SS:ARJUN PROMISE..i m always with u riya*Completed*

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arnavkhushi1206

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

First off I just want to say tht I am extremely srry for late comment
My exams are sneaking up on me so I was busy studying for tht
Anyways back to the update
It was fabulous lived it all
I loved riya's concern for Arjun and also her love
She denying it right now but she really really needs him and loves him
The hospital scenes were good
I can't believe Arjun left 😭 Hope he comes back soon
And Riya almost got hit by a car 😭
Update soon 😊

PS- I won't be able to comment until after the 15th of May cus of my exams so I'll read ur updates and lyk em but I won't be able to comment on them...srry

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

finaly back with last part,yes last part,hop u all enjoys this,now its time to say god bye..
hop u like end...
sorry for any error..

LAST PART----
"Kitana sataya tumhen per kya kerta..
verna mujhe pata nahi chalta ke tum kya chahti hoo.."

.
SCENCE-Riya was in shock ,
she didnt undetstand how arjun can left her alone..
.
she was lost in her own wold unwhere the fact that..
one car is coming from the opposite side..
.
but before she hits or notice somone pushed her away..
.
Riyaaa r u blind ,tumhara dhyan kahan hai,
ager tumhen kuch ho jata ho..
but she was stil her own wold..her eyes hav no emotion,which showing only blanck expression..
.
she is muttered herself somting,how how he left me,
he know very well i lv him lot then why..??.?
.
Riyaaa... mahak shouted,
she hold her shoulder n shake her body litle bit..
Riya sambhalo apne aap ko,
.
yes she is mahak,which save her..
when riya runs outside the hospital,mahak follow her,
she was know very well she was not in her sense,
Or anything she can do or happened with her in that condition..
.
she knew very well how much riya lv surya,
he is her life,
.
after her parents death ,the only person near her heart is surya..
.
n after that college incident ,
riya realised that,she cant live without him,
.
but she was angry on him,
.
Mahak again shouted her name,riyaaa..
finaly she comes out her shock..
.
tears not stoped her eyes..they made their way..
Mahakk riya soopke n hug her tightly..
mahak vo oo oo (she is soning biterly so cant speek properly) vo mujhe chhod ker chala gaya..
.
vo dobara mujhe chhod ker chala gaya,
usne phir vohi kiya jo pehale kiya tha..
.
mahak hug her tightly n console her..
.
main manati hoon ,maine bachpan (childhood)
main bhi use mujh se door jaane ke liye kaha tha..

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

Jaane ke liye kaha tha,
but i dont wanna to meant tha,
.
per vo sach main chala gaya,
ysne ek baar bhi nahi somcha ke main kaise hongi,
.
Mahak tried to console her..
ma-Riya plz controled
urself ,dekhana sab thik ho jayega,
vo bhi tujhase bahoot pyaar kerta hai riya ,
dekhana vo jald he vapise aa jayega,
Riya parted that hug n ask her ,
ager vo nahi aya mahak to,
to main kya karongii,
.
Ma-apne pyaar per bharosa rakho riya ,dekhana vo loat ker jaror ayega..
per meri ek baat samajh nahi aye jab tu ussase etana pyaar kerti hai,
to use bataya kyun nahi,
.
But riya didnt ans..
mahak ask again,
but she remain silent..
.
after few minute
Ma-riya its to late ,or raat bhi hone vali hai,
hamen gher chalna chahiye,
.
but she nodded in negative,
mujhe nahi jana mahak..
mujhe kahin nahi jaana..
.
Ma-plz riya..
she convince her ,
finaly after some time both left ..
---

SCENCE Shift-outside riya's house-
riya seems like lost in somewhere,
.
ma-riya ander chalen..
sudenly power cut ..
.
mahak-Are ye kya sirf hamare gher ke light gaye..
yahan aas pass to light aa rahi hai,
.
but hamare gher ke light kyun chali gaye..
.
lagta hai jaror es chotu ke bachhe ne bil pay nahi kiya hoga..
.
ander jaa ker eski khaber leti hoon,
But riya didnt give attention ,
her mind n heart is stil lost in arjun's memory,
.
Ander chalen mahak says again,
Riya just nodded her head,
.
but before they goes inside..
but man came there..
.
both girl gets scared his sudden apearance..
.
ha ..ha.. ha.. ha ..tum aa gaye tum aa gaye..
bhag jao bhag jao..
.
But before mahak or riya could asked ,man dissapear like a think air..
.
Mahak nerversouly..
vooo oo rii ..ri ..Ri ..ye kon tha yr,jaldy chalo ander kahin phir se aa gaya to,
.
both goes inside n stood outside the main door..
.
before they nok door opened itself.

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

With the sound..
ga..rr..r ghaa...rr..r
both scared n hold eachother hand..
mah-Riya ye humaraha he gher hai na..kahin hum hounted house main to nahi pahonch gaye..
.
Ri-just sut up mahak..ofcouse ye hamara gher hai..
kahin chotu ke bachhe ne to ye nahi kiya,
.
Ma-chotu or ye sach ,vo to ek no ka darponk hai,
how could he do this..

.
both comes inside..
there was also dark..
Mahak hold riya's hand tightly,
.
ri yahan bhi light nahi hai,
or etana scary scary kyun feel ho raha hai,
.

Ri-mahak just shut up..
masii masi ,ramo kaka ,chotu she called every one but no one answer,
ye sab kahan chale gaye..
.
Ma-Ri mujhe to dar lag raha hai,
sudenly both graze fell on stairs..
.
both stoped breathing..
one man us stood there..
his face covered with blood,
he comes down with slow steps..
.
mahak both took step back..
but riya stoped in mid..
as some flashes comes her mind..
.
what thats meens..ohh god..
Mahak shouted from behind..
riya kya ker rahi ho rok kyun gaye..
.
man stil moved toward them..riya also moved there..
n give one tight slaped on his face..
.
Arjun kahan hai,she asked
the man who act as gosht put his hand on his faced n looked riya with pupy eyes..
.
She again asked ..
shree maine kuch poocha arjun kahan hai,
.

Shree in mind- maine to pehale he kaha tha arjun sir se per..akhir her baar mujhe he kyun phasa deten hain,
.
Riya angrely looks him..
shreee where is arjun..
.
I m here arjun says from behind..
.
riya stoped breathing at that time after hearing his voice,yes he is arjun,he is here..
she closed her eyes as wanna to feel realex...
.
he again says riyaaa
(lvingly)..
she opened her eyes n turned to face him..
.
arjun stood far away with cross folding his hand across his chest..
hv big smiled on his face,
yes he is smiling that made riya more angry,

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

She is like a angry bull n arjun smiled like a red cloths that made her more angry,
.
Ri(in mind)-ek main hoon jo eske liye etani pareshan ho rahi the,
.
ro ro ker apni ankhon ke niche dark circle pad gaye,
.
yahan tak ke back ground main sad song bhi imagine ker liya,
.
or uper se arjun hass(laugh) raha hai,
how meent he( is she pissed her teeth) ..
.
on the other -
arjun knows very well she lvs him but stil hide her feeling..
.
in hospital one night he saw one scary dream n he screamed in sleeping..
.
he mutured riya's name in his dreams
.
sudenly he feel some one touched his forhead..
.
he felt some soft touched may be someone kissed there..
.
he was in half uncoinsious stage..
.
medicine has strong effect on him..
.
but he know the touched ..
he could feel her presence
.
yes he knows very well may be she is his riya..
.
his all tenstion or fear goes far away when he felt her lips touched his forhead ,
he felt relex..
.
soon he felf her lips touched his lips..
he tried his best to controled himself..
.
yes he controled himself n not respond back..
so that time riya didnt know he is his half coinsious state..

.
She sit near him holding his hand on her..
.
n with her other hand she runs her finger on his hair,
heyy arjun just relex ,
.
i m here ,mujhe kuch nahi huya hai,she again kissed his forhead,
.
or jab tak tum mere sath ho tab to mujhe kuch nahi hoga,
.
she laied next to him,
rest her head on his chest ,stil holding his hand on her,
.
arjun bus tum ek baar jaldy se thik ho jao,
ab or tumhen es tarah nahi dekh sakti,
.
tum achhe se jante ho ke tumse kitana pyar kerti hoon,
.
yes bahoot pyaar kerti hoon,
arjun heared every think what she said ..
.
one long tears fall on his eyes,
she took arjun hand near to her heart n drift in deep sleep..
.
--
arjun snapped out

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

Out his thought when he feel riya hold his hand n dragged arjun toward her room..
.
shwishper - lagata hai ab arjun sur ko koe nahi bachha sakta..
.
kya jarorat the ye sab planed banane ke,
.
directly riya se baat ker ke ye mis understanding
door nahi ker sakte the,
.
mahak crossed her hand accross her chest n say..
ohh god aaj to pakka volcano phatane valla hai,
chotu also join,
.
n says phatane vala nahi samjho phat gaya..
.
---
riyaaa ye kya ker rahi hoo..
arjun shouted but riya didnt reply she dragged arjun inside her room..
.
arjun tightly hold his shirt ,
riya kya kerne ka erada hai,
but ruya gives him her angry glare..
.
she closed door from inside,
mahak shree n chtou stood outside riya's room,
.
n attached their ears on door..
as try to heared whats going on from inside,
.
Riya start shouting on him..
What the hell u think mr acp arjun,
hiw dare u leave me,
ek baar bhi soncha mere baare main,
.
she moved toward arjun n arjun moved back..
kahan tak bhago ge mujh se bach ker ,riya showing his hand..
.
outside-they heared one sound.. charrr
Ahhh Aouchhh..nooo
.
all-ye kaise avaj the ,lagta hai riya ne kuch phaik ker mara hai..
.
haan per riya ke chilane ke avaj bhi to aa rahi the,
.
humm bechare arjun sir..
after some time..
.
are ye kya dono main se kise ke avaj nahi aa rahi..
.
After some time they heared arjun screemed Ahhh..
.
All -lagta hai arjun sir..
they all left imedeatly..
.
WHAT HAPPENED INSIDE-
.
Riya ek baar meri baat to suno..
just shut up arjun kuch maat bolana ,mera mod vakaye main bahoot kharab hai,
.
arjun stil moving back n riya forward..
.
arjun hit with bed n lost his balanced n before he fall he tried to hold riya's hand..
.

she also lost her balanced
she screamed Ahhh..
n both fall on the bed..
.
arjun lower n riya was on the top of him,

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

arjun n riya r very closed,
arjun rised his hand n touched her face..
.
Ar-riyaaa...
(he called her in very husky voice,his breath almost touching her face)
.
Ri-humm..
Ar-so u miss me,
Riya eyes get moised..one long tears fall on arjun cheeks,obiously i missed u she said in mind,
.
Arjun wiped her tears thats
comes out her coil black
eyes (using thumb)
n put the layer of hair behind her ear,
n said I m sorry riya,
.
Ri-i dont wanna ur sorry..
.
arjun slides his hand around her back n pulled her closer to him..
there lips almost touching,
thats increased her heart beat..
her eyes fixed on his lips..
(arjun noticed that n smiled)
How innocent she looks that time,
.
how cant its possible to off my eyes from her..
he slightly rub his lips by her..
.
riya tightly closed her eyes ,when she feel his lips touching her..
its creating a butterfly on her stomach,
.
she opened her eyes when she heared his voice..
so u dont wanna my sorry..
thats meen somthing esle
u wanna..
.
he picked her soft pink lips by him n wishper bw kissing,
ye chalega..
.
riya was shocked first,
she didnt respond his kissed..
After some time when he depened the kiss..
its realy tough for her to controlled herself,
.
When she respond back his kissed arjun withdrow..
she looks him with puppy eyes,
Ri-what.?(angrly)

Ar-(Inocently)kya huya riya(he smiled on her,that made her more angry)
.

Riya stil in her angry mod..
she tried to free herself from his hold n wanna to get up..
.

from this prosess by mistake she hurt arjun,

(by mistake riya apna hanth vahan rakh deti hai jana arjun ko chot lagi the loll poor
arjun )
AHhh
riya heared his screemed..
she said ohh nooo
(he he choree n mahak heared thats sound from outside)
Ri-(warried n concern)
R u alright..?
she start unbuttoning his shirt button..

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Heyy riya its ok i m fine,
but she didnt listen,
.
(in warried n innocent)she asked him-
bahoot dard ho raha hai,
she slide his shirt away from his broad chest n looked the wound,
(bandage abhi bhi bandhi the)
she slightly touched his wound,
A shiver down on arjun body not bez its paining..
but her innocent touched near his wound thats make shiver down on his body,
.
(she stil on the top of him,she lift her face up n saw he closed his eyes,she thinks may be its paining him)
.
she kissed near his wound n asked him..Abhi bhi dard ho raha hai..
Ar-humm(he lost by her kissed loll)
She again kissed n looked up..but stil arjun eyes is closed,
Riya kissed him all around his wound..n looked up but stil his eyes closed
(loll poor she he he he arjun controled karo yr)
she asked him,
Bahoot dard ho raha hai kya?
Ar-humm (lost)
she again kissed him all over his chest,
Arjun couldnt hold himself encircle her again in her arms,
riya bas ehse he kerti raho..(totaly lost)
poor she again continue to kissing him,
sudenly she felt arjun kissed her near her neck,
she lift her face up n saw his smiling face,
.
to ye sab ek natak tha she yelled,
She removed his hold n angrly getup from the bed,
.
yahan main etana dar gaye or tumhen phir se majak sujh raha hai,
.
befor she opened door,
arjun hold her hand n pushed her near the wall n block the way using his hand,
.
(his shirt button r stil opened n he is very near to her,just few milimeter apart)
.
arjun comes closer n slide his finger on her face,
.
first her forhead then her eyes then her nose n finaly his finger stoped her lips,

.
her heart gonna incresed n increaed..when he slide his finger from forhead n stoped on her lips,
.

riya start losing her controled,
but she controled herself n say chodo mujhe,
Ar-to tum mujh se door jaana chahati

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#399

Ri-haan
Ar-sonch lo,ager es baar gaya to..
before he completed riya pulled him toward her n say..
main. jaane dongi tab naa..
n claim his lips..
rubing her body to his body..
arjun aback her sudden action..
he smiled n pulled her closer to him,
he depened the kissed n moved his hand inside her tops,
riya gaspared by his touched she tightly hold his shirt,
both lost each other n kissed passionatly,
after some time they brock the kissed..
arjun stil holding near to him n toched her forhead by him(stil breathing havily)
.
Ri-mujhase door jaane ke baare main sonchana bhi maat,verna main vo vedio sab ko dikha doongi,
.
Ar-(With smiled)
so black mail hum..tumhen abhi bhi lagta hai main tumhen chood ker jaonga..
.
he comes closer to her n say ye arjun ka promise..
i m always with u riya..
ager akeen nahi hota to..
Ri-to..
He pointing toward bed..
she shly lower her graze n hit again his chest..
.
Ar-Ahhh (litle loud)
(outside they all think finaly arjun ka kamm taman ho gaya N all left imedeatly
---
after two weeks ariya got married-
.
Arjun tum aa rahe ho ya nahi..
Aya bibi,pehale ye sab mujhe choden tabhi to aa paonga,
dekho ab mujhe se or wait nahi ho raha hai,mujhe neend aa rahi hai..
she is waiting inside their bedroom..it was their first wedding night,
Riya called him n wanna to asked how much time he will take..
Ri-ager tum abhi nahi aye to main bahar aa jaongi,
ager main bahar aye to vo vedio..?
.
Arhun enters in room n closed the door..
Ar-etani desperate ho rahi ho bibi..
hum stil blackmailing..
riya blushed n shyly lower her graze..
Ar-to shru karen bibi,

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THE END-
he he ab ye mat pochana age kya huya,
Hop u guys enjoys this story,
.
alvida my first ss,
so finaly i finished here,
vedio bala raaj raaj he rehane dete hain

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago