her way on her eyes..
she remembered all the scence which she spent with him in childhood,
aal memory is hurting her lot..
choree mahak n commi stood outside ...
all just preaying to god for arjun's life..
--
After five hours ...
operation is over doctor comes out oT..
all rushed toward doc except riya she stil sitting on a bench..

Comi to doc-doc arjun..
Doc-dekhiye operation to hamne ker diya hai..but stil his condition is critical..
ghav kaphi gehara tha..or blood bhi kaphi beh gaya tha..
Choree- (together)kya hum arjun sir se mil sakte hain..
dekhiye abhi nahi abhi vo behosh hai,hamne unhen icu main shift kiya hai.. or agale24 hours hamen unhen observation mein rakhana padega..
vaise ek baat manani padegi kamal ke will power hai..
---
On the other..
riya coundnt stop herself to meet arjun,she stood n goes to meet him..
she stood outside icu she slowly touched the glass door n looked inside..
.
the room is filled with lot of mechins..arjun lying uncoinsious on the hospital bed..
his mouth is covered by oxigen mask..
his one hand injected by golucose n blood bottal ...
his face color looks pail..bez of lot of blood lose..
tears continusly comming her coil black eyes ..
her lv fighting inside with his life,
She heavily opened icu door n goes inside..
she sit near to him,took his hand on her hand
(which was injected by serinze)
Riya asani se arjun ke face per dard dekh sakti the..
she leaned near to his face n kissed her forhead..
she pressed his

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

his hand by her..n wishper slowly, bahoot dard ho raha hai,
ensabka karan main hoon,
aaj meri vakaha se..
she wiped hher tears with one hand..
she looks him constanlty..as ye last time ho..or shayad eske baad vo kabhi na mile..
.
sudenly doc comes-
are aap ander kaise aye,
dekhiye aap plz bahar jaeye..
she dont want to leav him alone but hv no choise,
she stood n turned to go..
but she felt somone hold her hand..
she turned n saw arjun holding her hand in his uncoinsious state..
she looks up in doc..with pleading eyes..
doc-ok aap yahan rook sakti hai..doc saw red color in partition n think may be she is his wife..
Doc-dont warry miss riya aapke pati ko kuch nahi hoga..
he is so luky jo aap jaisi wife mili hain..
She was confuse n shocked at the same time..
Doc looks her confused face..vo apke pati behoshi main bus aap ka naam le rahe they..lagta hai aapse bahoot pyaar kerten hain..
.
after saying this doc left..
She kissed arjun hand..n closed her eyes as she wanna to feel his pain,

she laid near to him(same bed)..
n hug him one side ..
rested her head on his shoulder..
Arjun i dont understand what i hv to do..
i cant imagine my life without u or i cant stay with u..kash vo sab nahi hota..
she hv no idea when she drifted in sleep..
--
NEXT MOR-She opened her eyes n found hersel on arjun's bed..she tightly hug him from one side..
arjun stil uncoinsious..
She get up n see last time arjun..befor leaving she again kissed his forhead..
But mahak n choree watching all from outside glass mirror ..
---
mahak wanna to stoped her but she say no..
Ma-Riya why u r doing this..i kno u lv him lot then why..?
Ri-i dont,
Ma-tum jitana bhi khud se jhiot bol lo riya per sach to ye hai..ke tum usase bahoot pyaar kerti hoon.
riya didnt say anythink n wanna to leav..
riyaa mahak (shouted )

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Riyaaa kab tak khud se jhut bologi..
tum jitana bhi bhagna chaho khud se per bhag nahi saktii..
i know u lv him lot,
saaf saaf jhalkta hai tumhari ankhon main..
tum chaho bhi to mujhsase jhoot nahi bol sakti..
riya again started wolking..
but stoped when mahak says..
Riya shayad god bhi tumhen tumhare surya se alag nahi kerna chahte,
tabhi shayad tumhari maang (partition)main uska khoon
(loll he he he i know u all wanna to laugh kuch jayada he 3 class or filmy ho gaya
🤣 )

Riya stoped ,(without turning)
she rised her one hand n toughed her partition..
at that moment she closed her eyes all flashes comes her mind like one movies..
how arjun save her ,he pushed her away n lonk knife stabed inside his stomach..
he wanna to hold her..but by mistake his hand touched her forhead..or shayad es vajah se..a long tears comes out in her eyes,
she couldnt stand there n runs outside hospital..
n goes directly her house..
kanta masi ask her ...but she didnt say any think n goes her room..
She tring to controled her tears..she goes inside her bathroom n spread water on her face..
After some time she comes out n sit on a bed..
she was thinking about him..
when mahak call n informed her..he is finaly gained consious n now out of danger..
She took long breath as she feel releaf after hearing this news..
her heart saying her just go n meet him,
but her mind stoping her,no u dont..shuttt uppp she puts her both hands on her ears..
Fb end..
---
After 12 days..
time 10 pm night..
after finishing her day's work,
she usualy goes to meet him,it was her daily routine,
she didnt miss any single day to meet him,
she goes n stood outside his room..
n watched inside from the glass door but nop no one was there..
she didnt belive n looks once again,
yes he is not there..
But hows that posible ...

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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She says herself..she looks once again for the conformation..but no one inside the room,
she imediatly opened dooe n looked inside yes he was not there,she cant belive her eyes,
she rushed toward the doctor cabine..
Doc doc..
she stopped outside doctor's cabine,
without waisting any time..
she opened door of doc cabine..
Do..o..c where..is he..vo apne room main nahi hai..She stil breathing heavily
(bez of running)
doc room no 122 ka paisents..
Doc- looked her condition..dekhiye plz caam down, n room no 122 ke paisent vo to chale gaye,
.
But kab..or kahan..?
.
Doc-dekhiye mor main he unka discharge ho gaya or vo chale gaye, mujhe laga aapko pata hoga,
.
but hows that possible doc unka to do din baad discharge hone vala tha,
.
Doc- haan per vo aaj he apna discharge le ker chale gaye,hamne unhen rokana chaha per Acp arjun maane he nahi..
keh rahe they..kise apne ko or takleef nahi dena chahata..esliye jaana jarori hai,
she couldnt hold her tears any more..its enough for break her..she comes out doc cabine..
vo mujhe jhod ker kaise jaa sakta hai,usne mujhase promise kiya tha ke vo mujhe..
Kyun nahi jaa sakta vo tumhen chod ker..tum bhi to yahi chahti the naa..
one voice comming from behind,
its was nonother then mahak..
Ab to khush ho riya finaly vo tumse door chala gaya,
Ri-Ehse kaise mujhe choot ker chala gaya..riya shouted out of her voice,
Ma-ab bahoot der ho gaye riya vo jaa chuka hai ..
vo ja chuka hai hamesha hamesha ke liye,tumne bahoot der ker di..
i know tum her raat usase milane ati the..
uske room ke bahar sari raat bina palke jhapkaye..
bus use hi dekhati rehati the,
but ?
Riya looks shokingly to mahak,
etana shocking hone ke koe jarorat nahi,
main sab janti hoon,
she runs outside the hospital..mahak wanna to stoped her but nop she dont stoped that time she wanna

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#376

To live alone for some time..
BG MUSICS-

Lafzon se jo tha pare khali paan ko bhare,
kuch to tha tere mere darmiyaan..
rishte ko kya mood doon naata ye ab tod doon..
darmiyaan darmiyaan ...

she moving on a road..
remembering her moment with arjun..finaly she shut her mind n decided to meet him..
she coose night time to meet him,bez late night no visiters aloud..she tooo special permission..
Ri-Doc plz i know its out of rule but..main use bas bahar se dekh longi,but plz doc..
finaly doc say yes..
Its her routine to visite hospital n saw him n night,
it was the first day when he opened his eyes..
i looked him outside,

benaam rista jo bechain kerta vo ho na sake jo bayan..darmiya darmiya..

i know his eyes seaching me..
but,nahi janti why i dont wanna to meet u..
--
doc instruct him to eat light food..
first time i make soup for him..
I m so happy when shree feed him soup..
(Vo whole time arjun ke sath tha..he knew riya arjun se milane ati hai,but riya give promise to shree didnt say anythink about her to arjun)
first arjun refuse to eat but shree is shree..ager soup nahi pilayega to riya use nahi chodegi..
--

oh its a special feelings these moments between us,how will i live without u..

one night she cant stoped herself ..shree is sleeping near on coach..
she heared arjun screemed ,may be he saw some horrible dream..she rushed inside,n start cressing his hair..she litle bend dowm n kissed his forhead,
she notics his lighting face,
She leaned her face near to his lips n kissed him lightly..
she notice smiles appears on arjun face,after her kissing..
--
She was lost in her thought unwhere the fact that,
one care is comming from the oppistite side..but before she notice somone pushed her away,
TBC-LAST

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago