Originally posted by: gifttag
I stumbled accross this amazing FF while roaming on the forum aimlessly to look for Arhi stories to read and I hit the jackpot.
You have created a work of art at times a had to read twice to connect as the plot was't kept simple it was just the way i like complicated plot and you brilliantly took up past and present events simultaneously. Characterisation is absolute dream, most of them has a shade of grey to them and they are not conventional eighter, Emotioal scenes actually brought tears to eyes as it touched my heart, at times at felt for Khushi's, Arnav's, patal's, Anjali's and Akash's pain.
You are a very talented writer with brilliant imagination and you have such way with words. The story is very exciting and you can't make a intelligent guesses as story is not predictable at all.
We have come to the point where looks like Arnav and Khushi will come face to face and it would be interesting to see if Khushi's dark side will come in play as Khushi herself said that she is getting to know her dark side or was it just brave words ...we know she has come a long way and she is not the same girl who was blackmailed into marriage and went through very painful experiences which are not very easy to get over and Arnav I think now wants a second chance with her...will she give him that chance? There are still lots of people's intentions are not clear such as Lavanya and Akash was supposed to look for Khushi but he knew all along where she was so why did he not do anything and why did he waited uptill now to give clues to Arnav.
I will be waiting eagerly for next chapter.
Would you consider adding me to your PM list.
Thanks for writing this Faboulous story.
I don't have words... Thank you for your wonderful words of appreciation. I'm really glad to know that you enjoyed reading the FF so much and of that connect with the emotional scenes. And for accepting the narrative style the way it is...that alternates back and forth between the past and the present. I do realize it can be a tad confusing at times but I love experimenting and this was one of those things...
I'm glad you mentioned Khushi's dark side which has sort of made a fleeting appearance in the last few parts. The hurt that she carries from her own bitter experience, the past that has caged her within .strange subdued confines and exposed her to risks unimaginable...and yet at the same time provided her an opportunity to grow personally like never before...I fear may have also changed her! It is something that makes you think, in reality, is it possible to forgive? What is easier to do - forgive or to move on? She knows, as she has already stated to Ved, all the success is meaningless and perhaps fleeting if you are not with people that love you to share it with...I wonder, if this experience will change Khushi...forever! I don't know, if she can forgive him yet! And on the other hand, there is love that defies all rationale...and perhaps makes everything so much crazier and beautiful...fixes things in its own ways...lets see.
As for Aakash, I've said it along, he is not a prop in this FF as you guys have seen...why he does what he does...will be clear by the end. May be next part will give a better idea... of what makes him click.
I don't have a PM list, as I struggle to keep track of it. To make things easier, I simply PM those that have commented in the last two updates as is mentioned on the footnote after each part. Please do read.
Cheers!
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