Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: roseycheek
Wonderful FF! wonder whats Arnav going to do once he figure out where his khushi is and how is Khushi going to react??

Yes, how will he react? Lets wait and see ;)

Thank you RC :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: brinny
Came across your FF today. It was recommended by Kalyani.
Couldnt stop reading. Wonderful writing.

Thank you Brinny :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: angeldream14
loved it

i read it in one go

everyone is hiding something or the other

khushi wants to hurt him but in reality she wishes that maybe he to misses her like she does

Payal is pretty strong

i like the khushi who is independent n strong

misunderstanding can complicate life he had many ways to find outt ruth but he didn't so now he has to bear the burns

Welcome on board Angeldream14 :)

And Thank you for your comment. You are right about everything...sometimes we make things too complicated than it needs to be...and end up losing out on so much. Add to that misunderstanding and egos, life is bound to be affected...

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utopia13

@utopia13

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

thoroughly enjoying your ff.. 👏.can never have enough of arshi stories! read all parts in one go and just dying to read the next update.

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

lpve the updates..

so finally they are gnna meet..

yay !!!!

was online from phone so cudnt cmment..

but promise to dod o evrytime..

just make the update soon

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

loving the updates..

finally i guess arnav will meet khushi !!!

hpe everyrhings fine between the 2 !!!

please update soon ..

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

Well let me start by saying Kalyani sent me here, and saying that, I feel extremely lucky to have read this story before it ended.

I cannot believe that this story was hiding from me all this time. I cried, I laughed, I went back and read it a couple of times, yet I am still not finished reading it. I must tell you, this story is worth every single praise that you have received. And I bet, it is a lot!

You have easily weaved the redemption series with your own twisted fairytale. You threw those specific moments to the readers that we have easily taken for granted; calling it love. Those hopeless nights where Khushi was left out shivering in the cold, those haunted memories of Shyam and Khushi that fell in Arnav's eyes, or the aftermath of the broken family, we took it all in and accepted it well when Arnav said sorry.

But the reality is far from just a 'sorry', isn't it? This story is showing me how shattered and worthless one feels when they get treated like dirt. The thing that hurts me the most was that even today, after all the pain and heartbreaks, I still feel that Arnav is not satisfied thinking Khushi was not involved with Shyam. He seems too eager to hear that from Khushi's mouth, rather than trusting his love and believing in her.

There's so many secrets n this household, and I want to put them together and make them talk. We have Anjali and Ved on one side, and then, Aakash on the other, then we have Payal alone and isolated who is the only one Khushi has communicated with. I wonder if Khushi would be the same if she finds out about Ved's affair with Anjali. But even then, it is shown that someone has been cashing amount out of Anajli's card. Would it be safe to assume that Khushi is taking the money out? But I see Khushi as a strong independent woman, and it is highly unlikely for her to do so.

I didn't want to talk much about Arnav, because I have not fully understood him. He acts irrationally, and plays blame card others very quickly. He wants Khushi, but I am not sure if he fully trusts her. He is friends with Lavanya, which is not a bad thing, but the catch is that she still likes him, and he is aware of that. He calls himself a husband, yet he does not correct Lavanya's feelings and tell her where she stands in his life.

I am surprised with Anjali and Dadi willing for Arnav's second marriage with Lavanya. I can't wrap my head around that picture, especially Dadi's. Anjali might have felt guilty for Khushi's forced elope and took the entire blame on herself, hence trying to give Khushi a chance to live freely by removing Arnav out of the picture.

Even if Khushi was to come back, would she be able to trust Arnav?

ps. I know you said about pm-ing only to those who have commented in the last two updates, but since I am new here, do I get a break with that? ;) Please do pm me with the updates

Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago

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ocean28

@ocean28

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

I just came across your off and I am amazed at how well you have weaved the story. The characters have retained their basic essentials and yet they still remain a mystery. Except for arnav , all remain an enigma. I wished the show had just interesting scenarios and strong characters. I simply enjoyed your story. Waiting in great anticipation in reading more.

Thank you.

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

Such an amazing story. Cannot wait to read more. Please when are you updating? You are a truly fabulous story-teller...and have a great way with words. Write soon!

Anupama

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: utopia13
thoroughly enjoying your ff.. 👏.can never have enough of arshi stories! read all parts in one go and just dying to read the next update.

Thank you Utopia.

Will update soon :)

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