SS:ARJUN PROMISE..i m always with u riya*Completed* - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago

SORYYY FR for such a long wait..
i will definitly update..next part tomarroww..
hop u forgive meee...
ur piyaaa...

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER=7
"kyun halky se yaden..
akser picha kerti hai..
vo pyar hai mera ager use kuch ho gaya...?
yahin. se shuro hogi ariya lv story"


precap-Arjun drop riya to her college..n riya told her
frs ..arjun is only her driver..
~~
SCENCE-after droping riya in college..
arjun left n driving his car toward riya's house..
Reminds that romentic incident..
Arjuns face stil blushing..
but he is angry on himself..
how culd he do this..
(talking to himsel n focusing his drive)
arjun how culd u do this akhir vo tumhare bare main kya sonch arhi hogi..
arjun rub his checks where riya give him one tight slap..

i kno i cross my limit but i m realy happy,she also lv me,
lot of Q running his mind,
yes she lvs me,she lvs me lot,
usaki akhon main saaf saaf dikh raha tha,
sudenly his chains of thought brook when his mobile is continuos ringing.,
he was in mid way..he got a call it was shree..
arjun stop his car in one side of the road,n picked shree call..
Ar-haan shree bole kya baat hai,
Sh-sir rr vo
arjun is very angry bez he disturb at that moment..
when he was thinking about riya,
Ar-shree ager baat nahi kerni to phone kyun kiya,
Sh-sorry sir..vo i m accutaly wanna to ask u..
aap es waqt hain kahan,
Ar-what..? tumne ye poochane ke liye mujhe phon kiya,
shree dont behaves like my wife samjhe tum ya samjhyon,
Sh-sir vo riya..
he wanna to cut shree call what stop when shree says riya's name..he sences somthing wrong his heart beet is moving faster
Sh-sir kya app riya ke sath hai..

Ar-No shree main abhi mid way main huin ,half n hours main gherpahuch jaonga..
but baat kya hai..
Sh-sir ek badi problem ho gaye hai..
Ar-What problem kon se problem.
Sh-sir vo..oo
Ar-saaf saaf bolo shree akhir baat kya hai,
Sh-sir riya ke college main kuch goans ne attack kiya hai...


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ar-what..? per kab or kaise..
jab main vahan se aya tab. to sab thik tha..
per achanak..
(His heart beat stop working after hearing this..hop she is fine..maine khud se or sameer sir se promise kiya tha ke main use kuch nahi hone dunga..
ager use kuch ho gaya to..)
~~
SOMECFlashback..
nahi main ehsa nahi ker sakta..
no u hv to do this..
per main aap dono ko chud ker nahi jaa sakta..
plz jao jao surya jao ..
promise us..
tum hamesha riya ka khayal rakhoge..
plz chodo mujhe mama papa ke pass jana haii ..jane do..chodo mujhe..surya chodo mujhe..
i hat u i hat u u kill my mom n dad..nafrat hai mujhe tumse..kabhi mere samne maat ana..chale jao mere samne se..i say leave..
ye sab tumhare vajah se huya..na tum hamari life main aayte na..ye sab hota..

~~
arjun sir arjun sir aap sun rahe hai haiii arjun sir..
haan shree bolo main. sun raha huin..(arjun comes out his flash)
~~
Ar-Haan shree bolo
Sh-sir goans ne poore college per overtake er liya hai..
or jahan tak mujhe lagta hai riya bhi college ke ander hai..
Ar-but how u kno all this..
Sh-app jald se jald gher aa jaye main sare detail aapko yahan batata hoon..
Ar-or chotu kahan hai use to riya ke saath hona chahiye tha,
Sh-sir vo riya ke sath nahi hai..
Ar-what..? what r u saying shree.
Sh-sir yahi sach hai une dono ka kuch pata nahi.
vo dono bhi gayab hai.
unka phon bhi nahi lag raha.
Ar-salf salf kaho shree tum kehna kya chahte ho..
Sh-sir aap jaldy se gher aa jaeye, i will explain u everythink.

arjun madly drive his car,
every passising minute is tough for him befor few minute everythink will be fine n now every think will be wrust n comlecated.
if anything happend to her he culdnt forgive himself.
arjun stop his car in riya's mansion's n go inside .
commisioner sir n shree already waited for him.
Ar-ye sab kab or kaise huya



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Posted: 12 years ago

SH-sir commisioner sir bhi yahan hai..
Ar-arjun taking long breath n say dont warry sir i can handle every think..
Comi-i kno arjun,main janta hoon tum sab thik ker doge..
but that time shirf riya ke life ka sawal nahi..
balki bahoot se students ke life khatre mein hai..
or..
Ar-or kya sir..
Comi-vo chahte hai hum taking a deep breath ..sultaan ko chood de..
Ar-what sultaan ko aap jante bhi hai sir aap kya kah rahe hai..
sultaan koe aam admi nahi..vo ek bahoot bada criminal hai..or sir or sir vo hi janta hai ke sikander kahan hai..
or aap janten hai sultaan ko chodane ka matlaab..riya ke sath sath na jane kitane logon ke life ko dander main dalna hai..
vo ek pagal hai..logon ko marna uska shook hai..
Com- i kno arjun but i hv no other option..sikander ke yahi demand hai ke hum..
usake bhai sultaan ko chod de..
Ar-what sikander..?
kya sikander riya ke baare main janta hai..
aap jante hai ager use pata chala ke riya use college main hai to..??
shree interept in mid dont warry sir..sikander ko es baare main kuch nahi pata..per...??
Ar-per kya shree..tumne uska phon trace kiya..
Sh-no sir pata nahi uska phon switchoff aa raha hai..
jaror un goans ne un sab ke phon le liye honge..
Ar-(in mind)Offf ager uska phon thik hota ho shayad uske baare main kuch info mil jate..but its all bez my short temper..gusse main i through her mobile..arjun fustrated moves his finger on his hair..
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Tumhari himmat kaise huye mujhe apna driver kehane ke..he angrily hold his hand n dragged her in one cornner...
Ahhh leav me u heart me..
just sut up just sut ur mouth ek or labj nahi..
T.B.C-
precape-1-arjun remind that incident...that happend bw ariya..in riya college

2-Goans feet bombs in all places in college..n giv only one hours to full fell his demand..
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sorry if i bore..hop u like ..
..ur piya

Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...do continue soon and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di fab..
oh no!!
hope everything gonna fine soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice
oops everybody is in danger now, college students, riya, chotu, mahek
hope arjun ll save them all
wanna know what happened in riya's college
how he came to know riya loves him
& ariya's past, how her parents died & why she is angry on surya
eagerly w8ing 4 next update
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...!
riya in trouble and arjun in tension...lakin jab arjun ho to tension kyun??
waiting to know how arjun saves Riya,chotu and mahek...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice.thanx fr pm me.cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh so now riya is in danger
keep updating and thanx for pm

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