Maaneet ff: My life's mistakes--(ON HOLD) - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
i cant believe this... MAAN SINGH KURRANA... Coming with us to a parlor... but why do I feel so shy????? I wonder if he is waiting outside??? He did say so that he would come everywhere with me... But never thought he would come here... Anyway Sam Di told me this was the best parlor here... And I've been sitting here for the past 3 hrs... These women are polishing and doing things to me that is giving me too much pain... Chi chi babaji... Dont these girls have any shame... I wondered as I sat on a chair and a lady started removing my eye brows... Bachalene babaji I was praying as these women did things I would prefer not telling aloud... After all this I was told that I'm all done with... I dressed up and left the parlor as fast as I could... I saw Maanji sitting uncomfortably outside the parlor... But when I called him he kept staring at me weirdly... Sam Di also came there and appriciated the way I looked but this man kept looking at me... But I dont know why I feel so shy... All of us left the mall... But all the way so many people kept staring at me and Maan ji... He was holding me by my waist and pushing me to move faster... Babaji.. He is such a dusht danav... I coulnt even crib infront of all these people...
what the hell... I felt like shouting... I just couldnt let her go alone... I was worried... What if like last time she gets into trouble... Si I also accompanied them to that parlor... That was the worst mistake I ever did...I waited for nearly 4 hours but when I saw her... I just couldnt think anything more... She always looked beautiful but now she looked breathtakingly beautiful... I kept ogling her... Lucky tat no one saw me drooling... I managed to hold myself when I heard Sam talking... God... I'm losing it... How could I always think something like this abt her??? I have never felt this uncontrollable attraction even for Sam... I really dont know what the hell is happening to me... But the worst was what I felt when other men gave her appreciated looks... I felt anger no rage coarse through my veins... I felt like pounding each and every guy looking at geet and felt like yelling at them that she was MINE... Only MINE... But again I had to control but did hold her close to me... Just to satisfy tat animal inside... Which till today I dint know exsisted... What is this girl doing to me... I wondered as we sat inside the car and made our way home...
tho kahan Jane wale ho??? asked Sam attracting my attention to their talking
pata nahi Di... Maanji ne kaha ki wo layenge... she replied confidently...
mujhe ek admi pata hai... Maan if u want... I could get him to come for teaching Geetshe offered... But before I could say anything

arrey yeh tho accha hai na... she chirped... Making me shake my head... This girl... How can she trust this woman so much?????
anjan admi se padne se accha hai... Kyu Maanji??? AAP. Ka kya khayal hai????she askzed me...as though I had any say here... I signed and said ok... but I decided to get this guy checked... We reached home after dropping Sam...
life seemed to move on for the Kurranas... Samira introduced Geet's tutor Ronith Gujral... He was Sam's friend and both of them hit it off immediately, making Maan insecure... But then he let it be...
Things have changed so much now... Geet's entry has made a house into home and Maan'S entry in her life had made her confident... Today Geet was 19 years... Doing her third year in B.Com along with that she had completed her C.A inter and is waiting for her results... Ronith was no more her teacher... He was a very good friend making Maan burn with jelousy... But till now Geet was still tat small girl for him... Their relationship never grew from that stage... Geet still respected Maan a lot and Maan found himself losing in front of Geet... Samira was welcomed into the family and Maan too was comfortable with her... Geet adorned Sam whereas Sam treated more to say pampered and spoilt Geet...if heaven exsisted.. It was here, in Kurrana mansion... Happiness and peace along with the aroma of aloo paratha filled the air of the mansion... House... Home of the now happy and whole Kurranas.. Much to the happiness of Nakul kaka...
but as people say... Nothing is permanent... This was just the calm before the storm... The day before a long night... The light before the tunnel...

PRECAP: 19 yr still innocent Geet... 29 yr old insecure and confused Maan... The story from then on... The story will move fast from here...

thanku for the wait... I'll not be regular for now... Will update after may end properly..
have exams...
do like and comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres
me first😃
such a happy part...
wat storm is gonna come????
is sam plying wid geet...
continue soon...
Edited by sri91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10
nice part dear...
Geet is so innocent...
storm?
what?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago


precap is scaring me...

update was awesome...

Geet is learning city life...Ronith is new entry...

is this all Sameera's planning to make Maan-Geet separate by creating misunderstanding between them...if Sameera suggested and Geet also supported for Sameera's friend as English teacher then also Maan could have said no...Geet would not dare to go against his decision then why he is oblidging all Sameera and Geet's decisions if he don't like...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

yaar agar time kum hai so u don't have to reply to our comments...u can just give updates...😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update yar
but lots and lots of suspense...
luv geet
so innocent
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
calm before storm!!!!!!!
is sam playing with geet???
like is not working...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
loved it...
thanx 4 d pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz plz is ff me sameera ka khel jaldi khatam karna i dont want her between maaneet ...atleast geet ko to bata do samera ka asli rang
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz is ff ki to kam se kam happy ending do
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Posted: 12 years ago
add me to ur pm list
update and pm me too dear

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