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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant update piya🤗...so sorry late cmnt ke liye...u know i luv ur work plz forgive me...n ye goons ne riya ka clg hijack kar liya just save her...n what about the precap is so inresting...update sson
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: life93

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">brilliant update piya🤗...so sorry late cmnt ke liye...u know i luv ur work plz forgive me...n ye goons ne riya ka clg hijack kar liya just save her...n what about the precap is so inresting...update sson</font>


Ohh so sweet but its ok dr n dont say sorry..
its most importent u like my story..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: madmadona

update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I will tryyy my dr frs...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: madmadona

surya is arjun
she called him surya in her childhood


Ohhh u stilll rememeber..
yes u Right dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART=8 "Tumhen aaj bhi mujh se pyaar haii.."
SCENCE-FLASHBACK-CONTI.. tumhari himmat kaise huye mujhe aapna driver kehane ki,arjun dragged riya in one corrner,
Ri-Ahh u hearting me,
Ar-just shut up ,just shut ur mouth,bus ab ek or labj nahi, tum samajhati kya ho aapne aap ko,
(arjun angrly look in her eyes)
Ri-chodo mujhe tumhari himmat kaise huye mujhe pakadne ke,chudo mujhe verna.?
Ar-verna kya ker lo gi,tumhari problem kya hai, i m here just bez of u ur protection...or tum ho, hud hoti hai makaj ke her baar majak achha nahi,miss riya rathore,
Ri-ohh u came here just bez of me,i dont want anyone..yes i dont want to need anyone..its my life n its my problem,
Ar-nooo
(shouted n tightend his greep)
itsss not only ur problem,samjhe ya samjhayon,
Ri-who the hell r u,u dont hav a write to decide ,
what we hv to do or not..got it,
u not my family member not even my bf,n i dont want any type of sampathi,so just stay away from me,
i hate those man,jo hamesha ye jatane ke koshish kerten hain,
ke unhen meri phiker hai,ayten hain or apni sympathi dekha ker chale jaaten hai,nahi chahiye mujhe kise ke sim,.
before she completed arjun pulled her closer,n capture her soft lips by his lips..
she wanna to push him but arjun tightend his grip,n pulled her evenmore closer.. .
He force fully kissed her,he is angry on her when she say,he is noghting of her..
he wanna to prove her is is not here just bez of sampathi,
he is here just bez he lvs her , she was stund by arjun's action,
She pushed him away n shouted,how dare u trying to kiss me,
it made arjun more angly n all limit r brock when she says she lvs somone else..
Ri-how dare u kiss me..u dont hav a right to kiss me.
arjun grabbed her by her arms n brought very closed to him n spoke angrly to her
Ar-why?


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

i hv a right to kiss u bez i lv u dammit i lv u..
sunna tumne..
i lv u,
Ri-but i dont ,i dont lv u i cant think even in my dreams,
Arjun hold her angry why u dont lv me, u dont lv me..
noo tum jhoot bol rahi ho,
tumne to kya tha tum hamesha muhse pyaar karogi..
Ri-when i told u i lv u,i lv only my surya..samjhe tum
riya tring to remove his grip
suddenly her phon started ringing..
it was mahak phone..
she tring to pickup but arjun sneched her phon n angrly thought on the ground..
Ar-What u lv somone esle ,how could u do this..
arjun was deeply heart by riya's word how could she easly say she lvs somone else,
he leaned n again capture her lips,
he held riya by her waist n kissed her fiercely ,bitting sucking,and punishing her..
how culd she say she not lv him..
riya tried struggling but arjun is arjun ...he tightend his grip more n more..
he itsself dont know what are he doing..
arjun kissed her but dont know when his desire took over him,
he sucking her ,biting her lower lips..
riya moaned in pain..she trying her best to push him away but fail..
she didnt kniw why she melting by his touch,
why she feel so week..
his pressence always effecting her but why...
her one heart of side wanna to kiss him back..wanna to lost her kiss but her other part of heart say no ..u dont betray ur lv to surya..
u promise him u always lv her...then how could u kiss arjun,
arjun felt her pain but not stop to bits her lips..
how could she says she lvs somone else,yes she lvs somone else..
wait wait wait kya usne kaha she lvs surya what..?
thats means.
he brock the kiss n looked her with puppy eyes,
n start smiling on her,
Riya very angly on arjun n even he smiles on her,
arjun sense her anger,
Ar-Riya vo main,
before he say more,
riya giv one tight slap,
how dare u kiss me again,
she pushed arjun




Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

How dare u kiss me..
tum yahan meri protection ke liye aye ho,thats not a meen u kiss me..
as i say before i lv surya..
ek baar or last time tumhen phir se bata rahi hoon..
no acctualy samjha rahi hoon,
tumhari he languge main,
main bachan se le ker aaj tak ager kisse se pyaar kiya hai to vo surya hai..
samjhe tum ya samjhayon..
she tured other side n mumered under her breath..
Or jitana maine tumse pyaar kiya surya..usase kaye jayada tumse nafrat kerti hoon..or kerti rahoongi..
n runs there,
she lvs me..she stil lvs me..
arjun wanna to clear everything..but stop himsefl n moved her hand on his hears..n smiles,
koe baat nahi tumhen to main mana he longa..riya but that time tumhari protection or us sikander ko pakadana mere liye jayada im portent hai..
he drive his car back to her place,
flash back end
~~
Shree-sur r u sure aap vahan akele jayenge..
Ar-yes ..or main koe chance nahi le sakta,
tumhen bas etana kerna hai ,jisase unka focus meri taraf na jaye..oh haan chotu or mahak ka kuch pata chala..
sh-no sir main undono ka phon track kerne ke koshish ker raha hoon,per phon switchoff hai,koe phayada nahi sir..
Ar-ok tum on line rehana or jo bhi info milati hai,mujhe batana..
Shr-sir..
Ar-haan shree
sh-take care sir..n plz save all..we hav only one hours..unhone sab jagah bomb plant kiye honge..
Ar-ok i hv to go..
arjun stood backside area of college,
arjun look her watch n rest timer of one hours..
Before going inside he slide his hand on pokket n took his wollet,
there is one pic..it was riya n arjun childhood pic..
n kissed there n say..
main tumhen kuch nahi hone doonga riya kuch nahi..
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on the other riya hide herself in chemisry lab,
when arjun kissed her she was very upset n run there n goes directly in lab to meet mahak..but she was not there,
TBC-------------------



Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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PART=9
"I will save u.."


SCENCE-
Riya goes in chenstry lab..just wanna to meet mahak that time..but mahak was not there,
she wanna to call her ..
Ri-ohh god my phon us arjun ke bachhe ne mera phon thod diya..
jaise he vo lab se bahar jaane lagti hai..she hear gun sound n here goans convo..
one goans to other-poore collage ko gher lo or dekho koe bhi bach ker na jaaye paye,Sikander ka order hai hamen sultan ko kaise bhi kerke aaj chudana hoga..
Riya heared their coversation n find somthing wearied ,she hide herself in. a lab..till if didnt got any safe exit..
(poora half hours ho chuka tha goans ko college per kabja kiye)
pollice force r stood outside college..
N waiting for goans reaply..
Comi-(on mike) dekho jo log jo kuch ker rahe ho vo thik nahi hai,masoom bachhon ko kaid kerake..tum logon ko kya hasil hoga..
One goana shouted on his mike..ohh commissoner lagta hai tera dimag thik nahi hai..
ager mujhe gussa dilaya..to en bachhon ke moot ke jimedar tum hoge,
behater hoga hamari demand poori ker do, verna..??
he laughed ha hhaaa...
tumhare pass sirf ek hours hai..ek hours baad meri
ungali es remote per or boom... ye poori building..dammake main udd jayegi..
it was arjun's plane..just focus goans mind in here..
On the other..
(Arjun rop ke sahare college building main upper chadane ke koshish kerta hai)
sh-sir aap kahan tak pahonche..
shree bus main upper pahonchane vala hoon..
ohhh unfortunatly arjun's mike fall on the ground..
Sh-arjun sur sirrr aap thik to ho na..
Comi-kya hooya shree ,
sir we lost connection..arjun sir se connection nahi ho paa raha hai..shayad..
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Finaly arjun reach the taries, he found no one was there..
he took step down ..looking here n there..
Ohh god shree se connection bhi toot gaya..mare pass ab thoda he time hai..


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Arjun talk to himself..
mujhe nichhe jaana hoga.
or jaker dekhana hoga vahan kya chal raha hai..
on the other--
riya look outside the lab..
Lagta hai yaha koe nahi,
mujhe mahak baki logon ke help kerni hogi,pata nahi vo log kiss haal main hongi,
Hann mujhe yahan se kise tarah bahar jaa ker pollish ko inform kerna hoga,
she hits her head ,main bhi kitani badi bekuf hoon,polish ko to pata hoga..
she tightly hold her bag n took step outside..
(vo corridoor ke taraf age badti hai..or dekhati hai two goans haanth main gun liye use tarf aa rahe hai..)
fearly she screemed n goans hear her sound but not saw her face,
Go-ye chhilane ke aavaj kahan se aye..
chalo jaldy jaker dekhate hai..
she runs n wanna to hide her somwhere but couldnot found any perticuler place..
(riya dusare corridoor ke tarf bhagi hai,per vahan se bhi kuch goans aa rahe hote hai)
she was totaly confused n scared now what she do..suddenly she somone hold her hand n pulled her imside one room..before she shout man put his hand on her mouth..she fearly looks in his face but his face is covered..she trying her best to free herself..
man slowly remove her mask n leand his face closer to her ears n wishper its me riya..arjun just come down..
she wanna to cry that time..
Arjun stil put his hand on her mouth..she signal to remove his hand..
arjun slowly remove his hand..sje tightly hug arjun,
as she feel safe place to hide herself..
riya hid her face in arjun chest..She took longs breath..her heart beat is stil ubnornal..arjun hug her back n consol her..
hey dont warry main hoon na,no one gonna hurm u..
just relex just, come down,
Arjun parted that hug n cubbed her face r u all right..
she just nodded her head,
arjun wiped her tears n kissed her forhead
(loll arjun ko kiss nahi kerna chahiye tha)
riya pulled arjun ...



Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Away n shouted..tumne phir mujhe kiss kiya..
before arjun stop her to shout its already late..
goana here her voice..
Go-Ladki ke chikhane ke avaj es kamre se aa rahi hai..
arjun hav now no other option he pulled riya toward him,n again picked her lips,n kissed her very softly..
riya manage to wishper r u gonna mad..goans yahi aa rahen hai or tum..
Arjun pulled her even more closer n kissed her madly..
shudenly door opened n two gonnas enter with their gun,
(goans dekhate hai ladka ladki ko kiss ker raha hai)
go-band karo ek doosare ko kiss kerna..ye kya chal raha hai yaha,
arjun pretend as he didnt kno who they r..
ar-tum log kon ab kya college principal ne gard tanat ker diye hai..
tum logon ko dikh nahi raha..main apni gf ke sath yaha..kuch time spent ker raha hoon..
Go-bachho bahoot time spent ker liye ab chalo..
haan le chalon dono ko jahan baki student hai..
(arjun just wanna to conform undono ko pakade kitane goans aye hai..vo sirf do they..)
before goans culd understant arjun,
giv one tight punch to one goans n kick to other..
arjun's one punch n one kick..
both goans fall on the ground,
riya was hell shocked n watched arjun with oppen mouth..
Ar-ab ye moh khol ker kya dekh rahi ho ek or kiss chahiye..
riya imedeatly closed her mouth using her hand n nodded her head in negative..
arjun could help just smiles on her innocent acts..
Arjun -riya dont move here n hv to go n save other student..
Ri-no arjun main bhi tumhare sath chalongi..
Ar-maine kaha na tum yahin rahogi or mare pass jayada time nahi hai..
balki students ke jaan khatare main hai,
Arjun take riya's promise n moves toward corridoor ..
jahan per baki students ko raha gaya tha..but he heared one sound it was comming from basement..
Arjun carefuly moved there,
n slowly opened door..
he fell one power ful




Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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